Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui
Did you finish reading this?🥺👉👈
Inaayaa is on a roll, another OS coming y'alls way!!
Eeps!!! Not yet🤓!!! I was working on the epilogue after the kaand!!! Keep it coming though, I'll make sure the comments are worth your while....
This was such a treat to read! I love reading alternatives to what really happened, and both ShiVi's emotions were penned down beautifully ❤️.
Thank you so much ❤️
INAAYAA THIS IS BEAUTIFULLL. YOUR STORIES MAKE ME SMILE SO MUCH❤️
And y'alls comments make me smile so much ❤️
Originally posted by: ItsmePriya
Inaaya this is beautiful❤️
Thanks for writing this!!!
Protective and Softy Shiva is my favourite
The hug and his care❤️
Loved reading this!!
do write more🤗
Thank you so much Priya (Hope I can call you that)!
Will write more and tag you when I do 🤗❤️
Inaaya!! So, I saw the title of this fic yesterday and when I wanted a distraction after the unmentionable kaand, I re watched the Gerua sequence. Point being, that the emotion on their faces before Shiva opens his mouth with that suicide ki advertisement dialogue?
That's this fic❤️. You've captured the essence of that moment when they're both just staring at each other soooo beautifully here. I'm so glad you wrote this, girl...
Keep it coming, keep it coming!! Loved it so much🤗!!
Originally posted by: WarriorB
Thank you. Truly.🤗
So the thing is this is exactly what I had kind of thought the course of their relationship would be like when I first started watching this show. It's what I kept hoping for in the haveli time. This dynamic. Because at that point Raavi really wasn't in the frame of mind to be thinking of all this and to me Shiva, her silent protector, would continue to be just that. And maybe along the way he would know he wants so much more but would respect her boundaries yada yada yada. And then the insecurity track came. And that's when I realised what a big onus that would have been to put all on Shiva. To carry so much. For him to put in much more than she was capable of at that time. I guess what I am rambling on about is that I liked that the writers took that route.
But anyway coming back to this, this is exactly what I must have dreamt during the haveli episodes. So it's such a joy to be reminded of that. That they could reach out to each other and be this emotionally vulnerable is something we are all waiting for with bated breath I guess.
Thank you so much for such loving words!
I was simply rewatching the scene and I felt like there could be so much potential during the haveli track, its mind-blowingly stupid how the CVs didn't take the track to their advantage! Shiva has always been her silent protector, from the truck to time where she tried harming herself too, he has always been with her, and my OS was simply an attempt to bring to life what could have been! Thank you so much for leaving such a precious comment! ❤️🤗
Originally posted by: barbieflora
See I had this open on a new tab.
And unluckily I read the other one first and dimaag ghum gaya
Yeh padh hi nahi paayi.
But but but....Abhi I'll read this fursat se! 😍
Issokiee, now read aaaraam se, I wanna know what you think of this one!🥺
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