Vyavastha Vivah...Arranged marriage...Zain Imam Tejasswi SS

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Vyavastha Vivah...Arranged marriage... Part 1

I dedicate this to my friend Charmed_Sunshine_22 who wants me to write an arranged marriage story on Zain Tejasswi.This is the remake of my FF Mohabbat phir ho jayegi..Love will happen again..with some changes.


I thank Sahni_2007 for the lovely cover page.Special thanks for surprising me by making the cover page fast.

A party was going on to celebrate the success of a project.

Mohit took up a glass of wine and sipped it.

Mohit:Today is the happiest day of my life.My dream project has been completed successfully.

Everyone smiled.

Mohit's parents Dev and Neelima were proud of their son.

After the party....

Neelima caressed Mohit's head lovingly.

Neelima:I am very happy for you.But as a mother I will be completely happy only if you get married.

Mohit blushed.

Neelima:Do you have anyone in your mind?

Mohit:No mom.

Neelima:Then can I start looking for a girl?

Mohit blushed:Sure mom.

Neelima and Dev smiled.

Mohit:But I will marry the girl only if I like her.

Neelima:We will conduct the wedding only if you like the girl.

Mohit smiled.

A boutique inauguration is going on.

One girl was looking very happy.She was clapping hands.

She was none other than Rashmi.

"Rashmi"

Somebody called her.She woke up from the bed.

Her mother Anuradha only called her.

Rashmi:Mom,why did you call me?My dream got broken because of you.

Anuradha:Every day you see the same dream of opening a boutique of your own.

Rashmi:One day that will b real.

Anuradha:I also want it to be real.But I can't wait that long.So before that we will find a boy for you and get you married.

Rashmi:Mom!Why are you in a hurry to get me married?

Anuradha:It's every parent's wish to see their daughter getting married.Your parents also want it.

Rashmi's father Sunil came hearing it.

Sunil:I agree with Anu.Please agree to get married Rashmi.

Rashmi pouted:Ok.

Anuradha and Sunil smiled happily.

Rashmi:But the boy should be very handsome like a film star.

Anuradha and Sunil laughed.

Sunil:Done.

Anuradha:Foolish girl!The boy’s character is more important.

Rashmi:I agree.But the boy should be a nice man with good looks.That's it.

Anuradha:Hmmm...

Rashmi just smiled.

After a month...

Anuradha was dressing up Rashmi as the boy's family was coming to meet her for the marriage alliance.

Anuradha attached hair extension to her hair.

Amritha:What is this mom?Why this hair extension?

Anuradha:Boys like long haired girls.

Rashmi:But my hair is already long.Why should I make it longer than this?

Anuradha:This length is not enough.The longer the hair is,the more impressed the boy would be.

Rashmi:So to impress the boy,you made me wear the hair extension.But after marriage anyway he will know that it's hair extension. What about that?

Anuradha:Tell him that you cut your hair.

Rashmi:How ridiculous mom!

Anuradha:Keep quiet and dress up according to my instructions.When he talks to you,talk to him like I say.If the boy is traditional you should talk to him like I say.

Rashmi:Oh no...

Sunil came.

Sunil:The boy is well educated.Who told you that he is very traditional?

Anuradha:Educated or not most of the boys choose traditional girls when it comes to marriage.

Before Sunil and Rashmi could react, the boy's car landed up there.

They were none other than Mohit and family.

Sunil-Anuradha welcomed them.

Rashmi came with snacks and tea.Mohit looked at her shyly.Slowly she looked at him nervously.

Seeing her, Mohit's family smiled.

Mohit and Rashmi were sent to another room to talk.

Suddenly Mohit noticed Rashmi's long hair.

Mohit:You have a very long hair.

Rashmi thought:Oh!So mom is right.He is a typical traditional guy who likes likes women with long hair.I have to talk like what my mom advised me to .

Rashmi:Yes.I love long hair.I oil and shampoo my hair daily.

Mohit:How much time do you take to comb this long hair?

Rashmi:May be 2 hours.

Mohit was shocked:2 hours?

Rashmi thought:I hope my answer is correct.

Mohit noticed the saree she was wearing.

Mohit:Guess you like sarees more.

Rashmi thought:He is a typical traditional guy who likes to see women in sarees.

(TeZain pic credit goes to X_tezain_x)

Rashmi:Yes,I like only sarees.I wear only sarees.I don't like modern dresses.

Mohit was stunned.

Mohit:You like only sarees and you wear only sarees.That means you wear sarees for 24 hours?

Rashmi:Yes.

Mohit was shocked.

Mohit:We forgot to introduce ourselves to each other.Hi...I am Mohit.

He extended his hand for a shake hand.

She thought:Like mom said he is trying to test whether I am modern or traditional by trying to shake my hands.

She folded her hands and said:Namasthe!

He became embarrassed and withdrew his hands.

Mohit:Namasthe!Let us go back.

Rashmi:Ok.

They both went to the drawing room and gave a fake smile to their parents.

Dev asked Mohit:Finished talking?What's your opinion?

Mohit was silent.So Neelima found something fishy.

Neelima:Thanks to all of you.Let us go back.We will inform you all after 2 days.

Sunil and Anuradha smiled:Ok.

They reached home.

Dev:Neelima...why were you in a hurry to return home?

Neelima did not reply.

Neelima:Mohit,what do you say about Rashmi?

Mohit:I don't want to marry Rashmi.

All were shocked.

Neelima:When i saw Mohit not responding itself I had a doubt.I was worried whether he will say that frankly there.That's why I said that we will go back home.

Dev:Oh!Why did'nt you like Rashmi?

Mohit:She is not my type.She has long hair.So she will have hair fall and even in the food she cooks there will be hair.She takes 2 hours to comb her hair.Then when will she spend time with me?She wears sarees for 24 hours.I can't even imagine.

Dev and Neelima laughed.

Neelima:For such a silly thing you are reacting like this?Hair and dressing are simple issues.

Mohit:I don't know.I can't imagine living with a girl like Rashmi for my whole life.

Neelima:Don't take a hasty decision.Think well.Who knows whether your opinion will change tomorrow?

Mohit:Tomorrow?Never!Tell them that I am not interested.

Neelima:Anyways I will call them only after 2 days.I can't take a hasty decision.

Mohit:Oh no...

The next day...

Mohit was driving the car. Suddenly he saw something on the right side of the road..He was shocked.He stopped the car.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Cute start dear

Loved it

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Congrats on the new SS

Part 1

Marvelous update.... greatly written

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Of course every mother wants to see her kid married.

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Anuradha messed up the whole thing. The old ways dont work any more.

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Mohit did not want a very traditional girl. Rashmi is anything but. But he doesn't know that.

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Did Mohit spot Rashmi on the side of the road? She will not be so traditional looking right now.

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Part 1


A Lovely Start

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Thank u so much taahir,Khwaishfan,Golden_Ginni,Coderlady



Vyavastha Vivah...Arranged marriage... Part 2

Mohit was driving the car. Suddenly he saw something on the right side of the road..He was shocked.He stopped the car.

Mohit saw Rashmi walking with her friends.She was laughing and chatting with them.

She was in long top and jeans.Mohit noticed that Rashmi's hair was not extra long like it looked in their meeting.

Mohit got out of the car and walked towards her.

"Rashmi",he called her.

She looked at him.

She became nervous as she realized that she was caught red handed.

Rashmi said in her mind:Oh no...now he saw the real me.How will he react?He will be really angry.If he disagrees to marry me seeing my real look mom will scold me.

Mohit:Can I talk to you personally?

Rashmi:Yes.

Mohit and Rashmi walked to a corner.

Mohit:Where is your long hair?Did you cut your hair?

She was silent.

Mohit:Say the truth.

Rashmi became more scared.

Rashmi:Actually it was hair extension.Mom made me wear the hair extension yesterday.She thought that you might reject me seeing my thin hair which is not long.That's why.I am sorry.

Mohit laughed.

Rashmi was confused why he laughed.

Mohit:What about the saree which you wear for 24 hours?

Rashmi:I don't wear sarees at all.Mom told me to change my dressing style thinking that you like only traditional girls who wears only sarees.She forced me to wear saree that day.

Mohit laughed.

Mohit:Thank God!I am relieved that the Rashmi I saw yesterday was fake.This is the real Rashmi.

Rashmi was not able to understand anything.

Mohit:Actually I was not interested in thus marriage alliance.Not because I thought that you were not nice,but I felt that you were not suitable for me.My dream wife was not someone who was wearing saree always and spending time in combing hair.

Rashmi became dull.

Mohit:But now seeing the real you I am convinced that my mom chose the perfect girl for me.You are just like how I want my girl to look like.

Rashmi was surprised.

Rashmi:I thought that you are a traditional man who wants a long haired traditionally dressed up girl.

Mohit:No way.I respect such girls.But as my wife I expect something else which you are.

Unknowingly she blushed.

Mohit:By the way,you did not tell me what you expect from me.

Rashmi:Thinking that you were traditional, I was feeling weird.But I agreed to marry you for my mom.But today seeing the real you,I feel happy.

Mohit:So we both misunderstood each other.

Rashmi:Yes.

They both laughed.

Mohit:Shall we proceed with this alliance?

Rashmi:But I have a demand.

Mohit:Demand?

Rashmi:My dream is to open a small boutique. I hope you won't discourage me.

Mohit:Why should I discourage you?If I can help you in fulfilling your small sweet dreams I will be the happiest person in the world.

Rashmi smiled.

Rashmi:Then it's ‘yes’ from my side also.

Mohit was very happy.They smiled at each other.

They both reached home.

Rashmi:It's mom who made me do such stupid things.Gladly Mohit is not like you think.

Sunil:Anuradha,you are more foolish than i thought.

Anuradha smiled due to embarrassment

while Rashmi and Sunil laughed.

Mohit told everything to his family members.

They also laughed.

Deva:Anyways my son did not have to reject a long for silly reasons like hair and dressing.God saved us from that embarrassment.

Neelima:That's why I did not say 'no' to them immediately like Mohit asked me to do.

Mohit:Thank you for not listening to me mom.Otherwise everything would have been a mess.As you said one day is enough to change our opinion.It became true in my case.One day changed my attitude towards Rashmi.

They smiled.

Both the families informed each other that they are happy with the alliance.

Mohit and Rashmi's phone numbers also got exchanged through their parents.

Mohit dialed Rashmi's number.Seeing his number on the phone screen Rashmi blushed.

She picked up the call.

Mohit:Hi..I am Mohit.

She smiled:Hi!

Mohit:You may not have recognized me when I rang you up.

Rashmi:Nothing like that.I recognized you as I had saved your number in my phone.

Mohit was surprised.

Mohit:You have saved my number in your phone?How did you get my number?

Rashmi:Mom had taken your number from your mom.

Mohit:Why?Did you ask your mom to take my number from my mom?

She became shy.

Rashmi:Did you also ask your mom to take my number from my mom?

Unknowingly he said:Yes.

She blushed.

Suddenly he realized what he said.Mohit became shy.

Mohit:Ok.Say about your likes Rashmi.Your favourite colour,..place..movies..actors....

Rashmi:You also say.

They both talked to each other about their likes and dislikes.

Every day they talked to each other over the phone.

One day...

Mohit:By the way...is talking on the phone enough?Don't you think we should meet directly also?

Rashmi smiled:Yes.


He smiled.

The next day ...

Mohit was waiting for Rashmi at a park.

Rashmi reached there.

Seeing him there she smiled.

She called him:Mohit!

He looked at her.Seeing her, his face blossomed.He walked towards her cheerfully.

Mohit:You look very beautiful in this black suit.

She smiled:Thank you.

Mohit:I thought black colour is meant for the evil vamps as in films devils are seen in black costumes.But now I realized that there can be beautiful human beings also in black.

She chuckled.

Rashmi:White is worn by heroines also in movies.

Mohit:You are right.Right now I am seeing a beautiful heroine..my heroine.

She blushed.

Mohit:You look more beautiful in real.

Rashmi:You are saying this as if you are seeing me directly for the first time.

Mohit:To be frank yes.The first day seeing you in saree and long hair I could not see anything else.Later when I saw your real appearance, in that excitement I could not see you properly.Now I am seeing you peacefully and carefully.

He looked at her face deeply.She could not stop blushing.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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That was so cute ☺☺

Quite natural & realistic

Just loved it

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