OUR DESTINY - FF Pt 18(19-Mar) updated link in comments - Page 7

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

Oh oh... chalo ladko ke list bhi copy karke rakhlo phir 😆

Oh nooooooooo 🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆

Haha… imagining how Akshara will look in those clothes 🤪

Sweet update 

Thanks for the pm :)

Part 4 is sad and sweet at the same time :)

She doesn't remembers anything 

I think that friend in pic is Akshu

Nice story.. I'm enjoying it❤

Lovely 🥰 looking forward to the next chapter.looking forward to Akshara and Manjiri meeting when she comes to visit Abhi 😊

Lovely update

I guess akshu is that friend

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Abhi: yaar akshu.. chalo mujhe hospital bhi jaan hai shopping ke baad..

[Yaar.. Akshu... Let's go please I have to go to hospital later... ]  

abhi screams..

Akshu: arre ruko toh main apna list toh check karlun ki sab hai ya nahi..

[Arre... Wait let me check my list once to see if I have missed anything]  
She smiles..
He comes and stands behind her.
Abhi: Ithna bada list..... dikhao toh..

[Why so much big list.. show it to me once.. ] 
Akshu: main kyun dikhaooo... and don't worry jab mere pariwar mil jayenge toh sab kuch chuka dungi.

[Why should I show it to you?? ... and don't worry I will pay you once I meet my family]  

Akshu declares..

Abhi: arre baba paise ke bath kaun kar raha hai.. mujhe kaam hai na please chalo..

[Arre baba.. who is talking about money now.. I have to work na.. let's go please..] 
Abhi starts requesting her..

Akshu: theek hai chalo phir..

[Okay.. let's gp] 
Abhi: tum aise chalogi?

[You will come like this?] 
He points finger at her..
She turns and looks at herself on mirror she forgot that she has wore abhi's shirt and pant..

She bangs her forehead with her hands..
Akshu: lekin mere pass toh kapde hai hi nahi...

[But.. I don't have any cloths.] 
She gets sad..
Abhi: jantha tha.. kal rath ko maine dokhe rakh diya ab thak toh sook bhi gaya hoga..

[I know it.. That's why I washed your cloths yesterday and by now it should be dried.]  

Akshu: oh... thank you so much abhimanyu...

She pulls his cheeks to convey her thanks.. he smiles..

While going she suddenly realizes something..
Akshu: ek minute.. kahi tumne tumhare kapdo ke sath toh mere kapde nahi dhoye na..

[1 minute... Dont tell me that you washed my cloths with your cloths?]  

Abhi hides his face..
Akshu: abhi... tum bhi na she cries..

[Abhi.. you na she cries..] 
( she has seen how dirty it was )
Abhi: arre baba aaj ke liye pehan lo.. kal se tumhi karna woh sab theek hai..

[Arre baba.. Please wear it for today.. From tomorrow you can handle that task.] 
Akshu: theek hai..

[Okay..]  

Abhi mutters "Thank god maan gayi"

[Thank god.. she agreed.]  

She goes and changes herself into her dress comes out..
Abhi:ab chale..

[Let's go now?] 
Akshu: haan.... chalo..

[Yeah lets go] 
She starts walking towards the door.
Abhi: akshu...
Akshu: ab kya hai..

[What?] 
Abhi:tum apna list bhool gayi.. ye lo tumhara shopping list..

[You forgot your shopping list.. Take this] 
Akshu: oh.. sorry sorry..
Abhi: arre ab isse ghoorthi rahogi ya chalogi bhi..

[Now you will keep on staring this list or will come with me]  

Akshu: sorry chalo jaldhi..

[Oh sorry.. lets go ] 
Akshu sits behind abhi.. the roads are so bad that there is a hump or there are holes every 2 seconds.

Abhi: khaske pakdo..

[Hold tightly...] 
Akshu screams: kya sunayi nahi diya..

[What... I cant hear anything] 
Abhi scream: arre maine kaha kaske pakdo..

[Arre .. I asked you to hold tightly]  

Akshu: kya...

[whaaaat....] 
He stops all of sudden and she falls on him..

Abhi: yahi keh raha tha khaske pakdo warna gir jaogi..

[This is what i was saying hold tightly else you will fall down.] 
He takes her hands and makes her wrap around his waist..

She looks at him and adores him for his concern. He sees her in the mirror and notices how she is smiling at him and he smiles looking at her.

They reach shopping mall...

Abhi: pehle kapde le le?

[Let's take cloths first?] 
Akshu nods..

Abhi takes akshu to the shop.
She starts looking at the dresses. Starts looking into the mirror to see how she looks..
She notices abhi standing behind her with a phone near his ears..

He looks at her in the mirror. He sees that its red dress ( 2 week wala) and signs that its not good.

Akshu: ye nahi kuch aur dikhayiye..

[Not this .. may be something else]  

Shop keeper: ye lijiye madam ye apke rang par bilkul jachega..

[Take this madam. This would suite you] 
She takes that and looks into the mirror.. abhi says its okay okay..

She blushes and goes back again and gets a purple dress..
She wears it. Looks at abhi..

Abhi signs that its too good. She should go for it.

Akshu smiles..

They finish their shopping by most of the dresses are selected by himself he feels proud as his mother used to complain his skills of shopping are zero but akshu liked his choices.

Abhi: hogaya?

[All done?] 
Akshu: Abhi... mujhe kuch aur bhi lena hai..

[Abhii..I still have somethings to take] 
Abhi: kya?

[What?] 
Akshu: woh... [That ]

she points finger at shop where inner garments are sold.

Abhi: oh.. chalo phir lethe hai..

[Oh.. lets go then lets take it] 
Akshu: tum aoge mere sath... [You will come with me ?] 

she rolled her eyes..

Abhi: han kyun koi problem hai...

[Yes.. Any problem?]  

Akshu: abhi... ye ladkiyon ka hai tum kya karoge yaha..

[Abhi.. This is shop for girls.. what will you do here..]  

Abhi: yaha par likha hai kya kahi ki sirf ladkiyan hi andar ja sakthe hai..

[Have they mentioned anywhere that mens are not allowed???]  

Akshu: okay fine chalo phir.[Okay fine.. lets go inside..] She fumes while saying this..

Abhi: isko kya hua..

[What happend to her now]  

They enter into the shop and see that its filled with ladies..

"Kithna mast jodi hai na.. dekho chokra chokri se kithna pyar kartha hai.. aise dukaan ke andar bhi agaya" - a parsi lady praises abhira.

{ I like parsi dialogues no translation please :D please read it and feel it} 

Some staffs starts giggling at them akshu is very embarrassed.

A guy who seems to be owner of the shop thinks that husband wants to shop for her wife..

Sk: namasthe sir..
Abhi still looking at his phone..
Abhi: namasthe..
Akshu : inko kya hua mujhe dekhne ke bajaye abhi ko dekhne lag gaye.

[What happend to this shopkeeper.. Instead of looking at me why he is talking to abhi] 
Sk: sir boliye sir.. kya pasand hai aapko madam ke liye..

[Tell me sir.. What do you like for madam?] 
Abhi ignores his words as he is busy with his phone..
Sk :ye lijiye sir.. ye sab best brands hai kaunsa accha lagega aapki wife par..

[Look at this sir.. These all are best brands.. Which one would suite you wife..] 
Abhi still looking at his phone..
Abhi: sorry ye meri wife nahi hai.. meri dost hai..

[Sorry.. She is not my wife.. she is my friend.]  

Sk : oh i see.. girl friend...na

Akshu understood why they are thinking that she is girlfriend.

Abhi: nahi sirf dost hai..

[Nahi sirf dost hai...] 
Akshu: agar aap dono ka hogaya ho toh kya aap mujhe dikhayenge pehan na toh mujhe hai na.. she tells it in sarcastic manner.

[If you both are done .. Can you show it to me.. In the end I am the one who is going to wear it..]  

Sk: han han.. madam ye lijiye dekh lijiye.. jaya inhe dikhado please.

[Yeah why not madam.. Take this.. Jaya please show it to her.]  

Jaya comes and stands infront of akshu.

Jaya: aapke pathi na bahuth hi acche hai.. maine aaj thak kisi bhi admi ko andar athe hue nahi dekha. Ek toh bahana markar chale jathe hai ya phir andar aathe hi nahi.. i must say you are really lucky..

[Your husband is so sweet... I have never seen any man entering this shop.. Most of them either escape by giving some lame excuse or they dont even enter.. I must say you are very lucky]  

Akshu looks at abhi who is busy with his phone.. she also knows he is here because he does not want to leave her alone with unknown people as she might stress her brain.

Akshu finishes her shopping quickly...
Abhi: hogaya sab kuch..?

[All done?] 
Akshu: nahi kuch aur cheezein lena hai..

[No ... I will also need something else]  

Abhi: aur kya bacha hai sab toh le liya tumne..

[What else is pending you bought everything na]  

she points at medical shop.

Abhi: oh.. sorry.. chalo...[Oh.. sorry..]

Akshu: bhaiyya woh deejiye na.. 

[ Bhaiyya.. Please give me that] 

akshu points fingers at sanitary pads.. as she is surronded by multiple old ladies who might judge her if she says it loud.

Sk: kya woh madam theek se batao na..

[What madam.. Tell me correctly na what do you want..]  
Akshu again tries fails again..

Abhi: arre yar theek se bolo na .. sanitary pads chahiye..ithni bhi kya sharmana..

[Arre. say it clearly na that you want sanitary napkins.. Why are acting so shy..]  

All old ladies starts staring at abhi.. and starts gossipping..

Akshu notices that.. akshu in low voice.
Akshu: abhi ye karna zaroori tha..

[Abhi Was this necessary ?]  
Abhi: kya kiya maine[What did I do ?] he also speaks in low voice.

Akshu: ye jo tumne ab kiya..

[Whatever you did just.] 
Abhi: arre kya kiya maine..

[What did I do???] 
Akshu: kuch nahi ghar chalo bathathi hun..

[Nothing... Lets go home will tell you]  

Abhi is scared he really dont know what he did. He is a doctor all these things are normal for him.
She gets some sanitary napkins and decides to escape.

Abhi: aur kuch bacha hai tumhare list main..

[Anything else left] 
Akshu folds her hand..
Akshu: agar bacha bhi ho na toh bhi main online mangaungi. Chalo.. please.

[If anything is missing i will order it online.. Lets go please.]  

Abhi: arre akshu hua kya bolo toh sahi..

[Arre akshu. what happend.. Tell it na]  

Akshu: chup chap chalo..

[Don't utter a single word.. Lets go please.]  

Abhi goes and puts on helmet akshu keeps all the bags in between.

She is still looking at other side.
Abhi drops her home..
Abhi: mujhe ab chalna hoga khayal rakhna apna..

[I have to leave now.. Take care of yourself.. okay?] 
Before he could complete she leaves angrily.
He was about to leave he gets a message from birla hospital that mahima handled the surgery.
Abhi: thank god.. ab main jake so saktha hun

[Thank god.. I can sleep now peacefully]..

Akshu goes and starts arranging her cloths in wardrobe..

He goes and stands behind her.
Akshu: gaye nahi tum?

[You did not go to hospital?] 
Abhi: nahi surgery kisi aur ne handle kiya..

[Naah.. Someone else took care of surgery ] 
Akshu: theek hai..

[OH I see]  

Abhi goes and turns her towards himself..

Abhi: ab bolo kya bath hai.. gussa kyun ho mujhse aisa kya kiya maine..

[Now tell me whats the matter.. WHy are you so angry.. What did I do?]  

Akshu was about leave.. he holds her hand tighly..
Abhi: arre bolo na.. kya kiya maine..

[Arre. Tell na..What did I do?]  

Akshu: kya kiya tumne.. jana tha na tumhe uss dukan ke andar tum toh magan the apne phone ke andar.. sunna toh mujhe pada na..

[What did I do??? You wanted to go inside that shop.. You were so busy in your phone.. I have to hear other people talking about us.]  

Abhi: aisa kya kaha.. 😐ki tum ithna gussa ho..

[ What did they say.. which made you so angry..

Akshu: ek baath batao.. normally uss type ke dukaan main ladki ke sath kaun jaatha hai..

[Tell me one thing who accompanies a girl inside those kinds of shops?] 
Abhi: hmm.. let me think..may be uski maa,behan ya phir pati..

[hmm let me think.. may be her mom.. sister or husband]

Akshu:exactly!!!!!

Abhi recalls all the incidents..
Sk: sir boliye aapko kaunsa pasand hai..

[Sir.. tell me which one do you like]
Sk: accha toh ye aapki girl friend hai..

[so she is your girlfiend??]

He starts laughing hardly... he bites his hands to control his laughter..
Akshu starts laughing even more by looking at him laughing..

Abhi after completing his laughter therapy..
Abhi: accha woh theek hai tum mujhpar medical shop main kyun gussa huyi..

[But why were you angry in medical shop?] 
Akshu: woh.. tumne ithne zor se bol ki aunty log sab bathein karne lag gaye..

[that... you spoke so loudly that people started talking about you]

Abhi: isme kya chupana ye sab toh natural hai..

[What to hide in this? It's a natural process..] 
Akshu: lekin patha hai aunty ne kya kaha..

[But... Do you know what they were telling?] 
Abhi: kya?

[What?]

Akshu fb..
" ye dekho.. aaj kal ke ladke.. sabke samne ladkiyon ke cheez mangthe kahi ye ladki toh nahi ban gaya.. aaj kal ke medical procedures mere palle nahi padthe ladka ladki ban jatha hai aur ladki ladka"

[Look at guys now a days.. They buy all girl stuffs so openly.. What if this guy is a girl? I have heard there are medical procedures where people can their gender..]
( no offence to anyone just take it on lighter note)

Abhi starts laughing even more.. while laughing he falls on bed and pulls akshara too..
Akshu is on top him and laughing along with him..

Abhi has never laughed so much in these entire years.. he never had so much joy all these years. Its like toofan has arrived into his life to fill his life with laughter.

They both are lost in laughing.. suddey they hear doorbell..

Abhi: ab kaun aya..

[Who came now?] 
Akshu: grocery wala hoga.. maine grocery mangayi thi.. tumhare ghar main khane layak kuch hai nahi. Aur tum doctor hoke woh bhi heart surgeon hoke junks khathe ho..

[It much be groceries.. I ordered groceries.. Your house does not have single eatable items..You eat junks being heart surgeon]

Abhi laughed again..
Abhi: toh kya karu bhooka mar jaun..

[So what should I do? DIe out of hunger?] 
Akshu: main hoon na.. she assures..

[I am here na dont worry... ] 
She go out and collect the groceries..

Abhi: but kab thak rahogi.. abhi mutters to himself.. and keeps his hand on his heart to show its paining to imagine her departure..

[But how long you will here with me?]

He goes out... and was shocoed to see so many items..
The delivary boy starts reading the list..
"Toordal.. urad dal.. moong dal.. chawal.. aata.. tel... ghee.. shehad.. "

Abhi was so shocked.. he never thought that for cooking they need so many items.

DB: madam.. sab theek hai list ke hisab se main chaltha hun..

[Ma'am.. Everything looks fine to me as per list.. I will take a leave now.]

Akshu: theek hai bhaiyya. Jayiye..

[Okay bhaiyya..]

Abhi goes and stands infront of her waise tumne payment kaise kiya?[How did you paid for all this?]

Akshu: isse shows his card 🤣

[With this?]

Abhi: tumne mera card leliya par kab?[When did you take my card?]

Akshu: jab main tumhare upar giri thi aur jab door bell baja.. ye lo.. sorry bina puche lene ke liye woh darwaze par tha pooch nahi payi.

[When I was on top of you at that time.. Since it was too sudden i had to take it without asking you sorry..]

Abhi smiles..
Abhi: rakhlo tum.. tumhe zaroorath padhegi

[No keep it.. You would need it] 
Akshu: lekin..[But]
Abhi: maine kaha na rakhlo.. paise kaafi kamaya maine karch karne wali nahi mili aaj thak.. he smiles..

[I told you na.. keep it.. I earned lots of money but I did not had anyone to spend them ] and smiles

Akshu did not understand he is calling her as wife..

Akshu: karch karne wali hun na main.. don't worry.. and smiles..

[I am there to spend ... Dont worry] and smiles

Abhi nods smirks as she did not understand his last sentence.
Akshu: bolo kya khaoge..

[What will you eat?]  

Abhi: kuch bhi..[Anything]
Akshu: khana khana hai na pehle ye sab andar rakhne main meri madath karo.. please..

[Before eating anything please help me to sort these items and take them to kitchen"

Abhi: jaise aapki hukum 

" As you say ma'am" 

and grabs few items and goes to kitchen and keeps on the counter..

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