Start was little funny and reality, end was beautiful Akshi ji 
I have written something too.....Masti mein.....
Virat:
The moment I choose
The moment I loose
It's the destiny of God
Or maybe just the love of you...
Sai:
Whatever I have
Whatever I got
Wasn't it all about the life
Or it's just the love of you.....
Virat:
Covered everything under the sun
Still the chapter is incomplete
Kya pyaar adhura hota hai
Because it's neither me nor you who always repeat......
Sai:
Clearing the sky came the the drops of sunshine
What about the areas which never shine
Kya aap sachchai ko apnaate hai
Because whenever I try hum aapko usme paate hain...
Virat:
Last side was never the hope
It's despair of early rose
What is there for you my sweetheart
It's the course of never ending darts.....
Sai:
So let's begin a line of breathe
Where you will be my Colgate and I'll be your teeth
Pta nhi aadat si hai Hume ek dusre ki
And that's how we repeat and repeat.....
I just wrote without thinking..... following your pattern
So you can inhale it the way you want
For me the ending was little non sanskari cheeku ji
......as they say things become the way you see......
May I explain.....
mujhe samajh hi nahi aayaOriginally posted by: Ashane25
I just wrote without thinking..... following your pattern
So you can inhale it the way you want
For me the ending was little non sanskari cheeku ji
May I explain
Lekin non sanskari? Samajhne ka irada bhi nahi hai
Kuch likhne ka mann kiya so a little something:
Virat-
The moment of love
The moment of pain
Both became one
In you.
Sai-
The moment of trust
The moment of despair
Both became one
In you.
Virat-
The crack in my heart
The healing balm
The tornado of destruction
The sea, serene and calm
Everything is you.
Sai-
My ray of hope
My biggest fear
My corner of joy
My lone tear
Everything is you.
Virat-
The moment you're away
It's myself I lose.
Between you and me
It's you I'll always choose.
Sai-
The moments I'm with you
I find myself again.
In the drought of life with me
You are the snow, hail and rain.
This is so so beautiful (and apt)😍! You’re quite a natural poet!
I mean the poem was just two sides opposing each other and all about love
.....it was actually the ending which is confusing.....I didn't write with a wrong perspective but dekhe toh thora cheesy ho gaya....
line of breathe, Colgate and teeth, repeat and repeat
Ek dusre ki aadat
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