Originally posted by: dusk2dawn
Aww this is lovely..❤️
You made my evening n bhagaao my DARD by writing this beautifully 😍😍
While reading this I was like this 😆
That's really sweet of you
I was a bit nervous ..its was my first OS ....but then thought sb apne hi to hain😆
Love this piece ❤️. I want this scene too!!🙊 The way he takes care, Aww!! The last part where he takes her in his arms, them cuddling is gonna be cute!!🥺 Please write more, more and more!!
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Means a lot🤩.....
I'll try to write more often....first OS h bhul chuk maaf🤭
Originally posted by: chulbul2111
That's really sweet of you
I was a bit nervous ..its was my first OS ....but then thought sb apne hi to hain😆
Nervous naa ho.. you write really well.. No one can say this is your first OS. Its beautifully written..
N yup sab apne hi hai.. this forum was , is n will be a no judgement zone.. share your views , stories, drabbles , khayaali pulavs whatever you like..❤️🤗
Read this for the second time, only to give me the same feels it did as the first time itself.
From the language to the plot- everything was written to each one's character so perfectly!
Absolutely loved this.❤️
Hoping to read more from you.
i love this jaguar.he is so golu molu like golu chachu😆🤣Originally posted by: dusk2dawn
Aww this is lovely..❤️
You made my evening n bhagaao my DARD by writing this beautifully 😍😍
While reading this I was like this 😆
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