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Posted: 2 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: masin

I haven't seen today nor yesterday's episode yet (long weekend ki chutti at my end so was caught up with everything but television) so I can't comment on much. Based on forum activity, it's evident ke yeh sab nahi hua par hona chahiye tha.


They can't just bounce back to date night after such a disastrous month filled with Mandaar's monstrosities. Amma should've been shown as more warm and welcoming. Aai shouldn't be let off the hook for failing Pallavi. Mansi and Sulo should be shown with some degree of remorse - for all their wrongdoings, I doubt either of them wish to be associated with a murderer. 


Pallavi should be far more distraught about how Mandaar behaved with her and how she behaved with Raghav. She should be jittery and flinching and it would be sweet to see Raghav comforting her and helping her bounce back from ill memories. They can't just brush it all under the rug to move on to a date and dance sequence. CVs audience ki demand poori karne ke chakkar mein logic and timeline sensitivity bhool jaate hain. The date night could've waited. They need to process everything that's been taking over their lives first.


Also, I loved how you showed Pallavi resting her head on Raghav's shoulder while Raghav was resting his head on the car seat's head rest. It has a great visual impact and lots of underlying meaning behind it. Pallavi needs Raghav's support now more than ever whereas Raghav is just utterly exhausted.


Thank you for this write up, helps me reimagine what I'm about to watch tonight!  


Thanks a lot for reading. The episode was hella disappointing! I wanted to shoot the makers. They are slowly ruining the show. I couldn't feel anything for anyone today... it was too rushed. Too cut and too unemotional after such a emotionally taxing previous episode. 


It was bleh! I couldn't believe what Mansi Sulochana said and how Aai was let off the hook as you said... so easily. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#12

Thanks for eating my khayali biriyaani..hope you didn't have a bone stuck in ur throat (srry Raghav..) 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#13

Oh I loooove Kishore da and Rafi sahab! Absolute gems they are! Great choices. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#14

Oh dear! You flatter me seriously. Not me but I hope the makers get new writers. Good solid ones like they had previously. Or else iss show ko titanic hone se no one can save... 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Pallavi kneeing Mandaar in the gut and ghumake thappad ya mukka, zor se! Mandaar flat and Raghav taking the window to start pounding him into a pulp again. Everyone trying to stop Raghav because he would end up killing him. 


Raghav remembering all the events where Pallavi suffered because of Mandaar. The scenes where she is crying, telling him about the dirty games Mandaar was playing, telling him she will harm herself... he is beyond angry. Sulochana seeing Aai try to crawl out. They go to help her. 


Sunny scared shitless (🤣) for future references [sorry Keerti if ur bhai decides enough is enough, I'll be left with none of my limbs intact. Plz find some other munda... tata..]


Pallavi finally jumping behind Raghav, hugging him from the back tightly crying out to leave him... she needs him. Raghav stopping immediately and relaxing, heaving... moving back and turning around gathering Pallavi in his chest, closing his eyes in relief. He is checking her out frantically, lifting her chin up gently to inspect her throat. Palls doing the same for him, holding his face, worried sick.  


Mandaar is seeing them together. He is beyond angry, jumping up to hit them probably again. Raghav pushing Palls behind him when Aai hits him with a flower pot. Mandaar out like light.(srsly, itna zor se phenka tha ki mujhe laga reality mein skull crack kar ke mar kaise nhi gaya.. atleast behosh toh ho hi janaa chahiye tha 😆) 


Everyone is shocked. Aai reveals truth again. Police coming, dragging Mandaar away, Baba running behind them (pagaal sanki buddha! 😡 I take back all my grand plans of redeeming him... the actor himself might be 🤮)


Raghav Pallavi looking around, a little lost and extremely tired. Aai telling them to go home. A scene where they are in the car (in the same dress... they practically ran away from D house...pagal khanaa ). Pallavi resting her head on Raghav's shoulder, her eyes closed as he holds her close, his own head resting on the headrest of the backseat, eyes closed. They are drained from the drama. 


A bandaid on Pallavi's throat (khoon nikla tha makers.. band aid nhi lagayi? 🤓) and a bandage around Raghav's palm (khoon again...). Pallavi is getting flashes of her sufferings....horrifying scenes with that creep... him trying to tuck the pleats of her saree, holding her without consent, touching her... she opens her eyes suddenly, scared and disgusted. She looks upwards at Raghav who is dozing off. She remembers his pain as well..


Separation, that award show episode, drinking... fake divorce... while she was humiliating him, the way his eyes looked teary before he was about to shoot Mandaar.... the way he had almost shot himself.


She shuts her eyes in sudden terror. She will not think about it. Raghav is remembering about his journey with his SKD... all from their rocky start to the time where they confessed their love... maybe a song in the bg (tell me in the comments ) 


They come back and practically trips over their own feet while falling into Amma's waiting arms. She hugs them both crying happy tears and kisses their heads stroking their hair (I so wanted to see this scene 😭). 


Next scene, them lying on their bed in their night robes wondering about the increasing chasm between them manifesting in the physical distance in the bed. They try to overcome their insecurities and fears and inch closer and end up holding each other's hands turning towards each other to lie on their side. Raghav brushes her hair with his finger, Palls shuddering at his touch. 


She is about to say something but he shushes her. He says we should sleep... long day today.. we'll talk tomorrow. She looks afraid, he inches closer and kisses her forehead. She closes her eyes and falls asleep slowly. Raghav is looking at her. 


End of episode! 


(Mere khayali pulao... oh srry biriyaani [hehehe srry Raghav 🤣]. Plz review..  what you all wanted to see). 

Love it!  Would have been perfect

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Posted: 2 years ago
#16

Wonderfully done ❤️


Makers bhool bhool conversation because they wanted to add hot scene and give BTs to calm down fans 🤪🤣

They could have easily divided it in two episodes by adding meaningful conversation but tadka is important 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#17

Why...Oh why... Aren't you on the MHRWwriters team already... we'll get such sensible good scenes


I'm telling you the makers're obsessed about the Black Saree....bina matlab ka... thoda marham patti karwate huye dikhaya nahi toh atleast bandaids toh dikha dete...naah yeh toh seedhe apni pehli proper date par nikle😲 sabse pehli toh Mandaar ne kharab kardiya tha 1 month pehle



I'm like...what...Kaunsi Party se bhaag kar aarahe hain...& Uff! Chaddo.



Just happy I got to read it..will imagine all This happened in my head❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Well, your Biriyani was top class. 🤗 I haven't eaten such tasty Biriyani in a long time Anushkha. These people who trained to make to Biriyani (oops, sorry serial) are a pathetic excuse for one. Yours was logical , humourous and emotional. Matlab Biriyani picture perfect. I wish you could offer some tuitions to the writers of MHRW. They seriously need to learn & revisit the art of making a Biriyani, oops sorry again, serial well. I am amazed that they are being paid to do this. 

A standing ovation my girl 😍🤗

Anushkha Rocks 😎😎

Edited by missFiesty_69 - 2 years ago