RaYa SS - Accidental Soulmates [Part 4 - Page 13] - Page 5

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Continuing the tags..

This actually is with reference to both parts, because I was short of time when I read p1.

It's so well constructed and well written, Dazzling! See, maiyya, Harneet, whoever, it's possible to clean up your mess and just provide a straightforward story, but nooooo! Others have to do it for you!

I like the simplicity, the logic, and the flow. I like that this Ram seems like the Ram we knew. I like that Kriti got out without needless drama and isn't demonised. I don't mind drama or a bit of deviation of characters, but I like logic and realistic narration, and this makes sense.

Please tag me when you update, but I'm going to now read all the parts together after you complete.

Come I will give you a hug)

Absolutely loved the way the story is progressing..❤️..thanks for the tag 🤗

Originally posted by: minakrish

Kya baat hai! I absolutely loved how you're taking the story.👏

Shardul supporting Ram's decision.🤗😃 Love it.❤️

Ye Alekha aur Yuvi yahan par bhi kalesh karne aa gaye.

Looking forward to Priya's decision.

@bold: Thank you..makes me so glad to read that!! ❤️ 

Alekha (for now at least) means no harm and her concern for Ram is genuine. 

Waise bhi kal kisne dekha hai 😉

Originally posted by: SEA05

Great read, stay tuned)

Thank you Sea! ❤️

You deserve it and much more)

Thanks for tagging! 

Looking forward to read more! 

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

Wonderful update 🤗🤗

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed reading ❤️

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Thanks for tagging! 

Looking forward to read more! 

Thank you! 🤗

Originally posted by: Mangs1303

This actually is with reference to both parts, because I was short of time when I read p1.

It's so well constructed and well written, Dazzling! See, maiyya, Harneet, whoever, it's possible to clean up your mess and just provide a straightforward story, but nooooo! Others have to do it for you!

I like the simplicity, the logic, and the flow. I like that this Ram seems like the Ram we knew. I like that Kriti got out without needless drama and isn't demonised. I don't mind drama or a bit of deviation of characters, but I like logic and realistic narration, and this makes sense.

Please tag me when you update, but I'm going to now read all the parts together after you complete.

Thank you Mangs!! ❤️ I'm so glad that you like my version of Ram and Kriti. I really didn't get why Kriti needed to be villainized, hence my choice to write her like this. 

Like you said, I enjoy a bit of drama too, but there's so many ways to make the drama happen without the illogical character u-turns and mindless toxicity!