MG FF - The Burnt -Updated Chapter 14 Pg 78 Sept 10 - Page 75

Finally geets back to the mansion and both feel each other's pain . Geets love is so unconditional even after the treatment maan gave. When she l know his changes she l happily come back to him and she told advay abt him .

this was a beautiful update. love the portrayal of get's maan's and advay's emotions here. in fact everyone's emotions ahve been captured very well.

Good part

She come to khurana house for advay

Maan realised own mistake now he trying best to do everything for her comfort level

Hope she realised this

And at least both start talking

Part-12

Nice update..

Doctor told geet about her health issues..

Daadi, dev and annie came to see geet and asked her permission to take care of her and advik..

Geet told they can take care of advik and didn't need her permission..

Daadi told about maan as he didn't want to hurt her and advised to take her permission..

All took to geet and advik to mansion..

Advik went to outhouse to spend time with his father..

Waiting for next update..

Awesome update..

Loved the way u express each one feelings.....

Maan, Geet and Advay emotions r well writtened...

Waiting for maan and geet union...

Thanks for updating. Chapter 12. Interesting and intense part again. It's not going slow at all. So many things are being revealed and happening. Like an emotional rollercoaster. So Geet was explained why Maan knows about her condition. Its natural that she's confused by Maan’s sudden concern. Dadima, Dev, and Annie visit Geet in the hospital. Dadima wants Geet and Advay to come stay with the family. The way Geet has been treated in past & now she has been ill she deserved time. So Geet is torn but like ant other mother for Advay she has always underestimated herself. She thinks he deserves his family. So Geet decides to move back. Good that Geet used her own car.

Maan shifted to the outhouse to give Geet space. They are getting the Manor ready. Advay is super excited but confused why Maan isn’t in the main house. Geet reassures him, and they get a warm welcome. I loved how Dev mentioned about Geet being a busy businesswoman. She doesn't need to be pressed down like in the past. She has her own identity now.

Advay runs to Maan as expected. He has been waiting to see his dad after all. This part was so emotional. Feel happy and sad both. Maan is right he doesn't deserve this happiness. But on the other side Advay deserves to be with his family. The irony of Maan getting surprised that Geet told Advay the truth of him being the father. Maan feels guilty as usual. He made pasta for Advay. Advay’s joy is truly contagious. That's right spending time with family is definitely more satisfying than business deal. Understand why Geet is feeling lost. She is unsure of her place in this big change. Though Dadima reassured her that she’s family but it's so hard to be on her place. She is right to think that she will get nothing. Maan might be the best dad but as a worst companion / husband Geet needs a lot more to see he has changed. Waiting for next.

Very interesting update

Geet and Advay is welcomed by Daadi maa and all the family members

Daadi maa 's happiness is on cloud nine

Geet is feeling both the emotions

She's is filled with excitement and same time scared

Because she didn't know that Maan is changed

Maan is so happy with Advay but same time he is in guilty what he did with Geet 😔

Thanks for the update

Geet came to stay with khuranas for her son's happiness.

Maan is in guilt.

Wow wat an update fab update 💕

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geet become sad as dadi asking for her permission for doing anything for her n advay n ask dadi to decide as elder of family

geet is doing everything for her son n ready to take anything from maan

here maan is remembering past n how he torcher geet n reason of her running away when she needed most care from him n family

maan decide to be away from geet’s sight for her happiness n will be there for his son n geet whenever they need him but in the back

advay happy to see maan as his father whom he miss all these years

thanks for pm n access to read