The lost daughters PraRish FS

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The lost daughters Part 1


This plot is given by my dearest friend Naina_Writes.It's Naina who suggested Tejasswi and Mahek for the grown up Kiara and Pihu.She only suggested Simba and Vivek opposite them.Thank you for your suggestions Naina.

Thank you so much PriyaArshiSarun for the beautiful cover page.

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Preeta reached an area searching for Pihu.There she saw her lovely daughter Pihu dying down injured.

Preeta was shocked.She screamed:Pihuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

She ran towards Pihu and placed her on her lap.

Preeta:Pihu beta...please open your eyes.

Pihu was unconscious and was not responding.

Suddenly Preeta heard a laughter.

She looked at that person.It was none other than Sonakshi;who was the obsessed lover of Preeta's husband Karan.

Sona:Pihu won't respond as she is no more.

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:No,I won't believe it.

Sona:You have to believe it Preeta.Because I only killed Pihu by causing an accident.To see Pihu's corpse only I called you here.

Preeta was shocked.She held Pihu's hand and realized that Pihu was not breathing.

Preeta burst into tears:Pihuuuuuuuuuuu!

Sonakshi was giggling.

Suddenly Preeta realized that Pihu was breathing.Preeta looked at her with surprise.

Preeta:Pihu...you are alive!

Preeta was very happy.Sonakshi could not digest the truth with a shock.

Sona:Pihu should not be alive.I won't let her be alive.

Sonakshi pushed Preeta and took Pihu in her arms.Then she threw her away and Pihu fell off the cliff.

Preeta screamed:Nooooooooooooooooo!

Sonakshi laughed.

Preeta could not bear it and slapped her hard.

Preeta:You are a witch.How could you kill a little child with your hands?

Sonakshi said angrily:Because Pihu was the symbol of yours and Karan's love.To enter Karan's life,I needed to drive you away.But for that it was essential to remove Pihu from Karan's life.

Preeta:You are so cruel.

Sona:Love made me like this Preeta.




Preeta:Love?There is no emotion like love in you.Otherwise you would not have done this.I will not leave you for killing my Pihu.




Luthra house....


Preeta cried in front of Karan.

Karan:Preeta,why are you crying?Where is Pihu?

Sonakshi came and talked like an innocent girl.

Sona:Where is Pihu?

Preeta pointed her finger at Sonakshi and said:Karan...she only killed Pihu.

All were shocked.

Karan:Killed Pihu means?Pihu....What nonsense are you saying Preeta?Have you gone mad?

Preeta cried:Our Pihu has gone Karan.

Karan was numb.Tears rolled from his eyes.

Preeta explained everything to Karan.

All Luthras were crying.

Karan stared at Sonakshi angrily:Sonakshi!

Sonakshi shed her crocodile tears.

Sona:Preeta,how could you lie?You only told me that you hate Pihu because she is not your blood,but an adopted daughter.Did'nt you kill Pihu and put the blame on me?But why Preeta?

Preeta:Stop it Sonakshi.How can you lie shamelessly?

Sona:Karan..this Preeta...

Karan raised his voice:Enough Sonakshi.I trust Preeta completely.She never talks ill of anyone.If she is saying something like this about you,it must be true.

Sonakshi was shocked.

All Luthras said:We trust Preeta.

Sonakshi thought:Did my plan backfire?

Karan:You took my daughter's life.I will take your life.

Karan moved towards Sonakshi angrily.Preeta pulled him back.

Preeta:No Karan.You should not even touch this witch.

Sonakshi cried saying:Karan,I am saying the truth.Please don't believe this Preeta.

Karan's aunt Kareena could not tolerate Sonakshi anymore.

Kareena:Stop lying Sonakshi.




Kareena slapped Sonakshi and said:You should rot in jail.

Kareena rang up the police.The policemen came and arrested Sonakshi.

Sona:Karan...please believe me.

The police dragged her away.

Preeta looked at the silent depressed Karan:Karan...our Pihu....

Karan who was silent burst into tears.

They embraced each other and cried.





The same time in another place,Preeta's sister Pragya and her husband Abhishek went to a place where goons had kidnapped and taken their daughter Kiara to.Kiara was crying as she was tied tightly by the goons.

Kiara:Mumma...Dadda...please save me.

Pragya:Kiara beta...nothing will happen to you.

Abhi:We are here.You don't need to be scared.We will save you.

Seeing Kiara's condition there,Pragya cried.

The goon kept a gun towards Kiara's neck.

Kiara cried.Pragya got scared.

Pragya:Please..I beg of you.Please leave my daughter.

Abhi said angrily:Leave my daughter.

Abhi's ex girl friend Tanu and her friend Nikhil only kidnapped Kiara.

Tanu:You marry me Abhi.Then we will leave Kiara.

Abhi:Never,I will never marry a heartless woman is like you.I love only my Pragya.

Tanu got angry:Then you will bear the punishment also Abhi.

Nikhil smirked and attacked Kiara.

Pragya:Nooooooooooooo!

Abhi went and punched Nikhil.But Nikhil pushed Abhi and punched him back.Then Nikhil held Kiara tightly.

Suddenly Policemen reached there.

Pragya:Please arrest them and save my daughter.

Nikhil and Tanu got scared.

Suddenly Nikhil pushed Kiara off the cliff.Kiara cried loudly.

Abhi cried loudly while Pragya became numb due to shock.

But policemen came and arrested Tanu and Nikhil.



After some days....


Abhi and Pragya looked at Kiara's framed photograph which had a garland over it.They were very upset.

Abhi:Our Kiara is not with us.

Pragya:But she is at the safest place...with God.

They wept embracing each other.




Pragya and Preeta cried together.

Preeta:Why Pragya di?Why we sisters lost our daughters together?

Pragya:That's our bad luck.Maybe we sisters are cursed.

They both cried.





18 years passed by......



A house....


A middle aged man sat to have food.He was Keshav Goradia.His wife Manyata served him food.

Keshav:You also have food Manyata.

Manyata:I already had food Keshav.

Keshav:Ok.Where are our sweet daughters?

Manyata:Both of them have gone for Karate class.

Keshav smiled.

Keshav:They did not get our powers as they are human beings.But I am happy that still we could bring them as strong girls.

Manyata smiled.

Manyata:Yes.They both are so strong that they can even defeat the evil Naagins.

They both laughed.

Their daughters Kiara and Pihu returned home.

Keshav:Long life!We were talking about both of you.

Kiara and Pihu smiled.

Kiara:Not only us,you both will also have long life.

Keshav and Manyata smiled.

Sayantani said in her mind:Yes,we are blessed with long life as we are serpents.

Keshav said in his mind:You both are also blessed with long life.That's why when you both fell off the cliff,Shivji made us see both of you.So we could save you both and bring up both of you like our own daughters.

Manyata:You both maybe tired after the Karate class.So have food.

Pihu:Yes,I feel hungry Maa.

Kiara and Pihu sat to have food and Manyata served them food.

After finishing food Kiara and Pihu left the room.

Keshav:After a week,the bad time for Pihu and Kiara ends like Guruji said.After that we have to tell the truth to Kiara and Pihu.

Manyata:Yes,we have to.How will they react to the truth?I am worried about that.

Keshav:Even I am tense.But we have to face it.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Nice start dear

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Well started dear .Hope they get some relief from sadness I don't like the name Preeta though .It sound weird to me

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Thanks a lot.Why you don't like the name 'Preeta'?


Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Well started dear .Hope they get some relief from sadness I don't like the name Preeta though .It sound weird to me

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Preeta seeing Pihu’s corpse and crying for her was sad. Sonakshi laughing on her death was irritating, but when she found Pihu breathing, she threw her from the cliff, so cruel. Oh thank God Karan is not a fool and believes Preeta. Good that Sona got arrested unlike the serial. Kiara’s death was also painful. Pragya Preeta moment was emotional. What is Manyata saying? Evil naagins? Is this ff about naagins as well? 😂Wow surprised to see Teju as Kiara and Mehek as Pihu, Mehek also suits Pihu she’s so cute, waiting for next, perfect pics.

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There r no naagins.The person who gave me this plot asked me to show Naag Naagin couple as the foster parents of Pihu Kiara.That's it.


Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Preeta seeing Pihu’s corpse and crying for her was sad. Sonakshi laughing on her death was irritating, but when she found Pihu breathing, she threw her from the cliff, so cruel. Oh thank God Karan is not a fool and believes Preeta. Good that Sona got arrested unlike the serial. Kiara’s death was also painful. Pragya Preeta moment was emotional. What is Manyata saying? Evil naagins? Is this ff about naagins as well? 😂Wow surprised to see Teju as Kiara and Mehek as Pihu, Mehek also suits Pihu she’s so cute, waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot.Why you don't like the name 'Preeta'?


I have heard Preeti name it sounds good when we call.And it means love. what does Preeta mean I don't know .But it's a weird name for me atleast🤔.Anyways are u still watching N6 jasmine
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Thanks for the pm


Part 1

Great update.. well written

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Yes watching it.


Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

I have heard Preeti name it sounds good when we call.And it means love. what does Preeta mean I don't know .But it's a weird name for me atleast🤔.Anyways are u still watching N6 jasmine

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 1


Emotional and Awesome Update


So Kiara and Pihu have survived

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