MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 10 Pg 60 Apr 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

congratulation for new MG FF

 interesting n nice start

loving it already

will be waiting for it 

thank- you for being with my stories.❤️. hope to keep up the expectations 

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

My guess is Mishty is Geet and was married to Maan. He didn't do right by her. She must have left and made a new life. He now feels bad. The Geetanjali project is in her memory. Its his message to her. Time for his redemption.

thank-you🤗
you pretty much summarized the prologue. The story will not be a rocket science.. I will try to present it  so as to keep readers interest intact. Hope you enjoy this journey of Maaneet with me as well 

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: babelicious

Oh wow, you’re back with one of my favourite genres and I’m loving it already 😍! So Geet has changed her entire life and taken a new name, settling in the UK, because of a betrayal in the past. She has her surname Khurana so I’m assuming she is married to Maan and he cheated her. But here Maan is also repenting what he did to her in the past! Wonder what he did so bad to her! It also looks like they have a child together. & now they are closer to each other & can come face to face anytime! 
I’m so eager for this one.. when will Saathiya be ending?? 🙈

thanks as always 🤗
I will try my best to justify you wait on this one.

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: ArhamRizwan

Nice work 

Seems like geet is living a life by changing her name to Mishty Khurrana and maan has done something bad in the past with her , which he is repenting , one more interesting thing is that they have a son named Adhvay.

Would love to read your this story too.

thanks for always being so motivating 🤗

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Oh wow

looks like geet was crushed by Maan and his heinous acts. Dadi is be  at ide him now because he has Reid Ted fir his deeds


but geet gets so nervous hearing g the name 


thank-you. I so love your analysis on all my updates.. I always re-read them ❤️🤗

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Posted: 9 months ago

Interesting story. Waiting for reading.

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Fascinating prologue.... amazingly written

pleased that Geet is a successful businesswoman

she goes by the name Mishty Khurana

so the new product is Geetanjali's Dreams!

Geet was indeed amazed

her reaction knowing who the client is was justified

her thoughts were reasonable

as expected she knows Maan

of cos Maan is a successful, powerful and well knows businessman

Maan and his dadima share a close bond

well she wants Maan to move on

however his question was justified

at least Maan has regretted what he did and has done penance

but is it too late?

what did Maan do to Geet?

are they married?

seems like Maaneet have a son! 

Maan is indeed unaware of this! 

so dadima saw Advay

hmm she commented that his features reminded her of Maan

alas Maan ended the topic

Gosh Maan must have hurt Geet so much......

why did he do that?


excited to read this story

thank you for wonderful analysis as always 🤗
Hope you will enjoy this Maaneet journey as well 😊

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Intriguing Prologue 


It seems like Maan and Geet had a past 

something happened 

now Geet is Misty and lives in London

Maan on the other hand seems to still be standing at the same place 

he has a child 


I'm eagerly awaiting this story 



thanks as always..🤗  hope you this is also nice enough for you to read twice 😊 

Also, I know you have suggested other concept.. I have that in mind for sure 

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: GuruDd

Beautiful teaser ❤️

thank you.. hope you keep liking this story throughout their journey 

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Posted: 9 months ago

Thanks to all ❤️

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