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A bundle of mysteries Part 6


The credit for the ShrishMeer edits goes to the unknown editor.

Pragya:You forgot everything Abhi.

Abhi:But Raghav Rishab and Shlok are my close friends and they know everything about me.Why they did'nt recognize you if we were a couple in the past?

Pragya:They did not know anything as they were not even born when we were together.

Abhi was stunned:What do you mean?

Pragya:We were together years back Abhi.We were dancers.You used to sing too.In our dance troupe there was Sameer.He fell in love with the girl named Shrishti who was also a part of your dance troupe.Sameer Shrishti used to dance together for stage shows.

Sameer proposed Shrishti and she accepted it happily as she also loved him back.Later we realized that Shrishti was actually a rich girl who joined our dance troupe only because dance was her passion.Her family was against Shrishti's relationship with Sameer.So Shrishti left her home.We helped Sameer and Shrishti to get married.

We both danced happily for their wedding.But Shrishti's father and uncle came.We were shocked.

Sameer and Shrishti were scared to see them.

Their fear was true.Without any mercy,they shot Sameer.In that shock Shrishti committed suicide there itself.Since we both helped them to get married,they shot us also.After you fell off the cliff they shot me also.And I died.

Abhi was shocked.

Abhi:That means..?

Pragya:We took rebirth.When I remembered our past I started searching for you.But I realized that you did'nt get your past life's memory back.So I came here with my friends purposefully,so that I can meet you and make you remember your past.

Abhi became emotional.

Pragya:You have not regained your memory yet.So if you can't believe it...

Abhi:I don't remember our past completely.But I don't want to remember it also as it was painful.But I trust you.

Pragya smiled at him emotionally.

Abhi:Why don't we start everything fresh like you wish?Not because of our past,but because I love you.

Pragya was surprised.

Pragya:Abhi?

Abhi:Yes Pragya...though I did not know about our past relationship I felt a connection with you and I fell for you.

I love you Pragya.

Pragya smiled emotionally:I love you too Abhi.

Abhi lifted her up in his arms romancing her.

They embraced each other.

Pragya said in her mind:Sorry for telling you a big lie Abhi.I am hiding the truth from you because I don't want to lose you.





Pratha:Akasha is the most beautiful memory of Raghav.Akasha is his love.Why should I erase his love from his memory?

Rishab:Because Akasha is no more,but he thinks that Akasha is alive and Naina is Akasha.

Pratha:But what if Akasha is alive and Naina is Akasha?Maybe because of that Raghav is seeing Akasha in Naina.

Rishab was stunned.

Rishab:What do you mean?

Pratha:Yes Rishab.Naina is partially Akasha.

Rishab:Partially Akasha means?

Pratha:As you know Akasha met with an accident.But like you all think she is not dead.But Akasha's soul is detached from her body.

Rishab:If the soul is detached from the body,that means that person is dead.Right?

Pratha:Usually it is like that.But very rarely a soul gets detached from a living person too.As a fairy,i can identify whether a soul is of a living person or a dead person.Accidentally I met Akasha's soul and I realized that she was not dead yet.She is a wandering soul..she is wandering to find her body.She is searching for her body.

Rishab:But without the soul,how can her body live?

Pratha:In such cases the body will be in coma.So Akasha's body maybe in coma.But unfortunately till now none of us could find her body.But she could not live without Raghav.So she entered another girl's body and that girl is Naina.She is using Naina's body to reach Raghav.

Rishab:But Naina too has a life of her own.It's wrong to use her body.

Pratha:I know that and I advised her.But she begged me to allow her to be in Naina's body.She has promised me that in a month she will find her body and leave Naina free.

Rishab:So Akasha's soul resides in Naina's body and that's why Raghav sees Akasha in place of Naina.

Pratha:Yes.

Rishab:Then why we are not able to see Akasha?

Pratha:Raghav is actually seeing Akasha's soul while you all are seeing Naina's body.Only Raghav can see Akasha's soul because they are soulmates.

Rishab was surprised.

Rishab:In the photograph it was Naina with Raghav.Even Raghav did not see Akasha in the photo.

Pratha:Because souls do not appear in photographs,only body is seen in the photographs.So Naina is seen instead of Akasha for Raghav also.

Pratha said emotionally:Rishab....Raghav is seeing Akasha in Naina's place because of love,not because of psychiatric problem.So let Raghav consider Naina as Akasha,that's better for his health.Only for some more time.After that Akasha's soul will reside in her own body.

Rishab nodded.




Raghav was sitting in the garden.

Raghav remembered his past moment with Akasha.

Flash back....

Akasha was doing contemporary dance.Raghav smiled watching it.

Raghav:It's excellent Akasha.You are a good choreographer also.

(Thank you Rehana Siraj for this edit).

She smiled at him.

Akasha:When I do contemporary dance,I forget everything.It's such a nice feeling.

Raghav pulled her closer and asked:You will forget me also when you dance?

Akasha:No,I will not forget you after death also.

Raghav:For that,I will not let you die.

Akasha smiled.

Akasha:Tell me..will you forget me?

Raghav:Never ever!

They smiled and embraced each other.



Present....

Raghav:I can never forget you Akasha.And I will not let you die.I mean it.

Raghav's eyes became wet.

Naina saw Raghav sitting in the garden with a sad face.Naina sat near him.

Naina held his hand.

Naina:What happened Raghav?Why are you upset?

Raghav looked at her emotionally.He saw Akasha in her place.

Raghav:My own friends feel that you are not Akasha and you are no more.How can I bear it?

Naina became dull.

Naina:Let them think whatever they want.But you know that I am your Akasha.That's enough for me.

Raghav-Naina/Akasha shared an emotional eye lock.

Raghav:In the photograph it was not you with me.How did it happen?

Naina/Akasha:It was actually me.But since your friends said that it was not me,in that moment you also started seeing someone else instead of me.

Raghav:But...

Naina/Akasha:You just take that photograph and check now.

Raghav took the phone and took that photo.It was Akasha in that photograph instead of Naina.

Raghav smiled.

Raghav:You are right Akasha.

Akasha/Naina smiled.

Akasha said in her mind:Thank you Pratha.With your magical power you changed Naina's face into mine in the photograph.

Pratha smiled at her from a long distance in her fairy form.

(Thank you Salley145 for the lovely edits)

Akasha smiled at her.




Shlok went near Aastha.

Shlok:Aastha...what happened suddenly?Why did you just run away?

Aastha:Shlok...

She did not say anything more.

Shlok:Ok.Just say..I expressed my wish to be with you for life long.What's your reply?

She was painfully silent.

Shlok looked at her smiling remembering her hugging him.

Shlok:Can I think that it's a positive reply from you?

Aastha became upset.

Shlok:If you did'nt understand what I meant...it means that i got attracted towards you at first sight.But as days passed..especially after interacting with you I realized that I fell in love with you.I love you.

Aastha looked at him tearfully.

Shlok was stunned seeing her tears.

Shlok:What happened Aastha?

Aastha:What if your love for me will vanish after you come to know my secret?

Shlok was stunned.

Shlok:What secret?

Aastha:I am a rape victim.I was raped by some college boys.

Shlok was shocked and shattered.Suddenly he got angry.

Shlok:How dare they misbehave with you?I will kill them.

Aastha:They got their punishment.I got justice.But for public I am just a rape victim.I was always depressed.My friends brought me here so that I will get peace of mind.After a long time I got a little drop of happiness because of you.But...

Shlok:But?

Aastha wept.

Shlok:Not just a little drop of happiness.I will give you lots of happiness.

Aastha looked at him unbelievably.

Shlok pulled her closer and said:I love you very much Aastha and my love for you has not reduced even a bit after knowing your past.It's not your fault.You are pure.The sin is done by those devils.

Shlok wiped her tears and said:Don't think that I will ever hate you or leave you because of your past.My love is not weak.I love you Aastha.I want you.

Aastha smiled emotionally.

Shlok:Will you be with me always?

Aastha replied emotionally:Yes Shlok...always.

They embraced each other.





Pragya rang up Abhi from her room.

Pragya:Abhi..please come to my room soon.

Pragya:We are in the same house.Still you rang me up on the phone?

Pragya:Yes.Because I want to tell you something.

Abhi:Even I want to tell you something.

Abhi said in his mind:I want to propose you for marriage.

They both smiled.



Abhi went to Pragya's room.

Pragya:Abhi...I called you here because....

Pragya gave him the guitar.

Pragya:Abhi...can you please play guitar and sing like before?

Abhi:Sorry Pragya.It's Rishab's field now.In this birth I can't sing.

Pragya:No Abhi.You can sing.Because you are the same Abhi.It's just that you took rebirth.You did'nt sing yet as you did'nt get inspiration.Now I am there to inspire you...our love can inspire you.So please try to sing for me.I am longing to hear it.

With hesitation Abhi took the guitar.Suddenly he remembered how he used to play the guitar in the previous birth while Pragya was on his lap.

He said in his mind:Yes...Pragya is my inspiration.

Automatically his fingers started playing the guitar.He started singing surprising himself.Pragya was very happy.

They started dancing together romantically.

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun
Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Baadalon ki tarah hi toh
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Baarishon ki tarah hi toh
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh
Tune hosh ko udaaya hai

Mera muqaddar savaraa hai yoon
Naya savera jo laaya hai tu
Tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
Mere saare janam re

Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re

Karam re, karam re (karam re..)
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re

Mere sanam re mera hua re
Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye

Mere sanam re mera hua re
Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye(Sanam re).

Abhi knelt down before her.

Abhi:Pragya...you know how much I love you.In the previous birth we could'nt get married.In this birth can we complete our incomplete wish?Shall we get married?

Pragya became emotional.

She was very happy and nodded holding his hand:Yes.

Abhi became very happy.

Abhi:In this happiness I want to give you a surprise.

Pragya was curious to see it.

Some people came there with something which was covered.It was a painting canvas.

Abhi unveiled it.There she was surprised to his drawing.

She became emotional.

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Abhi:I sketched it specially for you.

Pragya was surprised.

Pragya:I did'nt know that you could draw so well.In the previous birth you did not have this talent.It's lovely.It's the best gift ever.Thank you Abhi.

He smiled and pulled her closer to him.

They shared a passionate eye lock.

Pratha and Rishab started dreaming of having sweet romantic moments with each other.

Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahin the - 2

Kabhi tum nahin the

kabhi hum nahin the - 2

Pyar ke haseen kab yeh

mausam nahin the- 2
Kabhi tum nahin the
kabhi hum nahin the - 2

Yeh din barson ke baad aaya

Kuch tumhe, kuch hamein yaad aaya
Kasak phir yeh dil mein uthi hai
Honton pe baat aake ruki hai
Kabhi itne majboor to hum nahin the
Kabhi itne majboor to hum nahin the


Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahin the
Pyar ke haseen kab yeh mausam nahin the
Kabhi tum nahin the
kabhi hum nahin the - 2


Aah aah aah, aah aah

Aah aah aah aah aah, aah aah
Agar tum yeh dil maang lete
Jaaneman hum tumhe jaan dete
Tumhe kaise hum bhool jaate
Marke bhi tum hamein yaad aate


Tumhe hai pata bewafaa hum nahin the
Tumhe hai pata bewafaa hum nahin the
Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahin the - 2




Kabhi tum nahin the

kabhi hum nahin the - 2

Pyar ke haseen kab yeh mausam nahin the

Kabhi tum nahin the
kabhi hum nahin the – 2

Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahin the - 2

Kabhi tum nahin the

kabhi hum nahin the - 2

Pyar ke haseen kab yeh

mausam nahin the- 2
Kabhi tum nahin the

kabhi hum nahin the - 2


Yeh din barson ke baad aaya

Kuch tumhe, kuch hamein yaad aaya
Kasak phir yeh dil mein uthi hai
Honton pe baat aake ruki hai

Kabhi itne majboor to hum nahin the
Kabhi itne majboor to hum nahin the
Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahin the
Pyar ke haseen kab yeh mausam nahin the
Kabhi tum nahin the
kabhi hum nahin the - 2


Kabhi tum nahin the

kabhi hum nahin the - 2

Pyar ke haseen kab yeh mausam nahin the

Kabhi tum nahin the
kabhi hum nahin the – 2(Dil kya kare).



A man was walking in the forest.He saw a beautiful girl and smiled at her.

She smiled back.

He:Hi beautiful!

She:My name is not beautiful.

He:But you are very beautiful.

He went closer to her and held her hand sensually.

She felt disgusted.

She:Leave me.

He:How can I leave a beautiful girl like you when you are alone?

She:I said..leave me.

He:No way darling.

He tried to kiss her forcefully.Suddenly she turned into a scary ghost shocking.

He screamed.He tried to run away from her.But she pulled him back.

She:You want to kiss me.Right?I will kiss you.

She moved closer to him and bit his cheek and neck hard.He fell down dead.Her teeth were full of blood.

She turned the body into ashes.

The ghost smiled :Now nobody will even find your body to guess that a murder has happened here.

Shlok came to the forest within some minutes.

Shlok:I will find the killer ghost tonight.

The ghost came and stood behind him.

The ghost whispered:My next prey is here.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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AbhiGya close friends were not even born when they were together?I am stunned, what does this mean? Shocked that Srishmeer died and along with them,Pragya too died means she’s a ghost. Oh it’s a rebirth. Proposal scene was so sweet.Aray now what is Pragya hiding? That she’s a ghost? Now I think no rebirth happened.So confusing. What told Pratha told Rishab, I was reminded of my story yhc+immj2horror story where I partially did the same. Akasha dancing and Raghav praisingher was sweet, nice edit by Rehana. The edit you made of ArJen looks real. Prathahelping Akasha was nice. Even I doubted that Aastha is a rape victim. Shlok acceptingAastha even then was nice. Pragya asking Abhi to play guitar saying that their lovecan inspire him was nics. Hey, have you watched that serial where it was Karanvirbohra opposite Pragya? Can u write love triangle story of AbhiGya with Karanvirbohra? And with Karanvir being the same violent person? Do tell if you can, suddenlywhile reading this ff I remembered the scene where Pragya in that serial was singingand he was torturing her. AbhiGya dance was passionate. Abhi surprising her witha sketch was beautiful. PraRish imaginary moments were nice. Ghost scene was chilling.Waiting for next perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#83

Thanks for the pm


Sensational update.... magnificently written

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Aww twists after twists

Just amazing

I loved it

Now Abhi and Pragya story has an altogether different birth dimensions

Splendid update

Thank u for the pm

Kindly update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago
#85

Pragya and Abhi met in a past life. She remembered, but he did not.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#86

Pragya told a lie. Whats the true story?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#87

Rishab is really seeing Akasha in Naina. But will Akasha find her own body?

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Aastha was a victim of a crime. But people never let the victim forget.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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How did Abhi remember how to sing if the story was a lie?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#90

Shlok is right in front of the ghost or whoever it is. Will he get out alive?

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