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Part 2

Wonderful update..... greatly written


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Part 1


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My ex-girlfriend and my fiancee Part 3

Reyaansh,Ruhaan,Pari and Mishti were chatting.

Reyaansh:I wish there was rain here.

Pari:If you really want rain,I can create it for you?

Reyaansh:How?

Pari brought a jug of water and walked towards Reyaansh.

She poured that water on him.


Vandhaai oru nodiyil

vizhiyilae

Thandhaai oru puyalae

uyirilae

Kottum mazhai thuliyin

naduvilae

Kollum unadhazhagil uruginen

Everyone laughed.

Reyaansh chased her

and caught her.

Kalavaram thandhaai

pennae oru paarvayil

Uyirvarai thindraai

ennai oru velaiyil

Tharaiyinil thathi

thaavum oru vaanavil

Reyaansh:You also get drenched in the rain created by you.

He shook his head making the water drops from his head fall on her.They giggled.

Thagavalae illai aanaal

arugae puyaal

Kolladhae kolladhae

un kangal kaththi pookkal

Thulladhae thulladhae

adi paavam ingae aangal

Thannalae thannalae

en nenjil edho koochal

Unnaalae unnaalae

Unknowingly they shared an eye lock.


Puriyamalae unnai paarkiren

Nijama idhu ennai ketkiren


Vandhaai oru nodiyil vizhiyilae

Thandhaai oru puyalae uyirilae

Kottum mazhai thuliyin naduvilae

Kollum unadhazhagil uruginen

Suddenly it started raining.All were surprised.

Reyaansh took Pari to the rain.

Mishti twirled around in the rain.

Vandhaai oru nodiyil vizhiyilae

Thandhaai oru puyalae uyirilae

Kottum mazhai thuliyin naduvilae

Kollum unadhazhagil uruginen


Ruhaan was lost in her.

PURIYAMALAE UNNAI PAARKIREN

NIJAMA IDHU ENNAI KETKIREN (ENNA SOLLA POGIRAI
).

Suddenly he became dull.

Ruhaan thought:Pari is my fiancee.But my eyes are fixed on Mishti.Why?What is happening to me?


Days passed by...

Ruhaan's mind was full of Mishti.

Ruhaan was standing against the wall.Suddenly he saw Mishti next to him and he smiled at her.

Suddenly he vanished.

Ruhaan went out.There he saw Mishti walking looking at him.His face blossomed.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Suddenly Mishti vanished.

Ruhaan became sad.


Ruhaan saw Mishti near him and he cupped her face in his palms.

Ruhaan:Mishti!

Suddenly she disappeared disappointing him.


Ruhaan imagined Mishti pressing her lips on his forehead with pure romance.

He was shocked when he came back to senses realising that it was his dream.

Ruhaan:My fiancee is Pari.Mishti is only my ex-girlfriend.Not my ex-girlfriend,but my fake ex-girlfriend.Still I am thinking only of Mishti.I think I have fallen in love with Mishti.

Ruhaan was becoming restless.



Ruhaan went to meet Mishti with a bouquet of red roses.

Mishti was stunned.

Mishti:Ruhaan,what is this?

Ruhaan stammered:I..Mishti..I...

Mishti:What?

Ruhaan:When you are not with me,I miss you.I feel like seeing you.I realized that this is love.I love you Mishti.

Unakkaaga thaane naan uyir vaazhgiren

En uyir naadi neethaanadi

Nee illai endral naan ennaguven

En swasam neethaanadi

Mishti was shocked.

Ruhaan:While narrating the fake love story to Pari,unknowingly I imagined your face as my ex-girlfriend.I did not know why.But now I feel that God made me imagine you as my girlfriend as you are meant for me.

Unakkaaga thaane naan uyir vaazhgiren

En uyir naadi neethaanadi

Nee illai endral naan ennaguven

En swasam neethaanadi

Misti was shocked.She remembered her friendship moments with Pari.

Mishti:Then what about Pari?She is your fiancee.

Ruhaan:She is my fiancee,but she is not my beloved or lover.She became my fiancee only because of exchanging rings,not because of exchanging hearts.

En ullam nee vandhu udaithaalum kooda

Udayamal unnai en uyirai kaapaen

Ennalum nee ennai veruthalum kooda

Neengamal nirkum un ninaivil vaazhven

Ketkintra isaai ellaam neethaanadi

Naan parkintra thisai ellam neethanadi


Mishti:Sorry Ruhaan.I just acted as your girlfriend.I don't love you.I think you mistook our love drama for real.You belong only to Pari.

Ruhaan became upset.

Adi naan patta

Kaayangal azhinthalumey

Ada naan konda

Kaadhal azhiyaathadee

Suddenly Pari came there.

Pari:What a surprise to see Ruhaan here!Why Ruhaan is holding red roses?

Ruhaan and Mishti became nervous thinking how to escape from this question.

Suddenly Mishti lied:Ruhaan came here as I had told him that you will come here.

So he came here to give you these roses.

Pari was surprised:Really?

Ruhaan lied:Yes.

He gave the roses to Pari.

Pari:Thank you Ruhaan.It's so beautiful.

Mishti tried hard to control her tears.

Unakkaaga thaane naan uyir vaazhgiren

En uyir naadi neethanadi

Nee illai endral naan ennaguven

En swasam neethanadi

Ruhaan told this incident to Reyaansh.

Reyaansh was shocked.

Reyaansh:What?Did I hear anything wrong?

Ruhaan:No.You heard it right.I don't love Pari.I love Mishti.But she does'nt love me.

I don't know what to do.I feel depressed.

Reyaansh felt upset.



Ruhaan rang up Mishti.

Ruhaan:Mishti!

Hearing his voice itself, Mishti's eyes got filled up with tears.

Ruhaan:Mishti...I am serious about you.Are you sure that you have no soft corner for me?

Mishti was silent.She was feeling pain in her heart.

Unakkaaga thaane naan uyir vaazhgiren

En uyir naadi neethanadi


Ruhaan asked her painfully:Is there any hope Mishti?

Mishti wept silently.



Nee illai endral naan ennaguven

En swasam neethanadi

Mishti:No.I told you that I don't love you.Please stop contacting me if you want to talk about it.

She cut the call and cried.Ruhaan was shattered as he lost his last hope.

Unakkaaga thaane naan uyir vaazhgiren

En uyir naadi neethanadi

Nee illai endral naan ennaguven

En swasam neethanadi


(ENNA SOLLA POGIRAI)



Reyaansh noticed it.He felt sad.



Reyaansh met Mishti.

Reyaansh:I came here to tell you an important matter regarding Ruhaan.

Mishti became dull.

Reyaansh:You know that Ruhaan loves you.Ruhaan told me that he had confessed his love to you,but you rejected him.

Mishti was stunned.

Reyaansh:And I know that you also love him.So it's better that you both unite.

Mishti:Sorry Reyaansh.I don't want to talk about it.2 days later is Ruhaan and Pari's wedding.So you should focus on your brother's wedding with your colleague Pari.

Reyaansh became upset.

On the wedding day of Ruhaan and Pari....


Mishti was restless thinking of Ruhaan-Pari wedding.

Mishti prayed:Oh God!Please give me peace of mind and help me to accept the fact that Ruhaan does'nt belong to me.

Hearing the calling bell ring,Mishti opened the door.She was shocked.

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Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part

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Part 3

amazing update.... brilliantly written


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Part 2


Fantastic Update

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Part 3


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My ex-girlfriend and my fiancee Part 4

On the wedding day of Ruhaan and Pari....

Mishti was restless thinking of Ruhaan-Pari wedding.

Mishti prayed:Oh God!Please give me peace of mind and help me to accept the fact that Ruhaan does'nt belong to me.

Hearing the calling bell ring,Mishti opened the door.She was shocked.It was Ruhaan.

Mishti:Today is your wedding.Why are you here?You should be in your wedding place.

Ruhaan:No,I am in the right place.I should be here.

Mishti was stunned.

Aasai nooraagi pooga

Aadai noolaagi pooga

Kannaeae kannaadi aaga


Aasai nooraagi pooga

Aadai noolaagi pooga

Kannaeae kannaadi aaga

Mishti:Why are you here Ruhaan?

Ruhaan:Even after I fell in love with you,I decided to marry Pari thinking that you don't love me.But now I know that you also love me.That's why I came here.

Mishti was shocked.


Theendal un saavi

endru thaedi pooga

Thoondil unn vaasam

endru aadi pooga

Oor kangal romba

thollai endraaga

Kattikondu mutham vaithu

ondraaga kaadhalaaga



Ruhaan told her what happened.


Flash back...

Ruhaan was weeping thinking of Mishti.Pari went near him.

Pari:Why are you crying Ruhaan?

Ruhaan wiped his tears.

Ruhaan:I am not crying.

Pari:You were thinking of Mishti.Right?

Ruhaan was stunned.

Pari:I know that you love Mishti and you cried because you felt that you lost her.

Ruhaan looked at her with a shock.

Pari:You may be thinking how I know it.I will tell you that.But Ruhaan...you have not lost Mishti.If you love her,you can marry her.We will call off our wedding.

Ruhaan was shocked.

Ruhaan:But Mishti does not love me.She used to love someone else whom she lost.But i guess..she still loves him.

Reyaansh came there hearing that.

Reyaansh:You are right.Mishti loves the same person now also.But that person is you Ruhaan.Since I am her friend I know that.

Ruhaan was shocked:What?

Reyaansh:You saw Mishti only as my friend in college.You did'nt even notice her.But Mishti used to observe you without your knowledge.She used to love you.But since you were not minding her.she was sure that you were not interested in him.So she told me not to tell you about her love for you.That's why I hid it from you.

Ruhaan was shocked.

Reyaansh:I hid another thing from you.Pari and I love each other.

Ruhaan got another shock.

Reyaansh:Pari and I met each other when there was traffic block on the road.

As you know,later we started working together.

Pari:I was love phobic.But Reyaansh made me understand the beauty of love by loving me unconditionally.

Reyaansh:But since our parents chose you for Pari,we were helpless.

Pari:To break our alliance only I lied that I don't believe in love and relationships.But still you did'nt back out from the wedding.

Reyaansh:So we planned a drama.Purposefully I convinced Mishti and brought her here to act as your ex-girl friend to bring you both closer.

Pari:Though by bringing Mishti to your life,we wanted you to cancel your wedding with me,we genuinely wanted you to get your true love.

Reyaansh:I knew that your true love was Mishti and I had seen her sincere love for you since our college days.Still she is single because of her deep love for you.

Pari:Once Mishti saw us together and she mistook Reyaansh for you.Her heart pained thinking that it was you who was with me.She thinks that we did'nt see her.But actually we had seen her leaving with tears in her eyes.

(Reference to Part2 scene.Please read this scene again as in Part2 I had kept Reyaansh-Pari's conversation a secret)

Reyaansh went to Pari's house.

Reyaansh:Let us start our new play's writing.

Pari:No Rey.I am not in a mood for that.

Reyaansh:Why?

Pari:Reyaansh,I am scared whether our plan will work out.Will we be able to unite?

Reyaansh:Don't be tense Pari.Our plan will work out.If it does'nt work out also,we will unite.We both will reveal our love to our families.Why we are planning this drama is because,Ruhaan should not left out when his wedding gets cancelled.He should have his true love by his side when his wedding with your breaks.

Pari:Still I have an unknown fear in my mind.

She embraced him crying.Mishti who came there to meet Pari saw them hug.Mistaking Reyaansh for Ruhaan,Mishti became sad.

Mishti thought:Ruhaan belongs to Pari.Then why am I feeling sad?I should leave now.I should not disturb their private moments.

Mishti walked out.)

Reyaansh:We succeeded in our plan and you also fell in love with Mishti.Now it's your turn to give unconditional love to Mishti.

Pari:Yes..love Mishti..receive her love..love your love life.

Ruhaan became emotional:Thank you very much for letting me know the truth.Thank you so much for show me my true love.

Reyaansh and Pari smiled.



Present....

Ruhaan:We told the truth to our parents and they also accepted it.

Mishti was surprised.

Ruhaan:Sorry for ignoring you in college.Sorry for not noticing your love in our college days.I took too much of time to realise that I also love you.Sorry for that also Mishti.

Mishti became emotional.

Mishti:That was not your fault Ruhaan.

Yen yen yen

Dhegam mattum paavam

ingu rendaaga sol


Aasai nooraagi pooga

Aadai noolaagi pooga

Kannaeae kannaadi aaga




Ruhaan:But Mishti...I love you a lot and life without you is hard to imagine.So please give me a chance to shower the rain of love upon you for the whole life.

Mishti smiled emotionally:Yes Ruhaan.

Namm porvaikullae

mei veppamaaga

Naam kaalai velaai

menn muththamaaga

Vaa kaadhal seivom

poruthamaaga

Neengaama nirppom

viruppamaaga


Ruhaan smiled.He lifted her up in his arms and twirled her around in excitement.

Eeraa muththam paayum saththaam

Oori poogum bodhai endru

Thaaga pookkal pookka seiyum

Latchamaaga



Ruhaan cupped her face in his palms and said:I know that you love me.But you also say those 3 magical words to me.

She said emotionally:I love you.I love you Ruhaan.

Aasaiyodu nee padhitha

Ven sivapu maacham ondru

Naalai kaalai velai yendhum

Michamaaga

Ruhaan became so happy that he embraced her.


Ennaalum theeraa kaadhaalaaga

Eppodhum nee naan pakkamaaga

Endrendrum neengaa kaatchiyaaga

Ellorum ketkum per

anbin saatchiyaaga

Reyaansh looked at the tensed Pari.

Reyaansh:Now everything is sorted out.Then why are you tense?

Pari:I am not tense.But thinking of the tensions we faced during the last few days I am feeling butterflies inside my stomach.

Reyaansh held her hand.

Reyaansh:Don't think of the past tensions.Think only of the present and relaxed.Because now we are at the beautiful phase of our life.

She smiled.They had a cute embrace.

Kattikkonda muththam vaithu

Ondraaga kaadhalaaga



Ruhaan-Mishti and Reyaansh-Pari got married on the same mandap.

YEN YEN YEN DHEGAM

MATTUM PAAVAM INGU

RENDAAGA SOL (ENNA SOLLA POGIRAI
)

The end

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Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Beautiful ending

Loved it

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Part 4

Marvelous update.... brilliantly written

great end


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