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Dil Beparwah...Oblivious heart...Part 7

Somebody entered the Oberoi Mansion.

Virendra:Who are you?

Lakshmi was shocked to see him.

Her lips shivered:Ballu!

Rishikesh was shocked.

Balwinder:You thought that by putting me in the jail,you can live happily forever?

I won't let you live in peace after destroying my peace.

Lakshmi got scared.Rishikesh got worried.

Balwinder:We both loved each other.Right?But you insulted my love and married a richer guy.

Lakshmi:I did not marry Rishi because he is richer than you,but because he is a better guy.You know very well why I left you.

Balwinder became dull.

Rishikesh:What did you say?You both loved each other?She loved you.But you never loved her.If you had loved her,you would not have tried to molest her.Her parents did the right thing by getting you arrested.

Balwinder:You don't talk too much.You are a spineless guy who married a second hand.

Rishikesh lost his control and started punching him.

Rishikesh:How dare you call Lakshmi a second hand?

All were upset.

Lakshmi pulled away Rishikesh.

Lakshmi:Rishi,leave him.Don't touch this dirty man and make your hands dirty.

Rishikesh:How dare you call you like that?For me,you are the most pure girl in this world.

Neelam:Rishi,I can't tolerate this shameless man even for a moment.Throw him out.

Balwinder:I will go out but with Lakshmi.

He pulled Lakshmi towards him harshly.All were shocked.

Lakshmi:Leave me.

Balwinder:No.That day I lost you.I can't lose you again.I want you back.

Rishikesh:Leave her.

Balwinder smirked.

Rishikesh:I said leave her.

Balwinder:Lakshmi is mine,only mine.I will not leave her.

Lakshmi remembered the molestation she faced.She started crying and shivering due to fear.Seeing that Rishikesh could not tolerate anymore and kicked his stomach.Balwinder fell down and before Lakshmi fell down Rishikesh held her.She embraced him and cried.

Rishikesh:Nothing happened Lakshmi and I will not let anything happen.

Suddenly Balwinder ran towards Rishikesh to attack him.Rishikesh beat him.Lakshmi was scared seeing all this.Virender rang up the police.

Balwinder started punching Rishkesh.Suddenly the police men came and took Balwinder away.

Lakshmi fainted in Rishi's arm due to stress.

Rishikesh got scared.

Rishikesh:Lakshmi!

Virender:Don't worry Rishi.The poor girl got scared.That's it.We should give her strength.





 Rishi and Tanuja went to a building.It was the place where many people were kept in captive and killed by poisoning.Rishi and Tanuja imagined them getting tortured there along with others during the time of war.Tanuja got mentally affected and started having fits.She fell down.Rishi was shocked and upset.

Rishi ran towards her and sat near her.He placed her head on his lap and started caressing her emotionally.His eyes were full of tears.

 

Tumhe Dil Nisaar Karke
Tumhe Jaan Nisaar Karte
Tum Pyaar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte

He took the key from his pocket and kept it on her palm.

Ek Baar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte

She was holding it tight.Slowly she became alright,but she was still weak.Rishi carried her in his arms as she was too weak to walk.Tanuja and Rishi looked at each other emotionally.

Tumhare Saare Mousam
Na Hum Bahar Karte
Tum Pyaar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte(Bawaal).

After some time Lakshmi woke up from the sleep panting.

Rishikesh sat near her:Lakshmi!

Lakshmi:Rishi...that Balwinder....he will kidnap me and rape me.

Rishikesh cupped her face and said:Lakshmi...relax..Balwinder will not kidnap you.He has been arrested by the police again.Remember one thing.Your Rishi will never let anyone harm you.

Lakshmi became emotional.

Aasaan Nahi Hai Kehna
Tere Bina Main Reh Paunga
Sach Mein Main Mar Jaunga
Sach Mein Main Mar Jaunga

They embraced each other emotionally.

Ek Pal Ki Doori Tujhse
Nahi Main Seh Paunga
Tere Bina Rukk Jaunga
Tere Bina Rukk Jaunga Ho(Satyaprem ki katha)



In the hotel room...

Tanuja told Rishi:I am sorry for troubling you again Rishi.

Rishi felt sad.

Rishi:Don't say 'sorry'.It's not your fault that you have epilepsy. You don't worry.

Ek Baar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte

Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte
Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte


Tanuja looked at Rishi in disbelief as he was the same person who taunted her for having epilepsy.

Rishi held her shoulders and said:I am sorry for insulting you in the name of disease.Please forgive me.I will not repeat my mistake.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Aankhon Par Tumhari
Aksar Gazal Sunate
Aankhon Par Tumhari
Aksar Gazal Sunate

Rishi brought a bowl of soup and other food items for Tanuja.

She looked at them.

Tanuja:So much of food!

I can't eat this much.I don't feel like eating heavy food now.

Rishi:Then have only the soup.

He made her drink it.She enjoyed the care he was giving her.

Kitni Wafa Hain Uss Dil Mein
Har Din Tumhe Dekhate
Har Din Tumhe Dekhate



He made her lie down on the bed and covered her with the blanket.

He caressed her head with a smile.

Taarif Ham Tumhari
Yun Beshumar Karte

Rishi brought dinner inside the room and served food on her plate.

He started feeding her surprising her.

Tum Pyaar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte
Ek Baar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte(Bawaal).



Lakshmi had panic attack as she had a nightmare.

Lakshmi:Bal..Balwinder will come to take me with him.

Rishikesh was scared.He gave her medicine and calmed her down.

Lakshmi fell on his chest weeping.

Rishikesh:Lakshmi...why are you crying?

Lakshmi:I am troubling you a lot.

Rishikesh wiped her tears 

and said:Never say that you are a trouble for me.If you think that you are a trouble for me,I love you so much that you are a trouble which I like to have always with me.


Ek Ghar Naya Basa Ke
Rakh Loon Tujhe Chhupa Ke
Duniya Se Tujhe Chura Ke

Le Aaunga


They both smiled emotionally.


Chahe Zameen Utha Ke
Chahe Aasmaan Gira Ke
Sitaaron Se Tujhe Saja Ke
Le Aaunga(Satyaprem ki katha).



Rishi and Tanuja went back home.Raj and Rano welcomed them happily.

Tanuja told Rishi:I am going home to visit my parents.

Rishi:Shall I also come with you to visit your parents?

Tanuja looked at him unbelievably.

Tanuja:What?

Rishi:Last time I visited your home to keep up my image in the society.But this time I genuinely want to visit your parents.Like you respect my parents,I also respect your parents.

Tanuja smiled.




Rishi and Tanuja went to Tanuja's house.

Rishi and Bajaj were chatting.

Prerna asked Tanuja privately:Tanuja...you went with Rishi to Europe.Is there any improvement in your marriage?Is he still insulting you?

Tanuja became emotional.

Tanuja:Rishi has not accepted me as his wife.But he does not taunt me anymore.He really cares for me.

Prerna:Are you saying the truth or lying?

Tanuja:I swear Maa.I am saying the truth.Infact when I fell sick during the trip....

Prerna was shocked.

Prerna:Did you have fits there also?

Tanuja:Don't worry Maa.I am alright now.Rishi took care of me very well.I myself was surprised.I thought he would hate me again.But he comforted me.

Prerna smiled.




Rishi was sitting at the terrace.Tanuja went near him.

Tanuja:You are worried about yoir job.Right?Don't worry.Nothing will happen to your job.Because you have really worked hard.

Rishi:I am not worried now Tanuja.Because now I am a new Rishi.I don't really care about my image.

He held her closer softly and said:Because you are there with me.

Tanuja was stunned.

Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte
Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte(Bawaal).

Rishi released her from his hands and walked away.




Rishi went back to school.

He confessed to the Principal:Sir,whatever complaint you heard about me is right.I was really slack.I did not teach the students properly.You can fire me.I am willing to leave this school.A nice teacher deserves this school,not me.


Edited by jasminerahul - 3 months ago
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Ballu accusing Lakshmi of marrying a richer guy was funny, whoknew about Ballu’s status? Lol, good that Lakshmi answered him back. He callingRishi a spineless guy and Lakshmi a second hand was bad, good that Rishi beat himup. Ballu is so shameless who tried touching Lakshmi even after all this happened,does he have any self respect? Poor Lakshmi got scared, good that police took himaway. Tanu getting fits and Rishi caring for her and carrying her was sweet. RishMiscene was emotional. Rishi bringing food for Tanu, apologizing, making her drink,covering her with blanket, caressing her hair, feeding her was romantic. Loved Rishitelling Lakshmi that she is such a trouble who he will love to keep with himself.Good that Rishi wants to meet Tanuja’s parents. Rishi saying that he doesn’t caresabout his marriage and that is because she is with her was surprising. Rishi confessingto the principal was shocking. Perfect pics, waiting for next. 

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Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update 😃 very cute

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Part 7

Nice update... perfectly written 


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Part 7


Awesome Update 


I'm glad that Rishikesh was there and consoles Lakshmi

though she is still scared 

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Dil Beparwah...Oblivious heart...Part 5

 Rishikesh:Please don't feel bad. I may be misunderstanding you. But usually, newly married couples do not behave like us. Right? So I am asking you. Is it true that you are purposefully avoiding me?

Lakshmi got irritated and blasted at him:Yes. Your doubt is right. I was purposefully avoiding you at night. So that you won't even think of touching me.

Rishikesh was shocked.

Rishikesh:But...why?Why are you avoiding me? You don't like me? You told me that you were not forced to marry me. You married me willingly. Right? Then why are you keeping me at a distance?

Lakshmi:You want to know why? Then listen. I am not interested in physical relationships.

Rishikesh was shocked:But why?

Lakshmi:I am not interested in romance, family life, and having children.

Rishikesh was again shocked.

Rishikesh:Then how did you have a lover?

Lakshmi:That was a blunder. My boyfriend ditched me because I was not interested in it. Now you can also ditch me like my boyfriend ditched me.

Rishikesh's eyes became wet.

Rishikesh:We got married recently and in the initial phase of marriage itself you are asking me to divorce you.

Lakshmi felt upset.

Rishi walked out of the room.

Lakshmi cried.




Rishi told Raj about the European trip.

Rishi:Dad...please...I need money for this.

Raj:You became slack in teaching. That's why this condition came. Now to not lose the job I have to waste such a big amount. It's all your mistake.

Rishi became guilty.

Rishi:Sorry papa. But please help me. I promise you that from now onwards I will not make any mistakes.

Raj:Ok. I will give you money. But I have a demand. You have to take Tanuja with you.

Rishi was shocked:What? Why?

Raj:After marriage, you did not let her go out or take her for honeymoon. So this should be considered as a honeymoon trip also.

Rishi:How is it possible papa? This is a professional tour.

Raj:If you don't obey me, I will not give you money.

Rishi became dull.

Rishi:Ok. I will take Tanuja with me.

Raj smiled.




Lakshmi went near Rishikesh who was frustrated.

Lakshmi:Maa is calling you to have food.

Rishikesh:I don't want any food. You filled my stomach with lifelong frustration.

Lakshmi got hurt.

Lakshmi:Why?Because I refused to get intimate with you?

Rishikesh:This is normal in a married life. If our married life is not normal how can we have kids?

Lakshmi became emotional:Is married life only about physical relationships? There is nothing else in marriage? Are your parents together even after 30 years of marriage only for physical needs? Do they not expect anything else from each other?

Lakshmi walked away.

Rishikesh felt ashamed of himself.

Rishikesh:I became a bit too horny. How could I? What will be Lakshmi thinking about me? She may have thought that I married her only to spend the night with her. That's the impression I gave her about myself, Chee! She is right. A wife will expect comfort, friendship, companionship, and emotional support from her husband. I didn't even try to be a good friend. Before that, I was trying to romance her wondering why she was keeping me at a distance.





Rishi told Tanuja:Get ready. You are also coming with me to Europe.

Tanuja was surprised.

Tanuja:Really?

Rishi smiled:You are feeling happy as if it's our honeymoon trip. I am taking you only because Papa told me that if I don't take you to Europe with me, he won't give me money.

Tanuja became dull.

Tanuja visited her home.

Bajaj:Hi beta...

Tanuja:Hi Papa...

Tanuja and Bajaj hugged each other.

Bajaj:How are you beta?

Tanuja:Everything is going well papa. Rishi and I are going to Europe.

Bajaj:Wow! You both are going on honeymoon.Good.Enjoy the honeymoon.

Tanuja became dull.

Tanuja:Where is Maa?

Bajaj:She is in the puja room.

Tanuja:Ok. I will go there.

Tanuja went to the puja room. Prerna was surprised to see her.

Prerna:Tanuja!What a surprise!

Tanuja: Maa, Rishi and I are going to Europe. So I thought that before going, I would visit you and Papa and inform you both about the trip.

Prerna was excited.

Prerna:Honeymoon in Europe?Cool! Rishi has finally accepted you as your wife. I am so happy.

Tanuja became dull.

Tanuja:It's not a honeymoon trip. It's Rishi's job-oriented trip. I am just accompanying him.

Prerna was stunned.

Prerna was irritated.

Prerna:So he has not changed yet.

Tanuja lied:No Maa. Rishi has changed a lot. Even though it's not a honeymoon trip, Rishi is taking me with him to Europe.

Tanuja said in her mind:I can't tell Maa that Rishi is taking me with him only because his father forced him.

Tanuja:Trust me Maa. Everything will be alright.

Prerna smiled slightly.

Prerna and Tanuja prayed in front of the God's Idol.

Tanuja imagined holding Rishi's hands and praying.

Rishikesh went near Lakshmi. She turned off her face in anger.

Rishikesh:I know that you are angry with me and I deserve all your anger. But I have something to melt your anger.

He gave her a red rose. Her face blossomed.

Awaaz Doon Main Pukarun Tujhe
Tu Paas Aaye Mana Loon Tujhe

Rishikesh:Your mother had told me that you love roses.

Lakshmi smiled taking it from her.

Lakshmi:Thank you. I love flowers. Roses are my favorite.

Rishikesh smiled.

Behki Hawa Hai Tu Hai Khwaab Tu
Palkon Pe Rakhun Sambhalun Tujhe

Lakshmi wore a rose in her hair.

Rishikesh:You look very pretty with the red rose in your hair.

She smiled.

Awaaz Doon Main Pukarun Tujhe
Tu Paas Aaye Mana Loon Tujhe(
Satyaprem Ki Katha)

Rishi and Tanuja reached Europe.

Tanuja was excited to go out.

Tanuja:Let us start.

Rishi:Yes. But I am not interested in going out with you. So you go out alone. I will also go my way. Bye!

Rishi walked out. Tanuja became dull.



Rishi had a tough time as he was not able to understand the language of the people there. But Tanuja who went out alone explored the city and enjoyed it a lot.




The hotel room...

Tanuja:How was the day?

Rishi lied:It was fun. What about yours?

Tanuja:I enjoyed it a lot. I went to many places taking a cab. I will show the photographs and videos to you.

Tanuja showed him the videos and the photographs. Rishi felt jealous.

Rishi:You enjoyed it a lot. Can I tell you the truth? I did not enjoy it at all. I was not able to understand their accent.

Tanuja thought: At least now Rishi has started opening up to me. He told me the truth without being image-conscious. That means slowly slowly he is becoming comfortable with me.

Tanuja felt happy.

Rishi:I have a request. Can you come with me tomorrow? I need your help. I can't manage on my own.

Tanuja:Sure. Today also I wanted to go out with you. It's you who opposed it.

Rishi became dull.

Rishi:Sorry.

Tanuja smiled:No need to say 'sorry'.You called me to accompany you. That's more than enough for me.

He smiled.


Chhalak Gaye Naina
Toone Mann Bhar Diya
Mere Khali Se Dil Ko Yoon
Toone Ghar Kar Diya

Chhalak Gaye Naina
Toone Mann Bhar Diya(Bawaal)



Lakshmi smiled seeing the swing. Rishikesh went near her seeing her looking at the swing.

Rishikesh:You want to swing?

Lakshmi just smiled.

Rishikesh:You swing. I will also join you.

Lakshmi:You may be thinking how childish I am.

Rishikesh:Sometimes it's good to be childish. It will make us cuter.

She smiled.

He made her sit on the swing. Then he started pushing the swing for her.

Both Rishikesh and Lakshmi enjoyed a lot.

Behki Hawa Hai Tu Hai Khwaab Tu
Palkon Pe Rakhun Sambhalun Tujhe

Bin Tere Dil Ka Yeh Guzaara
Ab Ek Din Bhi Na Ho Sajna(
Satyaprem Ki Katha).


The next morning...

Tanuja woke up from the sleep. She looked at the sleeping Rishi.

Tanuja:Rishi looks so cute while sleeping.

Tanuja started caressing his face with love.

Mere Khali Se Dil Ko Yoon
Toone Ghar Kar Diya

Adhoori Si Raahein Milayi
Adhoori Hawayein Chalayi
Adhoori Si Baatein Banayi
Ishq Ke Silsile Ban Gaye Re



He opened his eyes. Tanuja got embarrassed.

Tanuja:I was trying to wake you up. We have to get ready and go out. Right?

Rishi:Ya...you are right. Good that you woke me up, Let me freshen up.

Rishi went to bath. Tanuja was relieved.

Tanuja:Thank God that Rishi didn't understand why I touched his face.




Rishi and Tanuja went out. To Rishi's surprise, Tanuja explained to him about every place they went.

Rishi:You have more knowledge than me about these places. How?

Tanuja:Before coming to Europe, I googled and read about these places.

Rishi smiled.

Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere

Rishi and Tanuja took videos and photographs of these places.

Ho Ankhiyan Na Roye Te
Jaage Na Soye Te
Taan Umra Jeete Rahe

Ho Ishq De Haale Se
Ishq De Pyale Se

Rishi posted everything in the WhatsApp group of the school students. The students, their parents, and the Principal smiled watching it.

They went to the area where the war took place. Tanuja explained to Rishi how the World War took place and how many lives were destroyed. Rishi became emotional imagining the world war. Tanuja's eyes got filled up with tears.

Rishi:What happened Tanuja?

Tanuja:I can't even imagine how much those people suffered during the world war.

Rishi wiped her tears.

Taan Umra Peete Rahe

Haan Main Taan Haari Re
Haari Re Haari Re
Duniya Vaari Re
Vaari Re Vaari Re

Rishi:Don't cry, Tanuja.That's past. Now we are in a peaceful space.

Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere

She nodded.

Rishi:Let me take the video.


Rishi took the video of the place and explained about the world war to the students. Then he sent the video to the students and the Principal. They got immersed in the video.



Rishi and Tanuja were enjoying.

Tanuja:Rishi...Can we take a photograph together?

Rishi:Ok.

Tanuja smiled.

Kaamil Hua Jo Dil Toone Chhua
Jo Kuchh Bhi Tha Mera Tera Hua
Tujhse Hui Shuru Yeh Dastaan
Tujhpe Khatam Hui Meri Dua

Tanuja requested a person over there to take their photograph. He took their photograph.

Adhoori Si Raatein Milayi
Adhoori Subah Sajayi
Adhoori Si Baatein Banayi
Ishq Ke Silsile Bann Gaye Re

(Credit for the edit goes to the real editor).

He:You both make a perfect couple.

Tanuja became happy while Rishi became dull.

Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere(Bawaal).



Rishikesh and Lakshmi went out. He took her to a street shop.

Rishikesh:Here we get the best pani puri.

Lakshmi smiled.

Rishikesh ordered Pani Puri.

Rishikesh:Try this. You will love it.

He fed her Pani puri.

Lakshmi:It's yummy.

After that, she started eating it crazily. Rishikesh smiled.

Haara Haara Dil Haara
Ik Baar Aake Mil Ja

Ranwan Ch Banwan Ch
Tainu Chhupawan

Rishi and Lakshmi went for a walk. They chatted while walking and enjoyed.

Koyi Mainu Na Roke

Mere Dhol Judaiyan Di
Tujhe Khabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove

Ho Tainu Kasam Khudaiyan Di
Ab Sabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove
Poora Tujhse Hove

They both had a fun bike ride.

Agg Lavan Majboori Nu
Aan Jaan Di Pasoori Nu
Zehar Bane Ek Haan Teri
Pee Jaavan Main Poori Nu

While walking Lakshmi's foot got hurt. Rishikesh made her sit. He wiped the blood drop and applied ointment there.

Agg Lavan Majboori Nu
Aan Jaan Di Pasoori Nu
Zehar Bane Ek Haan Teri
Pee Jaavan Main Poori Nu

Rishikesh and Lakshmi had fun with the balloons in the rain.

Chal Diya Dil Yeh Tere Raaste
Chahe Ho Lamhein Do Hi Pyar Ke
Saari Ki Saari Meri Yeh Wafa
Likh Di Hai Maine Tere Naam Pe

Rishikesh-Lakshmi became very close to each other.



They both were holding each other's hands and walking.

Lakshmi:I want to tell you something about my past.

Rishikesh:I already know about your past relationship. I don't want to hear anything more as I am possessive about you.

Lakshmi:But my past...

Rishikesh:Past is past. Why should we spoil our mood by talking about the past? I don't care about your past. For me, only the present matters.

Lakshmi smiled emotionally.

She thought:You are so nice, Rishi.

Aise Kaise Toone Dastak Hai Di
Mujhko Toh Ab Tujhse Fursat Nahi
Kaisa Tera Nasha Hai Chadha
Zameen Pe Kabhi Chand Pe Main Kabhi

Kabhi Dekha Hi Na Jo Nazaara

Lakshmi told him blushing:Tonight I will not sleep early. Because I want to spend time with you.

Rishikesh was surprised.

Tera Sath Dekha Maine Woh Sajna
Haara Haara Dil Haara
Tere Jaisa Nahio Milna

Ranwan Ch Banwan Ch
Tainu Chhupawan


Rishikesh:Are you Lakshmi?

Lakshmi nodded with a smile. She was shy. He smiled.

Koyi Mainu Na Roke

Aa Chale Leke Tujhe
Hai Jahan Silsile
Tu Hai Wahin Hai Teri Kami


Rishikesh:That means you accepted me as your husband?

Lakshmi blushed:Yes.

Bana De Saja De Panaah De Humein
Bana De Saja De Panaah De Humein

Agg Lavan Majboori Nu
Aan Jaan Di Pasoori Nu

Rishikesh:I am very happy Lakshmi. I love you.

Zehar Bane Ek Haan Teri
Pee Jaavan Main Poori Nu

Ranwan Ch Banwan Ch
Tainu Chhupawan


He pecked her palm in excitement. She became emotional seeing him happy.

Koyi Mainu Na Roke

Mere Dhol Judaiyan Di
Tujhe Khabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove

Ho Tainu Kasam Khudaiyan Di
Ab Sabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove

Poora Tujhse Hove
Poora Tujhse Hove





(
Satyaprem Ki Katha).

Rishikesh thought:I was right. Lakshmi was lying that she was not interested in a physical relationship. She was keeping a distance from me as there was no emotional connection between us. Now that we are close to each other, she is ready. She is lovely.

Rishikesh and Lakshmi started romancing passionately.

Suddenly she remembered something and cried abnormally.

Rishikesh was shocked.

Rishikesh:What happened Lakshmi?

Lakshmi:I am not ready. Please don't force me.

Rishikesh was shocked.


Shocking that Lakshmi told Rishijesh that she is not interested in a physical relationship. It was natural for Lakshmi to feel that Rishikesh married her only for his physical needs when she walked away. Good that he realized his mistake. Raj forces Rishi to take Tanuja to Europe to bring them closer. Surprised to see Prerish as Tanuja's parents. Good that Rishi approached Tanuja for a Europe trip. Sad that Rishi told her that he was taking her only because of his dad. Rishi's behavior towards Tanuja was so cold that he said that he didn't want to go anywhere with her. Glad that Tanuja explored Europe independently while Rishi struggled. Good that Rishi opened up with Tanuja that he didn't enjoy after seeing the pics that Tanuja took. Good that he agreed to accompany Tanuja to explore Europe.  Rishikesh gave red roses to Lakshmi and the latter's acceptance was a good sign. It seems that both couples are getting close to each other. Rishikesh tending to Lakshmi's injuries is passionate.  Lakshmi accepts Rishikesh's love was nice. It was also nice to see her accepting him as her husband. Shockingly, Lakshmi is still not ready for intimacy. The song sequences are romantic.

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Dil Beparwah...Oblivious heart...Part 6

Rishikesh and Lakshmi started romancing passionately.

Suddenly she got remembered something and cried in an abnormal way.

Rishikesh was shocked.

Rishikesh:What happened Lakshmi?

Lakshmi:I am not ready.Please don't force me.

Rishikesh was shocked.

Lakshmi cried:Please Ballu...don't force me.

Rishikesh was stunned.

Rishikesh:Ballu?Lakshmi...I am Rishi,not Ballu.

Lakshmi came back to her senses and wiped her tears.

Lakshmi:I am sorry Rishi.

Rishikesh thought:She looks so scared.Who is Ballu?How is her fear related to Ballu?

He caressed her head:It's alright Lakshmi.You take rest.

Rishikesh covered her with the blanket.





After some time....

Lakshmi went near Rishikesh.

Lakshmi:You are feeling bad.Right?

Rishikesh:Nothing like that.

Lakshmi:I can understand your feelings.But what to do?I am not able to control myself.

Her tears rolled down her cheeks.

Rishikesh:Lakshmi...don't be upset.I will wait till you get ready.

Lakshmi was silent.

Lakshmi:I told you that I wanted to tell you about my past.But you were not willing to listen.But atleast now you listen to it.I want to release the burden I am carrying in my mind.

Rishikesh:If you feel relief by sharing your past with me,you can share.Who is Ballu?Is he related to your past?

Lakshmi nodded.

Lakshmi:Ballu is Balwinder who is my ex-boy friend.

Flash back....

Balwinder and Lakshmi were happily dating each other.

Once Lakshmi visited his home.He was alone there.

Balwinder embraced Lakshmi from behind.

Lakshmi smiled at him.He carried her in his arms and walked to the bed.

Lakshmi:Ballu...what is this?Why are you taking me to the bed?

Balwinder placed her on the bed.

Balwinder:To do what lovers usually do.

He tried to kiss her sensually.Lakshmi was shocked.

Lakshmi:No Ballu..please...

Balwinder:Why Lakshmi?

Lakshmi:I am not ready Ballu.Please try to understand.

Balwinder:How can you say that?We love each other.

Lakshmi:But I can't do this now.I want to go.

Lakshmi tried to get up and go.But Balwinder pushed her to the bed.

Lakshmi got scared.

Lakshmi:Ballu!Let me go.

Balwinder did not listen to her and moved closer to her.He held her hands tight.

Lakshmi cried:Please Ballu...I am not ready.

But without listening to her,he started molesting her.Lakshmi managed to take the flower vase from the nearby table and hit his head.Lakshmi pushed him and ran out.




Present...

Rishikesh was relieved.

Rishikesh:Thank God!He could not rape you.

Lakshmi:I escaped from a brutal rape.But it's not easy for a girl like you think.Even though I was not raped I went through sexual harassment. It affected me very badly and it still haunts me.

Rishikesh became upset.

Lakshmi:My parents got Balwinder arrested.But that incident killed me mentally.I was under psychiatric treatment.Now also I have medicine secretly.

Rishikesh was shocked.

Lakshmi:I wanted to tell you this before marriage itself.But my parents did not want you to know it.Because they knew that no boy will agree to marry a psychiatric patient.

Neelam overheard it with a shock and walked away.

Lakshmi was in tears.Rishi felt sad and wiped her tears.

Rishi:It's not your fault Lakshmi.So you don't need to get upset.I am there with you.Don't be scared.Forget that devil's face.

Suddenly lights went off.Rishikesh lit the candle and went near her.

Rishikesh:This candle light replaced the darkness in this room.Like that I will replace the pain in your life with happiness.

Lakshmi looked at him emotionally.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Rishi and Tanuja were sitting in a restaurant.

Rishi was talking very friendly with Tanuja.

Main Maanun Tera Kehna Tu Jaane Re
Tu Maane Mera Kehna Main Jaanu Re
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere

Tanuja felt very happy.

Tanuja thought:Rishi was so rude to me before.But now he is very friendly with me.He is changing.I am so happy.




Rishikesh and Lakshmi went to the drawing room.

Neelam and Virendra stared at them.

Rishikesh:Maa,why did you call us here?

Neelam:I overheard your conversation with Lakshmi and came to know that she is a psychiatric patient.

Why did you and your parents betray us Lakshmi?Why did you hide this from us and marry Rishi?

Lakshmi became upset.

Lakshmi:Sorry for everything Maa.

Neelam:Can a 'sorry' erase everything?My son is living with a mad girl now.

Lakshmi burst into tears.

Rishikesh:Stop it Maa.Don't call her mad.Lakshmi is my wife.I won't let anyone insult her.

Neelam was shocked.

Rishikesh:Maa..papa..you both called her the 'Lakshmi' of the house.Is this how you treat Lakshmi?If she is mentally not fit you should care for her instead of giving her more pain.Right?

Neelam and Virendra became guilty and emotional.

Virendra:Rishi is right Neelam.If Rishi was mentally sick we would have hidden it from the girl's family to get him married.Because parents become selfish for their children.

Neelam became upset.

Neelam:I am sorry Lakshmi.For a moment I became blind and a typical mother in law.Please forgive me.

Lakshmi held her hand and said:It's ok Maa.Any mother would react the way you did.I can understand.

Neelam hugged her and cried.They all became very emotional.




Rishi and Tanuja went to Ann Frank House.

The guide explained everything.Rishi could not understand the accent.But Tanuja explained everything to him.Rishi took the video and sent it to the students.

Rishi gave a dress to Tanuja.

Tanuja was surprised.

Tanuja:Is it for me?

Rishi:Yes.

Tanuja:You really bought it for me?I can't believe it.

Rishi held her hand and said:Yes.You really helped me a lot.So you really deserve this gift from me.

Tanuja smiled.

Ho Ankhiyan Na Roye Te
Jaage Na Soye Te
Taan Umra Jeete Rahe

Ho Ishq De Haale Se
Ishq De Pyale Se

Rishi:Wear this Tanuja.

Tanuja:Yes.





Tanuja wore that dress and came.

Tanuja:How do I look in this dress Rishi?

Rishi was mesmerized by her beauty.

Rishi:You are looking very beautiful.

Tanuja blushed.

Taan Umra Peete Rahe

Haan Main Taan Haari Re
Haari Re Haari Re
Duniya Vaari Re
Vaari Re Vaari Re

He held her hand and danced.Tanuja was very surprised and happy.

Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere


(Bawaal).


Raj and Rano rang up Rishi.

Raj:We are so happy that you and Tanuja are a happy couple now.

(Thanks for the edit Salley)

Rano stood near Raj and said:You both look so beautiful together in the photographs.

Rishi was shocked.

Rishi cut the call angrily.



Rishi shouted at Tanuja:Did you sent our pictures to my parents?

Tanuja:Yes.

Rishi:Why the hell did you sent our pictures to them?

Tanuja:Those were the beautiful moments of my life.They were worried about us.So I shared those photographs to them.

Rishi:What beautiful moments?Just because I was friendly with you,you thought I started loving you?Never!Don't think like that.

Tanuja got shattered.

Tanuja blasted at him:Ok fine.Even I am not desperate to get loved by you.You got it?

Tanuja walked away.Rishi was irritated.



The next day....

Rishi went out alone.He started missing Tanuja.

Rishi:Why am I missing Tanuja?Did I start liking her?No way.I miss her only because she was with me in the last few days when I went out.

Tanuja was standing and thinking of Rishi shouting at her.She was sad.Hair strands were falling on her face because of the wind blow.Rishi went near her and moved her hair strands away from her face with a smile.Tanuja was stunned.

Tanuja thought:How come he is so sweet now?

Rishi:Only for a few more days we will be here.Can't we end this fight and be friends?

Tanuja:You forgot that you only fought with me.

Rishi:Yes.I only started the fight and I regret it now.I don't feel peaceful when I am not on talking terms with you.Please forgive me.

Slowly Tanuja smiled.He was relieved.



Rishi and Tanuja went to Arbeit  Macht Frei which is 

 the largest Nazi Concentration camp.

They know that there also many people had died and they imagined the past events which had taken place there.

From there they came to know that one person who survived the war is still alive and they went to see him.Many people were sitting around him to hear him talk.

Rishi was not able to understand his accent.

Tanuja:He says that he and his wife were put in the jail.He saus that he has never hurt his wife physically.But I could never communicate with her or spend enough time with her.Now he regrets behaving like that.He misses his wife now.By the time he realized his mistake,he had lost his wife.

All were becoming emotional hearing him talk.Rishi felt guilty and upset.

Rishi thought:I am also doing the same thing to Tanuja.

Rishi became so emotional that while listening to that person,he held Tanuja closer.

Tanuja looked at him in disbelief.Rishi came back to senses and removed his hands off her.

Rishi:Sorry.

Tanuja was confused.

She thought:What happened to Rishi?




Rishi and Tanuja went to a building.It was the place where many people were kept in captive and killed by poisoning.Rishi and Tanuja imagined them getting tortured there along with others during the time of war.Tanuja got mentally affected and started having fits.She fell down.Rishi was shocked and upset.





Somebody entered the Oberoi Mansion.

Virendra:Who are you?

Lakshmi was shocked to see him.

Her lips shivered:Ballu!

Rishikesh was shocked.

Balwinder:You thought that by putting me in the jail, you can live happily ever after?

I won't let you live in peace after destroying my peace.

Lakshmi got scared. Rishikesh got worried.


Good that Lakshmi apologized to Rishikesh and told him about her past. Ballu is so cheap that he tried to rape her. Good that Lakshmi escaped. It seems that she had a panic attack while spending time with Lakshmi. Nice to see that Rishikesh understands her. Sad that Rishi became rude to Lakshmi for sending their pics to their parents, but good they reconciled. Neelam's reaction to Lashmi's psychiatric treatment was normal, but glad that she understood Virendra's point. Good they reconciled. Shocking to see Ballu resurfacing in Lakshmi's life.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Balwinder doesn't see his crime and blames Lakshmi for leaving him. Food to see Lakshmi telling him that Rishikesh is a good guy. Nice to see the dull family standing for Lakshmi and handing him over to the cops yet again. Sad that Lakshmi still gets a panic attack. Sad that Tanuja fainted again seeing the place where the captives got tortured. Nice to see an amazing change in Rishi and taking care of her. Good that Rishi told Tanuja that her epilepsy problem was not her fault. Nice to see him coming with Tanuja to his in-laws place.  Loved the bonding of Prerna and Tanuja. Hope Lakshmi recovers from the trauma and Tanija from her fits.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#60

Rishi is doing something he hates. For now he easily passed the buck to his student. Navneet will deliver too, being a good student.