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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hi guys. I am back with an illogical OS. But then when has logic been a core of Ghum. If it is too long, do let me know, I will shorten it. It has to be proofread!


Thanks in advance for reading! Both Chappals and love will be warmly accepted!

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This story takes place when Patralekha is 7 months pregnant. In Chavan mansion, the family is gearing up for Patralekha's dohale jevan aka goad bharai! There is a buzz all around and Patralekha is glowing.

In Sairat's room

Sai: Virat sir, aap ab tak tayar nahi huye? Chaliye Pakhi didi ki goad bharai hai.

Virat: Sai, mera mann nahi hai.

Sai: (Cups her hands on Virat's face): Mein janti hu. Par bachcha hamara hai, toh kya hua ki woh kok Pakhi didi ki hai.

Virat: Kaise kar leti ho? Kaise itna khush reh leti ho?

Sai: Aapko kya lagta hai ye baat mujhe chubhti nahi. Mujhe bhi bohot dard hota hai, aur sach batau toh kabhi kabhi jalan bhi hoti hai. Par jab mei apne bache ki baare mei sochti hu, toh lagta hai ki woh meri ye saari jalan mita dega aur mujhe bharosa hai ki aap mujhse abhi bhi utna hi pyaar karte ho jaisa pehle karte the.

Virat: Sai... Mei chahta tha ki ye goad bharai ka samman tumhe mile.

Sai: Bachcha agar hamara hai fir bhi kok Pakhi didi ki hai. Woh hamare bachche ko janam dene wali hai. Itna sammman toh unka banta hai. Chaliye. Ab hume neeche chalna chahiye.

Virat: Sai...

Sai: Chaliye Virat sir. Aaj hamara jana zaroori hai. Aapke liye kuch khaas hai aaj

Their eyes are moist. They both wipe their tears and come down.

The family is preparing for Patralekha's goad bharai

Bhavu: Aao Patralekha aao. Ikde bas. Tum iss Chavan khandan ka waaris dene wali ho. ye tumhare liye khandani zevar, sariya aur ghar ke tijori ki chabi.

Patralekha's eyes gleamed seeing her wealth and her 'badi bahu' position intact. In the past few days, she had started to love her newfound clout in the Chavan house.

The goad Bharai rituals are about to start when Sai announces

Sai: Isse pehle ki ye goad bharai ki rasam puri ho, mei ye clear karna chahti hu ki ye Bachcha kiska hai.

Sonali: Ye kya behuda sawal hai. Ye bacha baby balak tumhara hai. Patralekha toh iski surrogate maa hai. Kyunki tum baanjh ho.

Virat: Kaku please Sai ko Aisa kuch mat kahiye ki uske mann ko thees pahuche

Bhavu: Toh ye tumhari Sai aise wahiyat sawal puchke kyu kadwahat laa Rahi hai. Usse toh Patralekha ka shukriya karna chahiye jo woh surro sugro sugoracy ke liye raazi ho gayi.

Karishma to Sonali: Aai, suggoracy ka toh pata nahi magar drama zaroor racy hone wala hai. Daddo sutto.

Sonali and Karishma clap in glee.

Behind Nagesh Chavan face palms In his portrait. “Ye Bhavu bhi na”

Sai regains her composure after being accused of being baanjh. That stung her immensely.

Sai: Sonali Kaku aur saare parivar wale, hum ye karyakram chalu karne ke pehle, mei ek tohfa dena chahti hu.

Sonali: Kya laayi ho? Tumhe toh aana bhi chahiye ye karyakram mei. Baanjh jo ho mag hum modern hai toh ye andhvishwas ko nahi maante.

Sai opens an envelope and shows DNA report. Ye hai Mera gift. DNA report ke hisab se ye na Mera bachcha hai na Virat sir ka.

Virat: Sai ye tum kya Bol Rahi ho.

Sai (with tears in her eyes): Haa Virat sir. Pakhi didi ne hum se itne months se jhooth bolti aa Rahi hai.

Bhavu: Patralekha kya ye sab Sach hai.

Shocked Patralekha fumbles: B bbbbbadi maammmi ye jhooth hai. Ye Sai mujhse jalti hi. Aur darti bhi hai ki iss bache ke Wajah se kahi virat aur mei kareeb na aaye.

Virat: ye tum kya Bol Rahi ho Sai? Ye hamara bachcha hai.

Sai: Nahi Virat sir. Ye rahe DNA reports and ye Baki ke reports jo sabit karte hai ye hamara bachcha nahi hai. Mujhe ye kal pata chala jab meine apna bachcha samajhkar doctor se baat ki.

Sai weeps but regains composure.

The DNA reports and other reports are circulated. Patralekha is petrified.

Turning red in anger, Bhavani yells: Patralekha, besharam, tumne hamare pyaar, Vishwas aur samman ka apmaan kiya hai. Tumne kisi aur ke bache ko Sairat ka bachcha hone ka jhootha jhansa Diya hai. Pata nahi kiska paap tumhari kok mei pal rah hai

Karishma to Sonali: Aaiiii kya twist aaya hai. Mujhe Amitabh Bachchan ki yaad aa Rahi hai.

Sonali: Amitabh Bachchan?

Karishma: Haaan aayiye aap aur hum milke khelte hai Kaun hai Patralekha ke bachche ka baap.

Sonali is giddy with laughter. “Aye chup” Sunne de aage ka story

Sonali: Patralekha ye tumse ummed nahi thi. Samrat?

Samrat (exhausted with frustration): Ye bachcha mera nahi hai

Sonali: Kiska Ganda Khoon hai ye. Kahi ye woh thandai wale ka nahi jiske saath tumne kaafi jyada time waqt vel bitaya tha holi ke waqt.

Bhavu: Chii chii ye sab sunne ke pehle mei Kakasaheb ke pass chali kyu nahi gayi.

Swargiya Nagesh Chavan facepalms in his portrait.

Bhavu: Itne mahine se hum kisi aur ke bachche ke liye khush they. Ye na Chavan hai na Salunkhe. Kya pata ye kiska hai. Ganda khoon hai bas Ganda khoon. Aur ye ganda khoon tum hum sab pe maarne wali thi.

"Baaaas!" A voice hollered from behind.

"Ye mera bachcha hai"

It was Omi

There was a pin drop silence for a moment.

Sonali faints, Bhavani's knees begin to tremble.

There was a loud thud behind. Nagesh Chavan's portrait had fallen with shock!

Karishma unable to bear the excitement cries out loud! Chalo Patralekha bhabhi ek achcha hai ye bachcha Chavan khoon nikla. Daddo Sutto!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#2

Thank you thank you thank you Nutty... for making some sense of this stupid plot.


I am ready to accept OmiLekha ka baccha rather than surrogacy wala kaand 🤣🤣


Thats how low my standards have gone because of ghum


Dado Sutto indeed 👏👏

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Posted: 2 years ago
#3

I forgot to tag people. 🤪

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Posted: 2 years ago
#4

I can't control my laughter...wow

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Posted: 2 years ago
#5

Kya cheez kya ho aap!?!??🤣🤣🤣🤣

CN wasis after hearing Omi's confession be like:-

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Samrat pehle se hi baaju ho gaya... Mera toh nai hai Baba🤣

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Mast hai waise🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
#6

Thank you! Thank you! 😆

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Posted: 2 years ago
#7

Ekdum Ghum writers ke style mei - silly! 😆

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aarthiviji

I can't control my laughter...wow

Thank you so much! 👍🏼

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Sach main...

hum hi log chale jaate hai plots likhne... unse to better hi likhenge

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Posted: 2 years ago
#10

Samrat be like khaya piya kuch nahi. Glass toda 12 anna. Bhak. Mera kaand nahi hai ye.


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