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Posted: 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thank you πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

Yeah initial chapters mein kam hoge but mein baad mein jayada karungi. Will try to update soon ☺️☺️


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Yeah just wait to read πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


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Chapter 3


Next morning.

In Rawte house.


All the boys were getting ready to go to the office. Aai was making Suhana ready while Arav was sleeping peacefully in his cradle. Boys were in a hurry as they have to reach early today. Commissioner was coming with the new team.


Sameer : Aai breakfast tayar hai kya?? Late ho raha hai.


Aai : Haan beta tayar hi hai bas Soha ke baal band kar paros rahi hu.


Arjun : Aai aap rehne dijiye hum khud kar lege. Yeh Sam na sirf order dena janta hai, ek din khud kaam nahi kar sakta.


Choree giggles while Sameer glares at Arjun. They all quickly took their seats and started serving themselves.


Arjun : Aai aaj doctor aane wale hai Riya ke check up ke liye.


Aai : Haan beta mujhe yaad hai.


Soha : Baba Aai kab uthegi?


Arjun : Soha maine kitni baar kaha hai Riya apki Aai nahi hai.


Soha : Agar Arav aapko baba bol sakta hai toh main unhe Aai kyu nahi bol sakti. Mujhe kuch nahi pata wo meri Aai hai aur main unhe Aai hi bolugi.


Arjun : Soha .....


Sameer : Rehne do Arjun bachi hai wo.


Arjun : Par usse samjhana padega...


Shree : Dhire dhire samajh jayegi wo bhai.


Chotu : Haan Bhai ab gussa mat kijiye aur jaldi se nasta kijiye nahi toh humare chief pata haina jate hi datna shuru kar denge.


Sameer : Haan...... Kya kaha chotu??


Chotu : Kuch nahi bhai...


They all ate their breakfast and left for their office while Suhana went to her school.


In Maheshwari house.


All were having their breakfast with lots of fun.


Munna: Yaar bhabhi aap toh kya badhiya khana banate ho thoda kuch apni behano ko bhi sikha do.


Swapree : Munna tum kuch jayda nahi bol rahe? (Glaring at him)


Munna : Ma.. maine kaha kuch bola..


Preeti : kuch nahi kaho toh hi behtar hai samjhe?


Munna : (glamping his saliva) Samjh gaya.


Swati and Preeti kept glaring at Sanjay while Samaina and Raghav started laughing. Soon after they finish their breakfast and leave for the office. Girls on their scooties and bikes. They do have their own car but they prefer it that way.


In ETF headquarters.

Conference room.


(Note:- now whenever Sameer Rathore and Sameer Maheshwari will be together I will use Sameer for Sameer R. And Sam for Sameer M.)


Ayesha and Liza were waiting for the boys and Sakshi to arrive.


Ayesha : Aaj yeh log itna time kyu laga rahe hai.


Liza : Aate hi honge. Waise tujhe kya lagta hai unit 2 kaisi hogi?


Ayesha : Pata nahi yaar soch soch kar mera toh dimag hi kharab ho gaya hai. Bas itna suna hai ki unit 2 ke chief bahut hi jabaz hai.


Liza : Chief se yaad aaya ki tere aur Rathore sir ki gadi kaisi chal rahi hai?


Ayesha : Yaar kuch ho hi toh nahi raha hai.


Sameer : (entering the room with other boys) Kya nahi ho raha hai Ayesha?


Both the girls were shocked due to the sudden appearance of Boys and Ayesha started to fumble.


Ayesha : Ab ..... Wo .... Ab....



Liza : (rescuing her) Sir wo unit 2 ki baat kar rahi thi.


Arjun : Unit 2 ki?


Liza : Haan sir wo aisa bol rahi thi ki usse wait nahi ho raha unit 2 se milne ka.... Haina Ayesha..


Ayesha : Huhh... Haan sir....


Arjun was about to say something when the commissioner and some more people entered the conference room. They all went to a stiff pasture and saluted him and he nodded at them.


Sameer : Good morning sir.


Comm. : Good morning Rathore aur inse milo yeh hai ETF ki unit 2.


They all were stunned to see the team. They all were young boys and girls almost looked like some kids. They all looked so harmless and fragile.


Comm. : (Pointing at Sam) ACP Sameer Maheshwari chief of unit 2. Sharp shooter, undercover specialist and an amazing leader. Apni batch ka best student reh chuka hai yeh.


Sameer salutes them.


Comm. : (Pointing at Sanjay) ACP Sanjay Kumar, second in command. Right hand of Sameer. Sharp shooter and undercover specialist.


Sanjay saluted them.


Comm. : (Pointing at Naina) SI Naina Agarwal, third in command. Beauty with brains. Encounter and undercover specialist.


Naina salutes them.


Comm. : (Pointing at Swati) Inspector Swati Patel, research and undercover specialist. Her information is 100 % accurate.


Hearing research specialist boys felt a tingle in their hearts. Swati salutes them.


Comm. : (Pointing at Raghav and Preeti) Inspector Raghav Malhotra and Dr. Preeti Aggarwal. Raghav is Technical expert and undercover specialist. You can never doubt his hacking skills. While Preeti is a forensic doctor and fully trained in the field office.


Raghav and Preeti salutes them.


Comm. : (Pointing at Purab) Commando Purab Kapoor.


Before he could continue a voice interpreted them.


Voice : Purab tum..


That's it for today.


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Posted: 1 years ago
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Nice one!

Unit 1 ko Unit 2 bachche lagta hainπŸ˜πŸ™ˆ.

Sakshi, Pura ko janti hn?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#58

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Unit 2 ki entry ho gai yeh riya kab uthegi purab ko kisne awaz di fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Posted: 1 years ago
#60

Loved it Riyu dear

Just loved it

Hmm πŸ™„ new team seems to be capable

If possible do give faces ☺

So now ETF unit 2 will take charge

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon πŸ€—πŸ€—

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