My collection of Short Stories.! Updated @page 8 - Page 3

20 years and the routine has become boring. She needs a change.

She gets to make a wish and they will try to fulfill it?

Armaan has lost touch with being a husband. He didn't even ask what made her smile. Just dropped the topic.

The old advice to the bride assumed she will have no life of her own. And she was given no chance to live it her way.

Why is she canceling? Is it because she wants her husband to fill in instead?

Pihu planned the whole thing. How sweet. She must have read her diary.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Pihu planned the whole thing. How sweet. She must have read her diary.

Yes, 20 years into same routine, she must be so pissed off.!

And when she got to know that someone is going to fulfill her wishes, she got wondered for that.

Arman got busy in his office and work, but he do love Aasha.

Aasha was already told by her mother, the same typical thinking.

Aasha thought to cancel her plans because she thought if Arman is not involved in her happiness then nothing is real happiness for her. And when she got to witness Arman's reaction, she thought to cancel her visit.

Arman read the diary and then both Pihu and he has planned things for Aasha. Indeed the sweetest gesture.!

Thanks for joining here, stay tuned for the next story. I will update that soon❣️

Beautiful & emotional piece Saumya

Loved it ☺

True sometimes we realize the importance of relationship when it is gone ... Due to our own fears insecurity & stubbornness we loose best & beautiful relationship

Edwin did the same by loosing Khushi & he realized that it is all about getting back home & now there is none for him 🙁

Last part was best & Relalistc & Edwin repent his mistake to value love & relationship in his life

Keep writing✍️

O God... It was like watching some short movie where once lovers turned friends... The very first quoted lines of the story caught my complete attention and makes the story more interesting and not only like some usual story where lovers gets separated from each other and settle down and then becomes friends..

The way Edwin was in so much in pain, guilt and disheartened even in his one of the best moment of his life , standing at a point where he had everything name, fame, glory but regretting the biggest mistake of his life, shows that the decision he took back then was taken in the impulse of the situation and not given a second thought before stating it which leads him toa miserable life...

The flashbacks where you show the blooming love of Edwin Khushi was a good one and not like something filmy but realistic...

Finally Edwin gathered all his courage to face his past and compensate for his biggest mistake of his life. The sudden happiness he got when Khushi accepted his friend request clearly points out that he still love her , it was never a mere attraction but yes his silly mind overpowered his love ..

The second flashback was really very emotional to witness a broken Khushi and a miserable Edwin ...

The way you ended the story is really appreciable. How maturely Khushi as well as Edwin handled everything and sorted out everything especially Edwin , because accepting and repenting for the mistake committed in past is difficult. Finally they become friends and how happy Edwin seems .. He finally understood where his true happiness lies...

Love it completely yaar....

Waiting for more such amazing piece of works....

Take care 💕💖💕

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Beautiful & emotional piece Saumya

Loved it ☺

True sometimes we realize the importance of relationship when it is gone ... Due to our own fears insecurity & stubbornness we loose best & beautiful relationship

Edwin did the same by loosing Khushi & he realized that it is all about getting back home & now there is none for him 🙁

Last part was best & Relalistc & Edwin repent his mistake to value love & relationship in his life

Keep writing✍️

Thanks Goldie ☺️

Handling a relationship is a great task. Wo kehte hai na, pyar karna asan hai, nibhana mushkil... That we all should learn in our life ❤️

Edwin is sad for loosing Khushi, but then both were mature enough to become friends again. They doesn't have any hatred for each other which is a good decision.

Will come again with another story soon ❣️