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Posted: 3 years ago

OMG! The Smrita here so likeable! I don’t know what caused her to have a self comparison or to have insight but it was beautiful Nisha!

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Posted: 3 years ago

The "million dollar lady" sure made a big turnaround. The speed was surprising. What tipped her over the edge? The looming move?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Mujhe darn ahi lagta sadak par, aapse lagta hai

Can't believe she actually said that! Thappad se darr nhi lagta sahib types 😆


Dad said u wudnt accept a renovation or a better place”

“Its an NGO its not about the appearance, if I had that money I wud throw it into buying more inventory”

“I am sure Raanav can do that”


I loved this part of the conversation. One for Viveka's thoughts about what she'd like to do if she had more money!! 👏

Two, for what Smrita said.

It's hard to judge a tone in written words. But when she says Raanav or Satyen can help, it didn't come across as a taunt to me. In my head, that sounds similar to how she'd expect Satyen or Rakshit to do something for Lekha. For a family member..

I don't know if it's just me.. but that was nice.

Loved it ♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

For the first time, we can like Smrita. If she can go back to her roots, the whole family will be better off.

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Posted: 3 years ago

To love & to protect and to sugar

“HOW did you find us?” Smrita was stunned

“Oh I texted her I was in the vicinity” Raanav lied pulling the chair sideways closer to his wife and reaching for her mug

“Isme cheeni hai” she giggled

He sipped anyway

With a foam moustache, he pursed his lips to lick it off

Smrita watched the congeniality between the two, her Brit born, UK raised son was sidling up to this girl now

“I was in the vicinity too Smrita lied

Both mother and son exchanged a look

“So?” he asked his wife

“She was just telling me the next time we argue about something important, we need to include her” Viveka smiled fondly at her MIL

He started to laugh

“U think I cant argue”

“Oh I KNOW U can argue Mum” he shrugged throwing his hands up in air

Viveka side eyed him

“I cant believe you both show up on the same day… what are the odds?” Viveka tried to change the topic

Raanav had rushed to be by Viveka’s side as soon as he heard his mother was prowling around in Shahpur Jat

“I can visit whenever I want” he grabbed Viveka’s hand possessively

She began to laugh

“So I have to ask for permission?” Smrita looked confused

“Umm.. I don’t know maybe it might be a good idea”

“You think we can never talk to each other” Smrita argued loudly

“I never said that”

“She is my DIL too” Smrita was irritated that Raanav was being so possessive

“Get ur own coffee” Viveka whispered grabbing the cup, he didn’t let go until he took a big sip

“Buy it for me”

“I have change” Smrita pushed a coupe Rs.100 bills toward her son

“She got this Mum.. its her territory” he winked at his Mum

He yanked his wife’s hand gently she got up rolling her eyes, left her purse on the seat Smrita noticed

She watched them standing in line and whispereing to each other and giggling

Until an hour ago she had really not cared about this girl, now she couldn’t help looking at her

“What is she saying to you?” Raanav had his back toward his Mum

“NOTHING” Viveka was shocked

“Sure?”

“Tum pagal ho?” she questioned

“May…bee… she cant be here for nothing surely”

“Stop speculating like that” she was irritated

“I HAVE to” he shot back

“You think I cannot defend myself”

“I don’t know… I don’t care I am here now” his eyes were piercing

“Don’t” she warned

“I am not doing anything”

“Ur presence itself proves you don’t trust me or your Mum to be adults”

“Because she is arrogant and selfish” Raanav blurted

Viveka was in shock

“You cannot police her for the rest of your life” she warned

“But I can express my opinion” he whispered

It was her turn to order

He was grouchy now

She ordered her coffee with EXTRA SUGAR for him the girl told her politely “U have to add sugar on ur own”

“Sorry forgot” Viveka nodded

He didn’t care

She turned to him to ask if he wanted something to eat

“Have u had ur lunch?”

“No…. its Wednesday I eat with my crew in my office, we order froma nearby dhaba”

“I will eat with you” he agreed grabbing her hand, she ordered a wrap hoping he would eat that and leave her alone.

“Oh really… to show ur Mom we are close?” she laughed shaking her head

“U can act cool and unaffected Viveka Mathur, but she could have told you to get out of my life”

“Why does it bother you that your mother is displaying behavior you displayed 10 months ago?” she challenged

“I never asked you to get out of anyone’s life” he was being particularly dense

They were hissing at each other like vipers at the sugar/stirrer station

Smrita was on the phone announcing her Europe trip to a group of friends over video chat

She was rarely alone or lonely… or she was and she never showed it, because she was too busy chatting with someone

“U need to stop doing this” she warned

“I did nothing”

“Buying a freaking apartment, chasing across town to show up here to spy on her. Can u keep this up the rest of ur life”

“If I have to… I WILL” he said quietly

“Apni Ma se itni nafrat karte ho ya mujhse pyaar?” she asked staring into his eyes distractedly as she let the words slip

“WHattt?” he didn’t get it

“Are u policing ur mother or protecting me” she changed her words

“There was a giant blow out in my parents room this morning so she is surely plotting something, I am just being wary” he sighed

“U talk like that it sounds like she is a horrible woman… she is not my best friend… I am not noble… but nevertheless, it sounds like she is evil”

Their names were called out

He grabbed the steaming hot wrap, she grabbed the coffee and added extra sugar when he was not looking

They walked back to the table

Smrita was pacing outside since it was too noisy inside

He sipped his coffee and make a face

“WHAT did u do?” he scowled

“Cheeni daali maine” she shrugged smugly

He leaned and kissed her on the lips

A few teens, 20 somethings tried not to look and looked anyway… it was too juicy to pass up

He was satisfied he had irritated her

She HATED such antics in public

Smrita walked in at the very moment watching her son kiss his wife as they glared at each other

“Eat ur wrap” she pushed his plate toward him tasting his coffee off her lips

“Nope”

“Why did u kiss me?”

“Why did u add the sugar”

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow 🤩

I don’t think have loved Ranaav more then this before.

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Posted: 3 years ago

But Viveka is right. Ranaav needs to let Smrita and Viveka be.

Or else they won’t even have chance to form a bond if their own.

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Posted: 3 years ago

“She is my DIL too” Smrita was irritated that Raanav was being so possessive 🤣

Can't believe this! Smrita is making a claim on Viveka 😆


“Buying a freaking apartment, chasing across town to show up here to spy on her. Can u keep this up the rest of ur life”

“If I have to… I WILL” he said quietly ♥️


“Why did u kiss me?”

“Why did u add the sugar”

What a way to irritate each other! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

“Why did u kiss me?”


“Why did u add the sugar”

🤣❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

“Why did u kiss me?”

“Why did u add the sugar”


😂😂😂😂😂😂

LOVE IT! ♥️

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