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Viveka is back but she should not have bothered. Selfish Naina had taken over taking care and completely overhauled the house. Rearranged the kitchen, re-decorated the living room, and sorted the twins' rooms. Everyone is praising Naina and appreciating her. Viveka might as well stayed with Raanav and gone to Norway. But Smriti is probably happy that Viv is not with her son.
Thank you, Nisha.
Undone
“Me showing up with no earring entices you?” she twisted his words
“Ha” he realized what she was doing there
“”If that’s what you meant and nothing else, then YES” he agreed laughing under his breath
“U are just making me think I should not have left London”
He was very very quiet
“You said you had to take care of your Mum”
“Looks like Naina has it all under control” she revealed her displeasure
“that’s great”
“Its like I am not even here” she chuckled in a labored way
“Just being an independent observer of quality of care”
“Nahi…. Ma ko koi zaroorat hi nahi ab meri” she tried not to choke up
“Uh”
“What are you upto in Norway… I have heard about their Norwegian Arctic cod”
He laughed
“Fly down I will buy you some”
“I could” she said for the first time ever
“I can find u the shortest route”
“Kal Dad ko dekhne jaaoongi since my job here is done” jealousy filled up her eyes with tears
She muted the phone sniffled and wiped angrily
It was sooo stupid to be sooo jealous of Naina
“Have u spoken to him, one of his test results were really great”
“Oh really? He never told me”
“As u know we are not on speaking terms any more” he chuckled derisively
“Rakshit ne kaha?”
“Hmm”
“I will go to work in the morning, and then go over there and maybe even go to his office and surprise him”
“Gloat away Ms Mathur”
“IKR especially when some people cannot get along”
She laughed
“What do u want from Norway”
“Just get me a few Fjord horses and lynx would do please”
“Meat or whole live animals?”
“S---t! No don’t kill them… LIVE”
“Got it” he was happy he had provoked her
“Were u seriously goingt o go hunting?”
“Do I look like a hunter to u?”
“U do” she said softly
He smiled at the other end
“What else?”
“Just stay out of trouble I don’t want to hear Dad saying “I cant send him anywhere anymore” she spoke smugly
He laughed and laughed
“Are u his rep?”
“Cud be…”
“say hi to ur Mum for me”
“Will do”
“Have u had dinner?”
“I slept all day and just had lunch”
“Did u sleep on ur belly?”
He HATED that
“Umm yeah” she laughed out loud
“I am by myself so yeah” she rubbed it in
“can we facetime?”
“I am helping the cleaning lady move plants around in all the balconies” she whispered panting
“In an hour?”
“See u just gave me a plum opportunity to tell Dad u are slacking off
“This is part of my job profile” he laughed
They both realized what that meant
The marriage was a job in a certain sense
“U are acing it” she approved
“Ur turn to call me next time”
“I just told u what all I did”
“Seriously?”
“Umm.. U know, Naina once told me there is a thrill in staying on the phone all night,I laughed… I mean why give up on your sleep”
“I am just relieved you will never script movies”
She laughed until she gasped
“It was not a joke”
“I know… I suck at anything other than data and theories” she was ashamed
“There are schools for such things u cud get trained”
“TUMSE baat karne ke liye main training loongi?” she was shocked
“I meant script writing” he lied
“OH? “Um… Oh!? Um”
He smiled knowingly
She was gullible and smokin hot
“Lets have an argument Vi” he begged
“U are mad”
“I want to do it on facetime I want to see your face when u tell me off”
She blushed
“Papa says I lose my shit when I think I am right”
“I might love the guy”
“Jao… kaam karo!” she ordered
“An hour?”
Send me a n--- selfie first” she challenged … “Umm.. no no I take that back… send me a selfie wearing one o those shirts u modeled” she laughed
She got one in two hours
He drove back to the hotel and did as he was told
The thumbnail of the image popped on her locked phone when she was having chai with Ma and Naina and Papa in their balcony
She quickly hid her phone when she saw the picture of him just in what seemed like a white shirt
“I am going over there tomorrow” Viveka announced
“Abhi to aaye ho beta” Papa was not happy
Ma and Naina were commenting or gesticulating on a neighbor’s dupatta across the block
Waving at the neighbor
“Anu… Viveka ja rahi hai”
“Arey beta? WHYYY” Anu questioned
It gave Viveka some relief
So she was needed afterall
“Umm.. I have to go to Shahpur Jat tomorrow, and I thought ek baar chali jaaoongi”
Naina she noticed was polite and pleasant but not really “there”
“How is your FIL?” Anu asked
“I don’t know… he doesn’t know I returned he ordered me to go to Norway I returned”
Viveka laughed
“Ajeeb ghar hai “ Anu shook her head
At any other time it would not have stung Viveka but now with Naina and Ma teaming up she was startled by that comment
“He is very clear about what he wants Ma”
“Biwi ko nahi kehte shaayad” anu was bitter
“Arey kya hua? Smritaji se baat hui kya?” akash was baffled
“No no… I mean main kyon baat karoongi? I meant she has so much control over what happens in that house”
“Oh Inder ko lekar keh rahi ho?” Akash enquired
“Umm”
“Ma… its OVER” naina spoke sanctimoniously
“Ma main Naina aur aap movie dekhne jaayen?” Viveka offered
“Chalo beta” Anu smiled nodding
“I am going with Chachi Varsha and Bua sorry” Naina declined
“Hamey le chal beta” Akash begged
“Girls only Papa”
“Papa aap MERE saath chalo” Naina jumped up and hugged him
Naina was upto something….
Viveka shut herself in the bathroom and cried first and then ogled his picture
“I changed my mind… I wanted one with a shirt AND a tie” actually” after ogling him…. her heart pounding
“What color?” he texted
“Pink” she said
“And oh! The buttons need to be undone”
What are they? Hormonal Teenagers? Asking for a selfie in a pink shirt with buttons undone. Next Raanav will ask Viveka to send her selfie wearing no top.
Viveka finds herself on the loose as she was not needed to look after her mother. Naina has everything under control. She should have gone to Norway with Raanav and watched NorthernLights.
Thank you, Nisha.
I like this jealous and expressive Viveka.
Am sure Ranaav would love this even more.
For starters, Raanav and Viveka can start talking about how they both hate when their parents ignore them and give the other sibling more prominence.
I remember how upset Raanav was when Satyen had lunch with Rakshit and Raanav was not invited. And now with Satyen not talking to Raanav is surely not a happy situation for Raanav.
Same way, now Viveka is upset as her mom is giving more importance to Naina.
How similar these two are when it comes to this matter and so a nice conversation topic between them and also make them think how similar they are.
What is this Naina upto now?
Wow Anu is so judgmental about others and when someone including her own MIL judges her, she gets mad.
Just like Anu feels someone else does not fit her thought process or her style, then it should be fine if they do not think Anu as her style.
But looks like Anubha does not even give a thought about it.
Originally posted by: Eastender
What are they? HormoneousTeenagers? Asking for a selfie in a pink shirt with buttons undone. Next Raanav will ask Viveka to send her selfie wearing no top.
Viveka finds herself on the loose as she was not needed to look after her mother. Naina has everything under control. She should have gone to Norway with Raanav and watched NorthernLights.
Thank you, Nisha.
Arey yaar Eastender
They are married its legal and they are barely 30 If they dont demand n--e selfies from each other NOW phir kab maangenge? At the age of 80? Which also is absolutely fine too BTW in MY opinion😉
Its a love story afterall there will be s--😃 LOTS of it😃
I love writing about two smokin hot people having unending s--
A relationship drama would be super boring... TV mein aata rehta hai saara din.... too much make up and a whole lot of crying😃
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Cooked
“Ma kaisi hain aapki?”
“she is fine Dad” she nodded
“Papa?”
“I know they both cannot stay put” she laughed
Satyen served more koftas on her plate, he had ordered take out from a really popular Gurgaon joint where people literally waited from 11 AM to 2 PM to geta spot
“This is the best koftas” Viveka’s speech slurred as she dug in
“How is Raanav?”
“Great”
“He made me cut my hair” she felt the back of her high ponytail
“U look 16” he chuckled
“He must have had a GF in high school that had hair like this’ she winked at her FIL
“Usee ko poocchti aap”
“I asked him”
“Umm?”
“He said he loves short hair”
“Aappko ko bhi u shud have made him change his appearance” Satyen urged
“I had no demands” she shrugged smiling
“Did u have a good time? Did u go meet the Dhamijas?”
“Hmm” she swallowed and suddenly looked at her plate
“Nice”
“Just Mamiji and Sid, and Cleo” she smiled
“Is that in order of likeability?”
“Sid and Cleo” she laughed
“Oh”
“I mean all three” she quickly corrected herself
“Viveka Mathur I expect honesty from you, I give you honesty I am hoping I can receive it”
She nodded
“I don’t like how you are always so guarded, unless u have something to hide” he smiled looking at her from under his lashes
“Its embarrassing and pointless” she smiled
“We all have something mera matlab” he nodded scratching his head
“I speak up and say what I don’t like”
“Jaanta hoon beta I have told ur Dad I LOVE that about you”
“Then secrecy?”
“I find you are guarded about things you think are inappropriate”
“ My opinion is not important”
“aap ek baat samajh lo beta, if you are serious about making the marriage work phir to aapko sach kehna padega aur humse sach sun na padega
“Raanav se nahi?” she mocked him
“Who aapki marzi beta, how much honesty u have in ur marriage” he sighed
They both were quiet
“I realize this family did u wrong…”
“No they didn’t Dad”
“Phir jhooth?”
She was quiet
“Naina aur aap dono ne meri family mein kisi se interaction shuru kiya, even after 8 months things are still on shaky ground”
“No, not for me” she defended herself a little too quickly
“Yes for u and for Naina… Naina ended her relationship”
Viveka tried to hide
“This has nothing to do with you, stop being guilty, stop feeling guilty” he said firmly
“Umm.. nahi… mera matlab”
“As a sibling u feel responsible…. It should have never been this way” Satyen was merciless
“U cannot police everyone or everything”
“But I expect to be told by YOU ki kya situation hai” he pleaded
“Aap is ghar ke ho beta, OWN IT…. Batao hamey humse kya galti hui, Smrita se kya hui”
“Hmm” she nodded
“You have held positions of power and authority at the university, you know what it is to be objective… u can be objective, you are smart… we are not ending relationships by being honest, we are helping”
She nodded
“Mujhe EK BAAR aapne bataya hota Naina Inder ke beech kya chal raha hai, what is YOUR take, what does Naina think Naina feel… I reached out to her unhoney mana kar diya”
She looked distraught
“this cud have been two people in love, there was an opportunity for intervention, either support the idea or stop before something reckless had happened”
“Even she did not know she had married him in Dubai usko laga mazaak hoga”
“In a way I should be happy how it turned out Inder is not worthy of her”
Her eyes filled up
“Raanav would never do such a thing, I have never seen him get drunk and lose his sense of self”
Her eyes sparkled with pride
“He never forgets who he is” Satyen’s tone indicated condemnation
“You should hang around for 20 minutes, mujhe ghar se order aaya hai I cannot be at work past 2, its already 3, if I go with you I wont get blasted” he laughed
Viveka stared at him speechless
The man let Smrita have the upper hand when it came to his health
He willfully let her take the lead
He wanted to be involved, wanted to make decisions for everyone else but allowed Smrita to dictate what he should do about his health
“Raanav said ur tests were great for blood sugar”
“Hafta ruk jaayen beta aap Ive had 4 gulabjamuns at lunch today” he rubbed his belly
“Oh no!” “I thought you only had one”
“I ate THREE” he showed his fingers and winked
“Its not funny” she was upset
He watched her face turn red
“You have no idea how much everyone worries” “The mere fact that you are even able to walk by yourself after the wreck is a miracle, why would you jeopardize your health like this
What is the use of returning home after doing what you want at lunch time?” and on and on and on she went
“Raanav’s right… you are all about standing up for whats right”
“Mujhe chalna chahiye” she tidied the table and the office assistant
When the table was cleared of the lunch dishes, he stood up wobbly at first, being seated for hours
She helped him to his stick
“I like your proprietary rant, I am happy you care enough about me to scold me beta”
He tapped her cheek
“I scold people at home frequently Dad, I can do it more often” she smiled
Smrita’s expression was worthy of photographing when they entered the atrium together
“You are back… I did not know” she approached her husband but bothered enough to give her a cursory peck on the cheek
“Raanav didn’t tell me you returned” she lied
“I asked him to keep it a secret” she smiled back
“Oh? “Um”
“And… its back to normal” Satyen sat down and chuckled softly
“BTW Smri main inke saath later by the end of the week Nasik ja raha hoon, she has agreed to help me out”
“Oh that’s what it is?” Viveka smiled joyously
“Abhi Economists hire karne ki hamari auqaat kaha beta, I am not a multinational conglomerate”
“U are giving her an official role?” Smrita had to know what the young girl had cooked up while eating a cooked meal
Originally posted by: Nisha0604
Arey yaar Eastender
They are married its legal and they are barely 30 If they dont demand n--e selfies from each other NOW phir kab maangenge? At the age of 80? Which also is absolutely fine too BTW in MY opinion😉
Its a love story afterall there will be s--😃 LOTS of it😃
I love writing about two smokin hot people having unending s--
A relationship drama would be super boring... TV mein aata rehta hai saara din.... too much make up and a whole lot of crying😃
Good for us.
Would love to see Viveka more involved with her in laws family. In way that she can make a difference and feel good about it.
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