Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
This was beautifully written 👏 something new on MiNeil. Something near to reality and i could imagine them walk to remember this was indeed beautiful walk ,walk to remember....
Thanks
Had written it long back but didn't have time to post it😆
Finally i posted it and happy that it is liked by everyone. It was different from my other stories.
Originally posted by: Mineil_Fan
Wow ... This was simply such a beautiful story . It showed the worst reality of life. Well written asusual. And as I always say, you should publish your own book....
Thanks a lot avni for taking time and coming here.
Miss you and your comments 🤗
Book publishing is one of my dreams hope it comes true one day.
But i enjoy writing here, on mineil, chatting with you all🤗
Loved this concept on MiNeil 👍🏼 and you made sure to keep that essence of MiNeil also. It tough to write everything in one shot and output to be this good but you did it and that's why we call you one class writer 😎
Writing os is very difficult.. specially for me. I am very bad at summaries, short stories.😆
Thank God all of you liked it, i thought it may sound preachy or heavy/sad kind of.
Yeah scenes like when he stops her from jumping, mini confronting him , their walk, that process of turning from two complete strangers, friendship ,companions all those little things I could imagine SouNoor as MiNeil.
Thanks for noticing all this🤗
You guys always give attention to smallest of details❤️
Wanted to write more about their phase of getting to know each other but then it wouldn't be an os.😆 thats my problem....bhavnao mein beh ke main sab kuch likhna chahti hoon...kam shabdo mein kaam hi nahi chalta mera😆
Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul
Thanks for noticing all this🤗
You guys always give attention to smallest of details❤️
Wanted to write more about their phase of getting to know each other but then it wouldn't be an os.😆 thats my problem....bhavnao mein beh ke main sab kuch likhna chahti hoon...kam shabdo mein kaam hi nahi chalta mera😆
You know MiNeil from all angles, sides ,in ,out🤣 plus your write up which makes it beautiful that we can imagine them.
Even I wanted to read more on their friendship phase but its os and you had to finish all the things in one shot but you did complete justice .like @zalima says rest were self explanatory which we could imagine
Yeah scenes like when he stops her from jumping, mini confronting him , their walk, that process of turning from two complete strangers, friendship ,companions all those little things I could imagine SouNoor as MiNeil.
All this makes them MiNeil ❤️ they would have nailed such scenes natural way
You know MiNeil from all angles, sides ,in ,out🤣 plus your write up which makes it beautiful that we can imagine them.
Even I wanted to read more on their friendship phase but its os and you had to finish all the things in one shot but you did complete justice .like @zalima says rest were self explanatory which we could imagine
Exactly ❤️
Years back start bestsellers ,rishthey use to come and this story of yours was just like that ..i could imagine Srj Ash throughout ..They are very good in such stories And little was apt and i liked you did not go into detail explaining how they fell in love etc. Your writing said it all.
Years back start bestsellers ,rishthey use to come and this story of yours was just like that ..i could imagine Srj Ash throughout ..They are very good in such stories And little was apt and i liked you did not go into detail explaining how they fell in love etc. Your writing said it all.
Yes short and sweer and yet so much emotions used to get stirred because of those one hour episode of rishtey....i loved that show. Even today i remember some of its stories scene by scene.
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