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Posted: 1 years ago
#41

Loved it dear

Awesome and wonderful✨😍

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thanks for the pm and update


Part 5

Magnificent update.... brilliantly written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#43

Sitara went to see Prem and told him. Now its his call.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Sona will follow Rohit to tell him the truth. Even Prithvi agreed. What a surprise!

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Tu Meri Mehbooba...You are my beloved...Part 6

Rohit was shocked to see Sonakshi in his house.

Rohit:Sonakshi...why...why are you here?

Sona:Why?Have you restricted me from coming here?Don't I have the right to visit you?

Rohit looked at her painfully.

Rohit:There is no restriction from my side.I had given you the right to visit my heart every moment.But...

Tum ko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Ho raha hai judaa
Dono ka raasta


Sona:Yes,I refused to marry you.But you knew about the circumstance.

Rohit:Yes,I did not have any issue with it.

Sona:You told me that you will wait for me.Then what happened?

Rohit:I stopped waiting for you.Because I realized that waiting for you is meaningless.Because you belong to someone else and you can never be mine.But that does'nt mean that I will move on with someone else.Because in this birth,I can't love someone else.

Sonakshi became emotional.

Dur jaake bhi mujhse tum meri yaadon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna

Rohit:You did the right thing by agreeing to marry Prem Bharadwaj.I have heard that he is a nice guy.I wish you both a happy married life.Both of you live happily.

Sonakshi became upset.

Tum ko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Ho raha hai judaa
Dono ka raasta
Dur jaake bhi mujhse tum meri yaadon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna

Sonakshi:I don't need your wishes Dr.Rohit.

Rohit was stunned.

Rohit:Why?

Sona:Because I don't want to marry Premji.

Rohit was shocked:Sonakshi!

Sona:Prithvi bhaiyya lied to you that I agreed to marry Premji so that you will leave this place.He thought that if you leave this place,I will agree to marry Premji.

Rohit was shocked:It means you....?

Sona:No Dr.Rohit.I have not agreed to marry Premji.That wedding invitation card of mine and Premji was fake.I can never marry Premji.I can live single.But I can't marry anyone else other than you.Because you are the only person who could touch my heart.Though I never told you about my feelings openly,the truth is that I loved you silently.I am your beloved and I will be always your beloved.

Rohit smiled tearfully with relief.

Jitni thi khushiyaa
Sab kho chuki hai
Bas ek gham hai ki jaata nahi
Samjha ke dekha behla ke dekha
Dil hai ki chain isko aata nahi

Sona:But without trying to know my heart,you decided to leave me forever.You did'nt think once what I would feel when you leave?

Rohit wept:I am sorry Sonakshi.

Sonakshi wept:Please don't go Dr.Rohit.

Aarzoo hai ki hai angarai
Aag hai kab aankhon se behna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna

Rohit held her palm and said:How can I leave after knowing that you need me?Dr.Rohit is meant for Sonakshi.

They both wept.Rohit pecked her palm crying.

Rut aa rahi hai Rut jaa rahi hai
Dard ka mausam badla nahi
Rang yeh halka itna hai gehra
Sadiyon main hoga halka nahi
Halka nahi


Sonakshi embraced him.

Kaun jaane kya hona hai
Hum ko hai ab kya kya sehna

Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna

Sonakshi broke the embrace and asked him:That day you proposed me for marriage.But today I am proposing you.Will you marry me?

Rohit was surprised.

Tum ko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Ho raha hai judaa
Dono ka raasta

Rohit:You are ready to get married?

Sona:Yes.Even Prithvi bhaiyya let me be with you.If he had not agreed also,I would have come here.Because I felt that it was the right time for me to fight for my love.

Rohit was surprised.

Rohit:Let us get married soon Sonakshi.

She smiled.

They embraced each other and

joined their foreheads.

Dur jaake bhi mujhse tum meri yaadon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna(KANK).



Rohit-Sonakshi got married.

All were very happy.

Suman became very emotional and happy.

Suman held Sonakshi's hand and said:My biggest dream of seeing you as a bride has been fulfilled.

Sonakshi became emotional while Rohit smiled.

Vaishavi blessed them.

Sonakshi was feeling awkward to face Prem as she hurt him.

Prem:Sonakshi...I will always stand for you as a friend.

Sonakshi felt relieved and smiled.

Prem went near Sitara.

Prem:Thank you Sitara for telling me about Rohit and Sonakshi's unconditional love for each other.They truly deserve each other.

Sitara smiled.

Prem:I know that I hurt your heart.I feel sorry for that.

Sitara:You don't need to be sorry Premji.Because when you love someone,it's not possible to accept anyone else as your life partner.I know that.

Prem realized that Sitara loves him even now like she loved him before.

Prem:But do you mind becoming my friend?

Sitara was surprised.

Sitara thought:Though Premji does'nt love me,becoming his friend is a bonus for me.

Sitara:Yes sure.I will be glad to be your friend.

Prem smiled.

They shook hands.


Prithvi to Rohit-Sonakshi:I hurt both of you very much because of my greed.But I realized that in front of your selfless love,my greed for money was nothing.Now I want both of you to be happy more tha anyone else.Please forgive me.

Rohit smiled.

Sonakshi smiled emotionally:Bhaiyya!

Suman was very happy.

Suman:I am glad that finally you became your sisters' brother.

Prithvi hugged Suman emotionally.



Rohit-Sonakshi had a romantic wedding night.

After 6 months...

All were celebrating Holi.

Prem went near Sitara:Happy holi Sitara.Sitara:Happy Holi Premji.

Prem:I want to talk to you.

Sitara:Now?

Prem:Yes.Now itself.

Sitara:Ok Premji.

Prem:Sitara...I believe that we should be with the one who loves us and not with the one we love.That's why I let Sonakshi go with Rohit.Because though I loved Sonakshi,she never loved me.But you loved me.So I decided to give a chance to our relationship.That's the reason I made friends with you.Because I wanted to explore our relationship and see whether you will be able to love my Dadi like I do.

Sitara was stunned.

Sitara thought:Premji wanted to give a chance to me and that's why he made friends with me?

Prem:I realized that you love and care for my dadi more than I do.

Sitara smiled.

Sitara:I became a normal doctor to your dadi first.But I as I went closer to her,I realized that she had become my dadi too.How can I not love my dadi?Your dadi is my dadi also.Right?

Suddenly Sitara realized what she said.

Prem smiled.

Prem:Yes,my dadi is your dadi also as I am yours.

Sitara could not believe her ears.

Sitara:What did you mean?

Prem kept his hands on her shoulders and said:I wanted my life partner to love my dadi also.I know about your love for me.But seeing how you love my dadi I started respecting you.But seeing you love me without expecting anything from me,my respect for you increased.

Prem cupped her face in his hands and said:Unknowingly you captured my heart Sitara.I never thought that I would love you though I wanted to accept you as my life partner just because you love me and my dadi.But your selfless love made me love you.I love you Sitara.

Sitara embraced him emotionally.He caressed her.

Prem asked her:Will you marry me?

Sitara:I will marry you infinite times Premji as you are Prince Charming.I love you Premji.

They smiled at each other breaking their embrace.

Prem-Sitara danced.

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh bole re zamaana kharabi ho gayi...
Mere ang Raja jo tera rang laga
Toh seedhi-saadi chori sharabi ho gayi

Itna mazaa, kyun aa raha hai
Tune hawaa mein bhaang milaaya

Itna mazaa, kyun aa raha hai
Tune hawaa mein bhaang milaaya
Dugna nasha, kyun ho rahaa hai
Aankhon se meetha tune khilaaya

Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi
Manchali chaal kaise nawaabi ho gayi
Toh....

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi-saadi chori sharabi ho gayi
Haa Jeans pehen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)

Teri kalayi hai haaton mein aayi hai
Maine maroda to lagti malayi hai
Menhga padega rasta malai ka
Upvaas karne main teri bhalaayi hai
Bindiya teri main ?? ho gayi
Dil ke armaano main behisaabi ho gayi


Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi-saadi chori sharabi ho gayi
Haa Jeans pehen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)

Hey.. hey.. hey.. hey..

Kyun no vacancy ki, hothon pe gaali hai
Jabki tere dil ka kamraa toh khaali hai
Kamra toh khaali hai...
Kamra toh khaali hai...

Mujhko pata hai re,
Kya chahata hai tu
Boli Bhajan teri,
Neeyat Qawwali hai

Zulmi ye, haajir jawaabi ho gayi
Tu toh har taale ki aaj chaabi ho gayi
Toh...

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi-saadi chori sharabi ho gayi
Haa Jeans pehen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi-saadi chori sharabi ho gayi
Haa Jeans pehen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi

Haan, bole re zamaana kharabi ho gayi
Haan, bole re zamaana kharabi ho gayi...

(YJHD).

They took photographs with Prem's friends and cousins.

Sonakshi put colour on Rohit's face.

Rohit rubbed his cheek with his romantically.

Rohit:Now I have coloured you.

Sonakshi was blushing.

Prem-Sitara got engaged.

Vaishnavi:I wished for Sonakshi as Prem's life partner.But I realized that you are also gold like Sonakshi.My Prem won't get a better life partner.

Prem-Sitara smiled.

Vaishnavi:Get married fast.Because I can't wait for my grand children.

Prem-Sitara became shy.

Rohit:Wishing you both the best for the future.

Prem-Sitara:Thank you.

Sonakshi:I had been longing to see you both together even since I realized Sitara's love for Premji.I am very happy that you both have finally united.

Rohit-Sonakshi were smiling.

Prem-Sitara smiled.




Prem-Sitara got married.

After some months.....

Sonakshi went near Rohit and said:A 3rd person is coming..

Rohit was confused.

Sonakshi said shyly touching her belly:In my womb...the symbol of our love.

Rohit was surprised:Really?

Sona:Yes.I tested in our hospital lab itself.

Rohit became so happy that he embraced her from behind encircling his arms around her belly.

Prem bought a doll and brought it for Sitara.Sitara caressed the doll.

Prem:Why did you make me buy this doll?

Sitara stared at him:Why?I can't ask you for a doll?

Prem:Nothing like that.But you are not a child to play with a doll.

Sitara:Why only children can play with dolls?Pregnant women crave for certain things and I craved for this doll.Till my delivery,this doll will be my baby.After our baby comes to this world,I will hand over this doll to our baby.Don't tease me.

Prem:Your pregnancy mood swings are impossible.

Sitara frowned at him.

Prem:You look cute when you are angry.

Sitara smiled.

Prem:Finally my angry queen smiled.I am happy.

They smiled and embraced each other.



A baby girl was born for Rohit-Sonakshi and Prem-Sitara.

Rohit:Our Aanchal has arrived Sonakshi...

Sonakshi smiled.

Sitara looked at the baby and said:Our baby's name would be Anjali.

Prem smiled.

Years passed....

Rohit-Sonakshi and Prem-Sitara lived happily with their daughters Aanchal and Anjali.

The end



As I mentioned earlier this story was inspired from the malayalam movie Mizhirendilum.But I changed it's story.In the movie Prem has only a half paralyzed sister.She only made someone lie to Rohit that Prem Sonakshi's marriage is fixed.Prithvi had a change in the movie also.But Rohit committed suicide after knowing about Prem-Sonakshi's marriage.So Sonakshi lost her mental balance.Prem took her responsibility.He gave her treatment and she got cured.They got married and in the climax scene Sonakshi was pregnant.Sitara remained single.She did not have any love interest after her marriage alliance with Prem got cancelled.


Thank u so much for supporting this SS.Plz write ur fav scenes,favourite couple,favourite character and why u liked that character the most.

Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#46

Beautiful end of a wonderful journey✈️

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing✍️✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#47

What a guy. Sona has found herself a gem.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#48

Sona proposed this time. Right thing to do.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#49

Prem is still in love with Sona. Sitara will have to wait.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#50

Prem has finally started loving Sitara.

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