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Posted: 7 months ago

Thank you for updating 


Part 35


Fabulous Update 


Geet's sisters can see the love and care between Maan and Geet

while Maan has truly settled so well and gels so well with everyone 

oh so Geet is stealing glances at Maan seeing the bride and groom to be 

so much in love 

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Posted: 7 months ago

Nice update 

Maan Geet spending time with family, Geet feel happy for her sister but want same happy life but if maan related to that killing then will Geet forgive him or not 

Update soon 

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Posted: 7 months ago

Part 36

The bride walks into front of everyone wearing the lehenga

The groom gets up looking at her and just admiring her

Geet looks at the groom’s reaction and the love between the bride and groom

A little sigh escapes her lips as she looks at Maan from corner of her eyes

Maan who was playing with Aadya with no care of the world

Maan notices Geet with his peripheral vision

Geet feels so happy for her sister, she is so happy at everything…every moment she is enjoying as a bride. All the moments and gestures she will never get to experience

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The wedding preparations continue

Groom’s relatives also keep arriving for small ceremonies

Maan’s new kid friend Aaadya befriends another kid Tia from groom’s side

 

But shaadi ke beech mein Aadya ki aur Tia ki ladai hoti jaati hai hai 

Tia hits Aadya and her nose starts to bleed

Geet ladne jaati hai Tia ki mom se ye sab dekh ke

G- Aapki bachchi sorry bolegi

But Tia’s mom is arrogant and says no. 

Tia’s mom- Ek aap ladki wale, 2nd your kid was touching my kid's doll, 3rd ek baar jhuk gai toh baat baar jhukna hoga. 

G- Let both kids say sorry and let it be. Our kid touched the doll but your kid hit her and made her bleed. 

Behas ho rahi hai 

Maan comes

He hears everything 

He looks at Aadya and  asks her to apologize. 

Aadya is heartbroken

Geet is shocked and pissed at Maan

She pulls Maan aside

G- What are you doing? Huh? Aadta looks up to you and you are teaching her to be sissy?  Isliye tum Dubai se bhaag aaye naa! Because you are a sissy!

Maan does not say anything

Aadya apologizes to Tia and her mom while wiping her tears

Geet looks away from Maan in disgust and stomps off

+++++

Maan takes Aadya to her favorite ice cream shop 

But she is sitting with a grumpy face

M- Why are you not eating, it's your favorite

Aadya- You are my favorite but your favorite is Tia

M- That's not true

Aadya- You took her side

M- I am always on your side. So I want you to become a nice kid. You are getting a better image

Aadya- What does that mean?

M-When something bad happens, people won't suspect you. If you have a bad image, you become the first person people suspect. After today, Tia's family image will get much worse

Aadya- I don't care. I only apologized and only I got a nosebleed. I feel wronged

M- Don't feel too wronged

Maan says patting her head

M- I saw earlier that Tia was crying at her way home because she lost her doll

Aadya- Really?

Maan nods

Flashback of Maan throwing away the doll

Present -

M- It's bcoz she leaves her things anywhere. You should never do that

Aadya- Okay

M- Now let's eat

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Posted: 7 months ago

Thanks for update


Part 36

Riveting update… astoundingly written 

feeling for Geet

she missed out all on these experiences

Gosh Tia hits Aadya on her nose

of cos Tia's mom blames Aadya

great that Geet intervened

however Maan made Aadya apologise

Geet's anger was justified

Aadya was indeed upset

glad that Maan spoke to Aadya 

as expected he assures her

so that's why Maan made Aadya to apologise 

well Maan threw Tia's doll away


update soon

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Posted: 7 months ago

Nice update 

Wedding also over now Maan Geet will leave from there, let's see what happens next will they give Chance to their relationship or not 

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Posted: 7 months ago

Loved it dear Neelu

Awesome update 😃

Maan behaviour is bit suspicious but I think it has something more which we will learn in the coming parts of the update 😃

Rituals are going good 😊 & I loved how Maan had calmed his little friend after the mess & what he said was really deep & correct

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 7 months ago

Part 36


Awesome Update 


Geet enjoying the wedding 

while Maan teaching Aadya to apologize 

though Geet was angry 

but it's great teaching children how they should behave 

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Posted: 7 months ago

Great part

Hope maan is not behind this 

And if Geet is after this case how will they accept it

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm 

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Posted: 7 months ago

awesome updates

maan is wierd somehow

but hebis good with kids

eagerly waiting to know more about him

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Part 37

Maan says patting her head

M- I saw earlier that Tia was crying at her way home because she lost her doll

Aadya- Really?

Maan nods

Flashback of Maan throwing away the doll

Present -

M- It's bcoz she leaves her things anywhere. You should never do that

Aadya- Okay

M- Now let's eat

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It was the wedding day.

Maan was getting dressed in the sherwani that Geet’s parents had asked him to wear

As he was buttoning up the sherwani; Geet enters

G- Ye nahi. Ye pehno

She hands over the black raincoat to him

Maan frowns in confusion

M- Yeh?

G- Pehno naa

She asks him sweetly while stepping up to help him wear the raincoat

She pulls over the hoodie as well

Maan is observing her intently

She moves back to take a good look at him

G- Nah! Nahi pehchaan paa rahi

M- Kya hua? Mujhe raincoat kyun pehna rahi ho

He says with a very emotion devoid tone

G- Yaad hai uss raat tumne ye raincoat pehna tha. Aur pata hai woh reporter ke murder wale case mein bhi uss murderer ne raincoat pehna tha. Joh hu TV pe dekh rahe the

Maan scoffs and quickly removes the raincoat

M- Toh kya hua? Raincoats like these are common

Geet’s gaze is fixed on him

M- Or do you think I went out in the middle of the night and committed murder?

Geet chuckles at his words

G- When you came in like this that day toh main tumhe pehchaan nahi paayi kuch pal ke liye. I was scared. 

He gives a rehearsed smile while gazing at her face while she continues

G-But agar main tumhe nahi pehchaan paayi toh woh witness itni sure kaise hai ki usne khooni ko saaf saaf dekha hai

M- Khooni ko kisne dekha hai?

He asks with a serious tone

She looks up at him with a meaningful look

G- Kisi ne dekha hai. Mujhe kya pata. News mein hai

He nods

M- Waise tumhe achanak itni dilchaspi…

G- well…i like mysteries you know that

She says with a shrug to lighten the situation

M- That’s why I told you to continue being a detective 

She shrugs again

G- Waise late ho raha hai. Main bhi ready ho jaati hoon

He nods, while walking out of the room

He stops midway

M- Waise…

She looks towards him

M- You need me to help you?

He says with a slight rakish grin

Her eyes widen and her cheeks acquire a color while she vigorously shakes her head

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Maan goes to the backyard away from all the crowd and the hustle

His heart feels heavy

He is looking at the full moon

He sits there alone for few long minutes

He puts his hand inside the pocket and finds those earrings still there

He had seen Geet’s sadness while buying the lehenga for her sister

He knows she is not jealous of her sister, just misses what her sister has in her life she doesn’t

Who would know better than him that how difficult it is to live with a secret

It is is suffocating

It kills you everyday

It kills you every moment

Hence he had bought these earrings for her 

He had hoped these would cheer her up a little

He had decided to gift these to her before the wedding so she could wear them in the wedding

He puts them into his pocket

Maybe some other day

He hopes