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Part 35



Mehek- Mummy-Papa ko lagta hai ye arrange marriage hai. Sohail ko toh Minu pehle se jaanti hai. Love marriage ko arrange marriage ka roop diya hai dono ne milke

Geet chuckles with surprise and gasps

G- Tu toh super chalu nikli

Minu giggles

Minu- Apne bhi toh apne pasand ke ladke se shaadi Karli. Toh maine bhi follow kar liya

Geet loses her smile

Minu- Kya hua, di? Humein toh ye hi lag raha tha kia ap aur jiju ek dusre ko pehle se jaante the. Aur jo hua isliye kyunki aapke rishte ke baare mein sab ko pata chal gaya. Aap…ap ne…sach mein apni pasand se shaadi nahi kari?

G- Emm…nahi..woh aisa..nahi…woh

Mehek- Kya bakwas kar rahi hai! Dekha nahi jiju kis tarah dekhte rehte hain di ko…hye! Jaise duniya mein aur kuch hai hi nahi

Minu- Haan. Di, aap jab baat karte ho naa…jiju ki nazrein toh bass aap pe hi rehti hain. Aisa woh dreamy wala look. Jaise duniya khatam hai, usmein mein bass aap ho aur woh hain

Mehek-Hain aa! Tu ne bhi notice kiya naa

Geet smiles and blushes a little hearing about her sisters revelations

Tabhi there are loud knocks on the door

Mehek opens the door and their mother barges in

Ma- Kya kar rahi hai, Geet! Jamai ji dhund rahe hain tujhe saare ghar mein. Maine kaha hai unhe kamre mein aaram karne ke liye, jaa jaake puch kuch chahiye ki nahi unhe

G- Aap hi puch leti naa ki kuch chahiye ki nahi. Main kya puchun alag se?

Geet retaliates

Ma- Chup Ho jaa! Harr cheez woh mujhe bata sakte hain kya? Kuch baatein pati-patni ke beech hoti hai naa…aisi koi baat hogi. Itne saal shaadi ho gai hai, kuch akal nahi aayi hai!

Maa grumbles

Geet walks to the room they are allocated

She witnesses Maan looking confused and staring at the bed

G- Kya hua? Tum dhundh rahe the mujhe/

Maan looks over his shoulder as she walks towards him

M- Haan woh…I was making my bed toh extra chadar milti toh…

G- Haan. Main deti hoon

She starts to find the extra bedsheet

G- Ye lo

She hands over the sheet to him

M- Thanks

He goes to spread the sheet on the floor near the bathroom

G- Arre tum yahan kyun…?

She looks around. Room mein zayada jagah nahi hai. He is a big man. Saara room shaadi ke saamaan se bhara hai

M- I will be fine

Maan was going to lay down but Geet stands in front of him snatching off the sheet

G- Nahi! Tum bed pe so jao

M- I will be fine

G- No!

She puts her foot down

Badi Badi aankein dikhati hai Maan ko

M- Phir tum kahan…?

G- Bed kaafi bada hai dono aa jayenge. Hyederabad wale ghar ka bed single bed hai ye queen size bed hai, dono aaram se aa jaayenge

He nods

M- Okay

G- Tum so jao. Main aati hoon

M- Jaldi so jaana nahi toh tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi

She nods

Geet goes back to her sisters

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Its late in the night when Geet enters their room silently

Its dark, she slowly opens the door as silently as possible as to not wake Maan up

Maan is sleeping on the far corner of the bed on his side with his back towards her side of the bed

Geet could see his profile in the dark as the moon light is entering through the window

He is sleeping comfortably unlike the uncomfort he has to face on the floor, she thinks

She impulsively puts her hand gently on his arm for a moment and then retrieves to her side of the bed to sleep

Maan opens his eyes. Wide awake. But doesn’t move so that Geet ko pata na chale that he

is awake

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Next morning-

The whole family is at the breakfast table

Ghar wale Maan ko ache se naashta karwa rahe hain

TV chal raha tha

TV ke news mein aata hai about; Abhijeet-the reported ka murder and that police is reopening the case of the notorious serial killer from 10 years back as this killing pattern is similar and the suspect is the son of that serial killer

Maan is gazing at the tv intensely

Geet is also looking at the news intensely

While Maa - papa are discussing about the case from 10 years

Sisters are also in the discussion

So now the murderer is aware that law is looking for him

Geet thinks in her head as Maan slowly unclenches his jaw and brings back his usual amicable smile on his face

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The ladies of the house are planning to for the lehenga finalization

One of their cousins ‘Swati’ also arrives along with her little 5 year old daughter

She is a friendly kid who gets along with everyone

During the chaos of the wedding and the ladies the kid is asking for maggie noodles and the mother is scolding her to eat healthy

The kid was sad and grumpy

Maan makes the maggie and brings it for the kid

The kid’s eyes lights up with happiness and that seals the friendship between him & Aadya

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All the ladies go for the lehenga shopping

Maan joins them as well as with Aadya’s insistence. Anyway’s he didn’t want to stay at home with Geet’s dad

All the ladies were with the bride while Maan & Aadya were at a corner playing

The groom was also there with his mother

The bride had gone to change into the lehenga after the final stitch

Geet and Mehek were helping Minu with the lehenga

The sisters are emotional and joyful seeing their sister in the bride’s dress

The bride walks into front of everyone wearing the lehenga

The groom gets up looking at her and just admiring her

Geet looks at the groom’s reaction and the love between the bride and groom

A little sigh escapes her lips as she looks at Maan from corner of her eyes

Maan who was playing with Aadya with no care of the world

Maan notices Geet with his peripheral vision

Geet feels so happy for her sister, she is so happy at everything…every moment she is enjoying as a bride. All the moments and gestures she will never get to experience

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Posted: a year ago

Beautiful part Neelu dear 😍

Just loved it 🤗

Well Geet & Maan are coming closer in this marriage ceremony & we can see stealing glances as well as the love which they have in their heart

Even Geet sisters didn't fail to notice this & teased Geet on the same that Maan really loves her making her shy as well as guilt concious

Even Maan is adhering to the rituals as well as his relationship with Geets family members and giving each member respect & response accordingly

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: a year ago

Hi hope you are well.

how's your mom feeling?

thanks for the pm and update


Part 35

Fascinating update... eloquently written

Mehak did have a point how Maan looks at Geet

well Geet was worried that Maan would sleep on the floor

so she insisted that they share the bed

Geet realised that Maan slept comfortably on the bed

now Geets to know that Abhishek is dead and the son of the serial killer is the suspect

Maan seemed interested in this news

great that Maan went along shopping

Geet's thoughts were reasonable


update soon

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Posted: a year ago

Thank you for updating


Part 35


Fabulous Update


Geet's sisters can see the love and care between Maan and Geet

while Maan has truly settled so well and gels so well with everyone

oh so Geet is stealing glances at Maan seeing the bride and groom to be

so much in love

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Posted: 12 months ago

Nice update

Maan Geet spending time with family, Geet feel happy for her sister but want same happy life but if maan related to that killing then will Geet forgive him or not

Update soon

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Posted: 12 months ago

Part 36

The bride walks into front of everyone wearing the lehenga

The groom gets up looking at her and just admiring her

Geet looks at the groom’s reaction and the love between the bride and groom

A little sigh escapes her lips as she looks at Maan from corner of her eyes

Maan who was playing with Aadya with no care of the world

Maan notices Geet with his peripheral vision

Geet feels so happy for her sister, she is so happy at everything…every moment she is enjoying as a bride. All the moments and gestures she will never get to experience

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The wedding preparations continue

Groom’s relatives also keep arriving for small ceremonies

Maan’s new kid friend Aaadya befriends another kid Tia from groom’s side

But shaadi ke beech mein Aadya ki aur Tia ki ladai hoti jaati hai hai

Tia hits Aadya and her nose starts to bleed

Geet ladne jaati hai Tia ki mom se ye sab dekh ke

G- Aapki bachchi sorry bolegi

But Tia’s mom is arrogant and says no.

Tia’s mom- Ek aap ladki wale, 2nd your kid was touching my kid's doll, 3rd ek baar jhuk gai toh baat baar jhukna hoga.

G- Let both kids say sorry and let it be. Our kid touched the doll but your kid hit her and made her bleed.

Behas ho rahi hai

Maan comes

He hears everything

He looks at Aadya and asks her to apologize.

Aadya is heartbroken

Geet is shocked and pissed at Maan

She pulls Maan aside

G- What are you doing? Huh? Aadta looks up to you and you are teaching her to be sissy? Isliye tum Dubai se bhaag aaye naa! Because you are a sissy!

Maan does not say anything

Aadya apologizes to Tia and her mom while wiping her tears

Geet looks away from Maan in disgust and stomps off

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Maan takes Aadya to her favorite ice cream shop

But she is sitting with a grumpy face

M- Why are you not eating, it's your favorite

Aadya- You are my favorite but your favorite is Tia

M- That's not true

Aadya- You took her side

M- I am always on your side. So I want you to become a nice kid. You are getting a better image

Aadya- What does that mean?

M-When something bad happens, people won't suspect you. If you have a bad image, you become the first person people suspect. After today, Tia's family image will get much worse

Aadya- I don't care. I only apologized and only I got a nosebleed. I feel wronged

M- Don't feel too wronged

Maan says patting her head

M- I saw earlier that Tia was crying at her way home because she lost her doll

Aadya- Really?

Maan nods

Flashback of Maan throwing away the doll

Present -

M- It's bcoz she leaves her things anywhere. You should never do that

Aadya- Okay

M- Now let's eat

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Posted: 12 months ago

Thanks for update


Part 36

Riveting update… astoundingly written

feeling for Geet

she missed out all on these experiences

Gosh Tia hits Aadya on her nose

of cos Tia's mom blames Aadya

great that Geet intervened

however Maan made Aadya apologise

Geet's anger was justified

Aadya was indeed upset

glad that Maan spoke to Aadya

as expected he assures her

so that's why Maan made Aadya to apologise

well Maan threw Tia's doll away


update soon

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Posted: 12 months ago

Nice update

Wedding also over now Maan Geet will leave from there, let's see what happens next will they give Chance to their relationship or not

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Posted: 12 months ago

Loved it dear Neelu

Awesome update 😃

Maan behaviour is bit suspicious but I think it has something more which we will learn in the coming parts of the update 😃

Rituals are going good 😊 & I loved how Maan had calmed his little friend after the mess & what he said was really deep & correct

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 12 months ago

Part 36


Awesome Update


Geet enjoying the wedding

while Maan teaching Aadya to apologize

though Geet was angry

but it's great teaching children how they should behave

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