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Posted: 1 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Pad liya chapter 9..

Awesome❣️❣️

What cute conversations they're having...

Their possessiveness and love for each other is so beautiful.

Kalyani teasing Malharji. 😆

Aur phir woh use bhi mila..

Aww...Malhar is ready to announce but when will Kallu be ready..dekhte hain..

And I loved how he respects her dedication towards her work and also her decision to wait for some time to announce their relationship.

Thank you very much for giving such a detailed review. Yes it will take a little time for them to reveal it to everyone as of now Kalyani's main priority is her career and Malhar and for Malhar what matters is the happiness of Kalyani and from now onwards slowly slowly few things are going to get revealed, so stay connected as from now onwards the story is going to get more interesting.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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The last three chapters are literally super cute Shruti!!! Can’t wait for the upcoming genuinely!! I myself can’t believe ki main itni invested hoon iss story mein!! Aur revelations ke liye toh wait hi nahi ho raha!!! Please please please jaldi jaldi Updates dedooooo😘😘😘

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The last three chapters are literally super cute Shruti!!! Can’t wait for the upcoming genuinely!! I myself can’t believe ki main itni invested hoon iss story mein!! Aur revelations ke liye toh wait hi nahi ho raha!!! Please please please jaldi jaldi Updates dedooooo😘😘😘

Sure Jaldi hi denge😉😉 but thoda wait karna hoga kyunki sabr ka fal meetha hota hai

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Thank you very much for giving such a detailed review. Yes it will take a little time for them to reveal it to everyone as of now Kalyani's main priority is her career and Malhar and for Malhar what matters is the happiness of Kalyani and from now onwards slowly slowly few things are going to get revealed, so stay connected as from now onwards the story is going to get more interesting.


You're most welcome. I'm enjoying this beautiful story..

And awaiting the upcoming revelations..

❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago
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So Beautiful Updates ❤️❤️❤️❤️


Jitna padho utna kam lagta hai..

Kalma


Loved both part Shruti..

Waiting for more..

Keep writing..


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Thank You Very Much ❤️❤️ I am very glad you liked it will update the next chapter soon.

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CHAPTER- 11

After their pleasant make out session both were lying closely beside eachother tangling their fingers with each other and were just relishing being in eachothers embrace, just then Kalyani asked Malhar-

Kalyani- Malhar Ji aapne kabhi aapne family ke baare mein mujhe kuch nahi bataya kuch bataiye na, online toh kafi kuch likha hai par mujhe aapse se janna hai

Malhar- Tum kuch zyada hi mere baare mein online nahi search karti, haan karo mere baare mein hi search karo taaki kisi aur ke taraf tumhara kabhi dhyan nahi jaaye and he giggled saying this

Kalyani- Malhar Ji mera mazak mat udhayiye bataiya naa aapki family ke baare mein

Malhar- Meri choti si family hai jismein main meri aai aur mere baba hain haan aur ek choti behen bhi, kehne ko toh meri sagi behen nahi hai par sagi se kam bhi nahi hai

Kalyani- Matlab??

Malhar- Woh mere Baba ke bade bhai ki yaani mere Kaka ki beti hai Swara, mujhse sirf 5 saal choti hai par mera dhyaan ekdum meri aai ki tarah rakhti hai. Par unfortunately bachpan mein hi apne aai baba ko kho diya usne

Kalyani- Oh my god.... Aesa kya hua??

Malhar- Woh mere jo Kaka the Madhav Kaka woh bahut hi ache classical singer the aur apne kai shows bhi karte the, ek din aese hi ek show karne woh aur Asawari Kaki gaye the hum nahi jaa paye kyunki mere school ke final exams the aur aai ko mere saath rukna pada aur baba bhi ek meeting ke liye gaye hue the toh aai ne swara ko bhi apne saath hi rakh liya kyunki itne bheedh aur shor mein bechari pareshan ho jaati. But unfortunately show se return aate wakt unki car accident mein jaan chali gayi. Main sirf 10 saal ka tha aur Swara 5 saal ki bechari bahut royi par hum kuch kar nahi paaye. Uske baad baba aur aai ne uski puri zimmedari li aur uske aai baba ki kami puri ki.

Kalyani- I am so sorry mere wajah se aapko woh sab yaad karna padh gaya.

Malhar- Are ismein sorry ki kya baat hai tumhe pura hak hai mere life ke baare mein janne ka

Kalyani- Apne parents ke baare mein kuch bataiye naa

Malhar- Meri khubsurat si aai Anupriya Rane ek bahut hi amazing aai aur wife hone ke saath saath ek bahut hi achi insaan hai. Kehene ko toh sirf housewife hai lekin kisi bhi social work ke kaamon mein peeche nahi rehti chahe koi kisi bhi musibat mein ho uski help karne ko ready. Aur mere baba Sarthak Rane ek super talented lawyer jinhone kabhi mere kisi bhi decision par koi bhi sawaal nahi uthaya. Woh chahte the ki main bhi unki hi tarah ek lawyer banu par jab maine unhe apne actor banne ki wish ke baare mein bataya toh kabhi mujhe nahi roka balki dono mere aai baba ne mujhe full support kiya aaj main jo hun unhi ke wajah se hun.

Kalyani- Yeh toh aapne ek dum correct kaha hum bache aaj jo bhi achieve karte hain sab apne parents ke support aur prayers ke wajah se hi kar paate hain. Swara ke baare mein bhi kuch bataiye.

Malhar- Uske baare mein toh kya hi bolun kehne ko toh main baba ka beta hun magar woh bilkul mere baba ki photocopy hai. Bachpan se hi baba ko apna role model manti hai aur unhi ki tarah lawyer banna chahti thi aur banke bhi dikhaya usne aur chahti thi ki baba ke saath Aurangabad mein hi practice kare, lekin baba chahte the ki woh khudko establish kare baad mein unka haath bataye issilye Delhi mein hi practice kar rahi hai abhi.

Kalyani- Ek minute kya kaha aapne Aurangabad

Malhar- Haan main Aurangabad se hun yeh maine kabhi itna detail mein reveal nahi kiya kyunki tumhe toh media ka pata hi hai

Kalyani- I just don't believe thi.....

Malhar- Kya ho gaya Kalyani???

Kalyani- Aapko pata bhi hai mein bhi Aurangabad se hun woh toh Papa ke job ke wajah se hum Mumbai mein rahte hain warna mera baaki ka saara parivar Aurangabad mein hai

Malhar- Woow thats so amazing.... Mujhe hamesha se hi lagta tha ki humara koi bahut gehra raabta hai dekho lagta hai humara milna hamesha se likha tha chahe yaha yaa fir Aurangabad mein

Kalyani- Yeh toh aapne ekdum sach kaha humara koi toh raabta hai

Malhar- Waese tumne kaha tumhara baaki ka parivar maltab aur bhi members hain tumhare family mein, mujhe toh lagta tha tumhari bahut choti si family hai tum aur tumhare parents

Kalyani- Nahi humari bahut hi badi family hai jismein main, Madhuri, Papa, Aaosaheb, Aazoba, Chachi, Chacha, Nal aur Goda hain

Malhar- Madhuri Kaun??

Kalyani- Madhuri meri aai ka naam hai

Malhar- Tum apni aai ko naam se bulati ho??

Kalyani- Haan...Apne use dekha nahi hai na issiliye aesa bol rahe hain ekdum pretty lagti hai bilkul meri badi behen lagti hai toh usse aai kaese bolun aur waise bhi Madhuri mein toh Maa haina

Malhar- Haan yeh toh tumne correct kahan, waise tumhari aai kitni pretty hai yeh toh tumhe dekh ke hi pata chal jaata hai my doll after saying this he tickled her on her collar bone and she smiled and blushed

Malhar- Aur baaki kaun kaun hai tumhari family mein

Kalyani- Meri aaji yaani Ahilya Deshmukh jinhe hum pyar se Aaosahed bulate hain aur mere Aazoba yaani Sayajirao Deshmukh dono hi Aurangabad mein humare sareeyon ka family business sambhalte hain. Aaosaheb bahut hi strict type ki hain, aapko pata hai Madhuri aur Papa ki love marriage hui hai jisse woh aaj tak kush nahi hain kyunki woh Papa ki shadi apne ek bade supplier ki beti ke saath karwana chahti thi, magar dil ki bahut achi hain shaadi ke baad unhone Madhuri ko bahut tough time diya issiliye Papa ne yahan Mumbai mein job accept ki taaki Aaosaheb aur Madhuri dono ko hi koi problem naa ho aur Aaosaheb ne yeh decision ko mana bhi pure dil se aur mujhse bhi kaafi pyar karti hain lekin sabse zyada mujhe mere Aazoba pyaar karte hain sab unhe Appa bulate hain magar ek main hi hun jo unhe aazoba bulati hun jisse woh bahut kush hote hain. Aur phir aate hain mere Papa ke chote bhai Vivek Chacha aur meri Pallavi Chachi jinke do bache hain yaani mere cousins Godavari meri choti behen aur Nal humara chota bhai. Vivek Chacha Aaosahaeb ka business mein haat batate hain aur Pallavi Chachi ghar sambhalti hain.

Malhar- Wow bahut hi badi family hai tumhari waese ek cheez tumne galat kahan tumhe sabse zyada pyaar toh main hi karta hun tumhare aazoba second number par aate hain

Kalyani- Acha toh aap mere aazoba ke saath competition karna chahte hain??

Malhar- Nahi rehne do acha hua ki tumne aazoba kaha koi aur hota tab toh competition ho hi jaata

After saying this he laughed

Kalyani- Ha ha very funny

Malhar- Tumne kaha tumhari aaosaheb bahut strict hain woh abhi tak tumhare aai aur baba ke love marriage se kush nahi hain toh kya unhe main bhi pasand nahi aaunga kya??

Kalyani- Aap aesa kyun soch rahe hain hum mana lenge unhe

Malhar- Lekin phir bhi Kalyani mujhe toh tumne tension mein daal diya

Kalyani- Ab aap mujhe mat tension dijiye isske baare mein baat karke mujhe abhi apna mood nahi kharab karna in sab ke baare mein sochke

Malhar- Theek hai toh hum kisi aur kaam ke baare mein sochte hain

Kalyani- Kaun sa kaam??

Malhar- Wohh.... After saying this he turned fully towards her and said round two

After listening this Kalyani blushed and soon both were again engaged in their love making session.

After few hours both finally slept in eachothers embrace and after few hours Kalyani's alarm rang on her phone and she woke and turned it off and when she was about to get up Malhar held her hand and pulled her towards him and kissed her on her lips and after breaking the kiss told-

Malhar- Mat jaao naa kahin

Kalyani- Ab toh mujhe jaana hi hoga naa

Malhar- Lekin kaese jaaogi pehle tumhe ghar jaana hoga phir change karna hoga phir office jaa paaogi, isse acha mat jaao

Kalyani- Don't worry main apne bag mein hamesha extra dress carry karti hun taaki emergency mein kaam aa jaaye

Malhar- Matlab sab plan karke aai ho tum

Kalyani- Sorry Malhar Ji agar ruk paati toh ruk jaati par ab isse zyada nahi ruk paaungi

Malhar- Theek hai koi baat nahi main aese hi bol raha tha mujhe bhi pata hai, tum kal mere saath ruki wahi mere liye bahut hai, jaao jaake ready ho jaao main tab tak breakfast ready kar leta hun lekin hum saath mein hi jaayenge tumhe office chodhte hue main shoot pe chala jaaoga

Kalyani- Lekin mujhe client ke office jaana hoga woh aapko pura ulta raasta padega aapke shooting location se, rehne dijiye main chali jaaogi

Malhar- Main tumse puch nahi raha hun bata raha hun hum saath hi jayenge, now go and get ready fast

Kalyani- Ok

After that Kalyani took her clothes from her bag and went to bathroom to get ready meanwhile Malhar went in the kitchen to make breakfast. After half an hour he has made some sandwiches for both of them and then went to his room to see whether Kalyani was ready or not. And after entering his room he saw her dressing up near his dressing table where she was adjusting her shirt properly and he got mesmerized seeing her and grabbed her from back after seeing him in the mirror she blushed and smiled both saw eachother in the mirror and admired themselves.

Malhar- Mujhe bahut jalan hoti hai unlogon se jo tumhe roz aese formals mein kaam karte hue dekhte hain, tumhe pata bhi hai tum kitni pyaari lagti ho

Kalyani- Aur aap jo itne hot dikhte hain screen pe woh toh pura India dekhta hai uska kya

Malhar- Magar meri nazar toh sirf tumhe hi dhoondhti hai

Kalyani- Aur main bhi bas aapko hi dekhna chahti hun, waese yeh dekhiye yeh aapne kya kiya

Kalyani turned and showed him her collar bone where he has given a hickey

Malhar- Are yeh toh mera pyaar hai dekho kitna acha lag raha hai tumpe

Kalyani- Mazak mat kariye pata bhi hai kitni mushkil se shirt ke collar se chupa rahi hun par halka sa collar side hote hi dikh raha hai

Malhar- Toh chupana kyun hai yeh toh showoff karne ki cheez hai, dekho tumhara boyfriend kitna talented hai ek hi baar mein kitna bada hickey diya tumhe. Yeh sabko dikhana specially uss Atharva ko

Kalyani- Malhar Jiii....

Malhar- Acha sorry don't worry nahi dikhega tumne ache se try kiya hai chupane ka aur agar dikh jaaye toh bol dena machhar ne kaat liya

Kalyani- Haan very funny aur uss machhar ka naam Malhar Rane hai

At this both laughed and just then Malhar was about to kiss her and Kalyani's phone rang and the caller was non other than Atharva which was seen by Malhar and he got a little irritated and said-

Malhar- Lo aa gaya kabaad mein haddi

Kalyani- Abhi aap hi isse yaad kar rahe the

Malhar- Haan galti ho gayi ab utha lo nahi toh phone se bahar hi aa jayega

Kalyani- Aap mujhe chodhenge tabhi toh uthaungi

Malhar- Main nahi chodh raha aese hi baat karo

Kalyani- Are par...

Malhar- Mujhe nahi pata

Kalyani- Ok fine

She then picked up his call and just then Malhar thought to tease her and as she was talking Malhar tickled her behind her back which made her to make some weird sound after listening this Atharva asked-

Atharva- Kya hua Kalyani all ok

Kalyani- Haan haan all ok bolo kya bol rahe the and she glared Malhar but he didn't stop

Atharva- Woh aaj tum office hi aana client office aaj main jaaunga Shravan Bhaiya ne kahan tumhe inform karne

Kalyani- Haan ok

Just then Malhar kissed her on cheeks and as he gave her big kiss its sound reached Atharva and he understood that what was going on so he said-

Atharva- Sorry mujhe tumhe itni si baat message kar deni chahiye thi tum busy ho sorry for disturbing you

After listening this Kalyani gave a sharp glare to Malhar and then said-

Kalyani- Haan next time agar kuch bahut hi important ho tabhi call karna itni choti si baat tum message par bhi bol sakte the

Atharva- Haan sorry for disturbing you guys

After saying this Atharva hung up and Kalyani gave Malhar a tight punch on his stomach

Malhar laughed and said- Ooouch!!! Kalyani kya kar rahi ho

Kalyani- Aur aap kya kar rahe the main phone par thi aur aap kaesi harkatein kar rahe the

Malhar- Haan toh usse bata raha tha ki tum kitni busy ho aur woh kabab mein haddi ban raha hai, waese I am impressed kitna sahi jawab diya tumne ki agar koi important baat ho tabhi call kare nahi toh message hi kare

Kalyani- Haan aapka gussa maine us bechare pe nikal diya

Malhar- Ab aesa bhi koi woh bechara nahi hai itni choti choti baat pe call karne ki kya zaroorat hai jab message se kaam chal sakta hai toh

Kalyani- Aap na rehne dijiye

Malhar- Acha theek hai ab gussa mat ho main jaldi se ready ho ke aata hun fir breakfast karke dono kaam ke liye nikal jaate hain

Kalyani- Haan theek hai tab tak main coffee bana leti hun

Malhar- Haan ok

After sometime Malhar came after getting ready and both have there breakfast and then left for work.

Kalyani- Mujhe aaj office hi chodh dijiye ga aaj client office nahi jaana

Malhar- Ok maam

Both left and reached near Kalyani's office where Kalyani got down and hugged Malhar and waived him bye which was witnessed by Atharva as he was leaving the office with some documents to the client office and when Kalyani turned she saw Atharva standing there so she gave a gentle smile and wished him good morning-

Kalyani- Good Morning Atharva

Atharva- Good Morning

Just then Atharva saw that hickey which was slightly visible and Kalyani noticed it so she immediately covered it up

Kalyani- Woh subhah ke liye sorry mujhe itna rudely nahi bolna chahiye tha

Atharva- No need to be sorry I can understand, by the way you both look really good together when are you going to introduce him to us

Kalyani- Thanks... Soon whenever we decide

Atharva- Ok then bye I need to go

Kalyani- Yaa bye...

Then Kalyani went inside the office and Atharva also left from there and thought- Kalyani looks so much in love, I am really very happy for her but us ladke se jalan hoti hai ki usse Kalyani mili kaash yeh kushi mere naseeb mein hoti. Chal koi baat nahi Atharva tere life mein bhi pyaar zaroor aayega

In afternoon Palak reached Kalyani's home to take some important notes for the college final exams and rang her door bell listening to which Madhuri opened the door.

Madhuri- Are Palak beta tum lekin Kalyani toh nahi hai woh toh iss wakt office mein hoti hai

Palak- Hello Aunty!!! Haan mujhe pata hai woh actually mein mujhe kuch important notes chahiye the final exams ke liye, Kalyani se baat ho gayi hai meri usne kahan uske study table par rakha hua hai toh wohi lene aayi thi le lun

Madhuri- Are haan haan kyun nahi jaao lelo uske room se tab tak main tumhare liye juice leke aati hun

Palak- Ok aunty

After few minutes Palak came with the notes and then sat with Madhuri in there hall and was drinking juice-

Madhuri- Aur padhayi kaesi chal rahi hai

Palak- Ek dum first class dekhna aap is baar mere hi number aayenge zyada

Madhuri- Haan haan kyun nahi

Palak- Aur aunty aapki aur uncle ki tabyat kaesi hai

Madhuri- Ek dum achi hai abhi abhi toh mere cousin ke bete ki wedding attend karke aayen hain hum

Palak- Ohh thats nice

Madhuri- Wese wedding se mujhe abhi yaad aaya hum jisdin gaye uske dusre din hi humari neighbour Kusum Ji bata rahi thi ki tum friends ne koi pyajama party rakhi thi, tumhari koi friend kuch time ke liye bahar jaa rahi thi ussi le liye kaunsi friend thi Neha ya Shreya

Palak- Yeh kya bol rahi hain aap aunty Kalyani se toh mile hume bahut time ho gaya hai last hum college mein hi mile the 1 mahine pehle fir exams mein busy ho gaye aur Neha aur Shreya toh yahin hain woh kahin nahi gaye aur humare jitne bhi common friends hain mujhe toh bilkul bhi yaad nahi agar koi abhi bahar gaya ho

Madhuri- Acha lekin Kalyani toh keh rahi thi....

Palak- Aunty woh kisi aur ka bol rahi hogi aapko koi misunderstanding hui hogi

Madhuri- Haan shayad tum sahi bol rahi

Palak- Acha aunty ab main chalti hun baad mein exams ke baad aake aaplog se milungi

Madhuri- Haan bye beta and all the best

Palak- Thanks aunty byee....

After that Palak went from there and at the evening when Kalyani arrived-

Kalyani- Madhuri kahan hai main aa gayi bahut bhook lagi hai jaldi khana laga de

Madhuri- Haan tu fresh ho main abhi laga deti hun

After few minutes Madhuri served Kalyani her food and sat with her in the dining table.

Madhuri- Acha Kalyani ek baat bata abhi jab hum bahar gaye the tab tune Kusum Ji se kahan tha ki teri ek dost bahar jaa rahi hai toh uske liye tumlogon ne pyajama party rakhi hai toh woh teri kaun si dost hai

After listening this Kalyani stopped in midway in taking a bite and hesitantly said- Woohhh..... Neha woh bahar gayi hui haina na ussi keliye diya tha party

After listening this Madhuri was shocked and asked- Lekin tumlogon ke toh final exams aa rahe hain usse exams nahi dena aur preparation uska kya

Kalyani- Wohhh... Actually... Haan... Ek family emergency thi issiliye usse jana pada woh preparation bhi kar rahi hai wahan aur exams start hone se pehle aa jayegi

Madhuri- Acha... Theek hain

After few minutes Kalyani was done with her dinner so she immediately went to her room to avoid more questions from her mother.

On the other hand Madhuri thought- Aaj pehli baar meri Kalyani mujhse jhooth bol rahi thi main bhi teri maa hun tujhe ache se jaanti hun ki kab tu sach aur kab jhooth bolti hai lekin question yeh hai ki tu jhooth bol kyun rahi thi aesi kya baat hai jo tu chupa rahi hai aur maine notice kiya hai ki kuch mahinon mein tu kitni badal gayi hai. Kya Atul ko bataun iss baare mein.... Nahi nahi rehne deti hun abhi pehle khud hi pata karti hun ek toh aese hi Kalyani ko leke itna sensitive hai agar yeh bataya toh pata nahi kitna stressed out ho jayega acha yeh hoga pehle main hi pata karun ki tu jhooth bol kyun rahi thi aur uss din raat bhar thi kahan.

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Yaar Shruti itna pyaara update!

Their lovey Dovey moments and family ke bareme Jaanna😍

Aisa lag raha hain dono ki already grahasthi Bas gayi hain🥹

Awww boyfriend se gift bhi mila I see😌😜

Atharva wale scenes bhi kitne pyaare the. Atharva bhi bohot Accha hain.

The last wala twist to mujhe bada maza aaya. Dekhne mein interesting hoga ki kaise madhuri KalMa ke relation ke bareme pata karti hain. Even pata kar paati hain bhi ya nehi…

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Believe me jab main forum mein aayi Tab bhi first mein tumhari story hi thi, Tag dekhne se pehle hi dekha ki tumne Update kiya hain. Subhe tumhare update karne ke ek ghante baad padha Maine aur Tab se do teen baar padha aur ab jaake comment kar rahi hoon. Bohot badiya laga Update Shruti. Genuinely very engaging.

Kahani bohot acche se aage badh rahi hain. Next update ka besabri se intezaar hain😳


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Thank you very much ❤️❤️. I am glad that you liked the update... Yes you are right mere story mein almost sabhi ache hi honge villain types toh abhi shayad hi mile. And Kalma ke relation ke baare mein kaese aur kab sab reveal hota hai Madhuri ko pata chalta hai ya nahi uske liye toh aage ke updates ke liye wait karna hoga. Till then stay tuned😉😉

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