This is the best update. Raavi and Shiva are so adorable and cutest Jodi❤️
Awesome update❤️
Hi guys🤗.
I hope you guys are doing fine😊.
So, finally I am back with another update. And let me warn you already that this update will be a roller coaster ride in terms of emotions so ignore it if you are not in a mood right now😊.
Also, thank you so much for pouring so much love on the previous update. I loved reading them❤️.
Special thanks to @GrilledCheese for helping me❤️
Happy reading guys🤗.
Part 6
From the bonfire night things changed between Shiva and Raavi, they were nice to each other, thought about each other, cared about each other and fought for each other.
Being nice doesn’t mean they don’t fight much. They still fight like cats and dogs but healthy fighting, no mean comments passed to each other.
It’s been a week since the Maha Mritunjay Jaap started in the temple and all the couples used to sit in the Pooja as and when needed.
From early morning only Gaumbi had sent Shiva for some urgent work, he and Dhara were in the temple. While the other four were in the haveli only.
Dev and Rishita were busy as usual and Krish and Raavi were sitting in the living area and playing Ludo. Raavi was in no mood but Krish forced her to play so she played too.
‘Vaise Raavi bhabhi mere man mein ek baat thi’ Krish spoke.
They both have been really close now just like brother and sister, Krish started the interactions with him and soon Raavi was also fond of their interacting time. They used to talk about old times, his college, the ribbon girl. Raavi’s miseries her feelings. She always talked about Shiva be it in a complaining way or in a praising way.
The things he has observed compelled him to ask a serious question.
Raavi replied concentrating on her game ‘Ha puch na’
‘Aap sach mein Dev se pyar karte the?’ Krish asked.
Raavi shot her eyes up at him and saw honesty in his eyes and knew he was not teasing her so replied ‘Shayad. Pata nahi’
‘Matlab?’
‘Pata nahi matlab toh mujhe bhi. Tu kyu puch raha hai yeh sab?’ raavi inquired.
‘Kyu dil apka dev ne toda, kaide se apko uski class lagani chahiye par aap Shiva mein hi gum rehti ho, matlab I know ki aap dono sirf ladte ho lekin phir bhi. Aap itni occupied rehti ho Shiva se ki apko nahi lagta ki Dev hai jisse apko gussa hona chahiye naraz hona chahiye.
Raavi thought about it for a few seconds before replying ‘Par naraz toh unse hote hai na Krish jinse kuch expectation ho jinpe kuch haq ho.’
Krish replied amused ‘MAtlab aap yeh kehna chah rahi ho ki jis insan se pyar karne ka dava apne bachpan se kia usse apko na expectations thi na hi haq? Or jis insan se apne zindagi bhar sirf ladai ki hai nafrat ki hai usse apko expectations bhi hai or uspe haq bhi?’
Raavi was stunned to hear what he just said, she saw him chuckling ‘Kyu has raha hai?’ she asked innocently
‘Aap dono ki bewakufio par’ Krish spoke.
‘Kya kehna chahta hai tu Krish. Clear bol’ Raavi asked.
Krish got up and spoke before leaving ‘Isse zyada clear nahi keh sakta. Aage ke jawab aap khud dhundo bhabhi or meri baton par sochna zarur’
Raav was left thinking about what Krish said, she went to the garden area to get a clear vision.
Journey from childhood played out in front of her eyes and the only moments she could think of was of her and Shiva, be it fighting with each other, teasing each other, colliding with each other or hugging each other friendly.
Infact when she used to dream about her and Dev then also Shiva used to intervene in her dreams. All the wedding rituals she celebrated with Shiva not with Dev.
What she had with Shiva was way more intense than what she felt with Dev.
She was brought out of her chain of thoughts when she heard her name being called.
Dev was passing by when he saw Raavi sitting on the bench lost deeply. He proceeded towards her and called her name ‘Raavi’. No response.
He called her 2-3 times more before she responded.
‘Huh. ha Dev bolo’ Raavi spoke coming out of her thoughts.
‘MAin baithu yaha?’ Dev asked hesitantly.
Raavi replied nonchalantly ‘Ha baitho. Kya hua?’
‘Yeh toh mujhe tumse puchna chahiye Raavi. Kaha khoi hui thi?’ He asked casually.
‘Umm. ku..kuch nahi bas kuch soch rahi thi. Tum bolo kuch kaam tha?’ She asked.
Dev spoke taking a deep breath ‘Sorry Raavi. Maine jo bhi kiya uske liye, bahut galat tha vo.’
Raavi looked at him and said ‘Galat to tumne kia hai Dev but It’s okay. Bhul jao jo hua. Koi matlab nahi hai un baton ka ab’
Dev was feeling more guilty as he thought she was being nice to him ‘NAhi Raavi. Maine tumhari or Shiva ki zindagi kharab kardi, agar us waqt himat ki hoti toh shayad tum dono ko yeh shadi na karni padti.’
‘Pata hai Dev yeh zindagi hamare hisab se nahi chalti. Or kehte hai na man ka mile toh acha or na mile toh or bhi acha kyuki usme Bhagwan ki marzi hai.
Mere man ka tum the par acha hua Bholenath ne time pe apne man ki kari kyuki maine kabhi realise nahi kia lekin Shiva se best mere liye koi nahi ho sakta tha’ She said with a dreaming smile.
Dev was stunned to hear that ‘Sach mein Raavi?’ he asked excitedly.
Raavi too replied excitedly ‘Ha’. Dev was so happy to hear that he took her in a friendly-brotherly hug.
They broke the hug when they heard the sound of clapping, they turned to see Rishita standing there.
Raavi knew what she might be thinking so tried to explain but she came and spoke rudely ‘Dikha dia na apna asli rang?’
Dev was shocked ‘Rishita kya bol rahi ho tum yeh?’
‘Chup karo Dev. tumse toh main baad mein baat karungi. Pehle isse nipat lu.’
‘Rishita tum jaisa soch rahi ho vaisa…’ Raavi tried to explain.
‘Chup. ek dam Chup. MEre peeth piche mere hi pati ko gale laga rahi ho or keh rahi ho ki aisa kuch nahi hai? Sharam nahi ati tumhe Raavi? Apne hi pati ke bhai ke sath yeh sab karte hue?
Inhi harkato ki vajah se tumhe pyar nahi mila kabhi, yeh jo tum har waqt roti rehti ho na you deserve it. Tum jaisi ladkia yahi deserve karti hai.’ Rishita roared.
‘What do you mean mujh jaisi ladkia?’ Raavi asked with widened eyes.
‘Vohi ladkia jo apne hi Jeth par dore dalti hai. No wonder Shiva tumse pyar nahi karta shayd vo bhi janta tha ki tum jaisi cheap characterless ladki deserve nahi karti yeh sab.’ Rishita spatted poison.
Raavi stumbled back, the words she said made her numb she couldn’t speak anything. The next she spoke broke her.
‘You know what isiliye tumhare maa baap zinda nahi hai is duniya mein. Agar hote toh vaise hi tum jaisi beti pa kar mar jate.’
‘Bas Rishita. Kya kya bol rahi ho. Sun toh lo ek baar?’ Dev roared.
‘Tum toh chup hi raho Dev. LEt me handle her’ Rishita didn’t hear him at all
‘Chup Rishita. How dare you? Raavi bhabhi ke baare mein bolne ki himat kaise hui apki?’ Krish spoke who came in hearing everything.
‘Krish chote ho chote banke raho. Pehle bhi kaha tha tamiz se baat kia karo.’ Rishita retorted.
‘Tamiz or izat kamayi jati hai Rishita. Tumhe zara bhi sharam nahi ati kya? Raavi bhabhi pe kichad uchalne se pehle yeh nahi dekha ki tum vohi kichad Dev par bhi uchal rahi ho. Chii’
‘Krish yeh kya tamiz hai Rishita se baat karne ki?’ Dhara spoke who heard only the last part.
‘Bhabhi apko nahi pata inhone Raavi bhabhi se kya kya kaha’ He turned to where Raavi was standing only to find that place empty. ‘Raavi bhabhi. Kaha gayi bhabhi’ he was shocked and tense.
‘Hua kya hai Krish?’ Dhara asked. KRish narrated everything to her. Dhara couldn’t control it and slapped Rishita. ‘Sharam nahi ati tumhe ek aurat hote hue dusri aurat ke bare mein bolte hue? Us ladki ke zakham abhi bharne lage the or tumne phir itni gehri chot dedi?’
‘Dhara bhabhi aap janti nahi hai kya hua yaha. Vo raavi Devi ko hug kar rahi thi.’ Rishita spoke
‘Toh? Tumne pucha ki aisa kya hua? Zaruri nahi hai Rishita ki agar yeh dono hug kar rahe the toh kuch hai hi inke beetch. Raavi pe na sahi Dev par toh bharosa karti.’ Dhara screamed.
Krish who went to check for Raavi in the haveli came back and spoke ‘Dhara bhabhi. Raavi bhabhi nahi hai haveli mein. Maine har possible jagah dhund lia.’
Dhara and Dev both were tense. KRish took out his phone and started dialling a number.
‘Kisko phone kar raha hai Krish?’ Dhara asked.
‘Shiva ko.’ Krish spoke but Dhara held his hand and stopped him.
‘Nahi. tu janta hai na Shiva ko pata laga toh vo kya karega’ Dhara spoke, fear visible in her eyes.
‘Chupa nahi sakte usse bhabhi’ Krish spoke. He knew Shiva would set the place on fire and especially this girl if he came to know that someone hurt his Mami ki behen ki beti but he deserved to know.’
‘Ek baar Raavi mil jaye phir bata denge. Or vo ghar aa jayega toh bata hi denge. Tu ja dhund kaha hai vo. Or phone kar use.’ Dhara spoke.
‘Phone room mein tha unka.’ Krish spoke. This tensed Dhara more.
Krish was about to leave when Dev offered to accompany him. They were about to leave when Rishita spoke ‘Dev..’
Dev shooted a deathly glare at her and nodded his head in a No.
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It’s been two hours since Raavi left the haveli and there was no whereabouts of her. Dhara and Rishita were sitting in the living area waiting for her when Shiva returned home and called out for his Chipkali.
‘Kaha hai yeh Chipkali bhabhi? Jawab bhi nahi de rahi’ Shiva asked washing his hands and face.
Dhara was scared she couldn’t utter a word to him. Shiva asked again ‘Bhabhi Raavi kaha hai?
Before Dhara could reply KRish came running followed by Dev.
‘Bhabhi kahi nahi mili Raavi bhabhi’ He spoke, panting for air.
Shiva asked ‘NAhi mili matlab? Kaha gayi vo?’ Shiva asked suspiciously.
‘Vo..vo’ Krish stammered as he looked at Dhara. Dhara assured him to go ahead.
‘Vo vo kya Krish. Kaha hai Raavi?’ He roared like a lion. Everyone present got scared seeing him.
Krish narrated the whole scene that happened earlier.
Shiva’s eyes were blood red he turned to Rishita and screamed ‘Sharam nahi hai kya zara bhi? Kya bigada hai meri biwi ne tumhara?’
‘Shiva tumhari biwi mere pati ko gale laga kar baithi thi’ Rishita tried to reason. Everyone else in the room was disgusted by her.
Shiva was disgusted too he spoke, anger visible in his eyes. 'Agar meri Raavi ko kuch bhi hua main kasam kha ke kehta hu jaan se maar dunga tujhe.’
Rishita shivered seeing the rage in his eyes.
Shiva was about to leave when Dev stopped him ‘Bhai aisa kuch nahi tha jaisa Rishita ne samjha’
Shiva wiped a lone tear that escaped his eye ‘Tujhe kaha tha na ki apne rishte ki safai kisi ko bhi dio par mujhe nahi. Tu shayad samjha nahi tha lekin aaj bata deta hu ki main ache se janta hu ki Raavi tere liye kuch feel nahi karti vo tujhe dost bhi nahi manti mere bhai. Sirf mere liye or is ghar ki shanti ke liye vo shant rehti hai.’ he turned to Rishita ‘Or Rishita tum. Itna bolne se pehle ek baar toh yaad karti ki vo tum dono ke liye couple rings lai thi agar itni hi dikat hoti use toh vo kyu lati vo rings? Or ek baat kahu? Sadly tum dono se zada bharosa toh hum dono ke beetch hai. Aaj tune jo kaha hai na usse uske liye main tujhe zindagi bhar maaf nahi karunga’
He turned to go when Krish spoke ‘MAin bhi chalta hu Shiva.’
Shiva replied ‘Nahi Krish. Kuch zarurat hogi toh main karunga call.’ Krish was not convinced but he still agreed.
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Raavi couldn’t handle all the poison Rishita spat for her. She left the place to never return back and came to the place where she started a new bond with him. Near the River side.
For once she thought that Shiva was the one for him and Rishita destroyed everything.
Now Shiva will also think that she is a loose character girl.
She cursed herself for hugging Dev be it in a brotherly way only but she regretted it.
‘Somnath sach mein koi khushi nahi likhi kya apne mere naseeb mein? Kuch der pehle lagne laga tha ki shayad sab thik ho raha hai lekin apne sab cheen lia mujhse. I hate you. I hate you.
She screamed looking upwards in the sky.
She cried uncontrollably. Her words kept ringing in her ears and hearing those words brought more tears to her eyes.
She wanted to jump in the river and lose her life but some part of her stopped her from doing so, her heart said that he will come to her.
She hugged her knees and sat in that position for a long time before he heard his voice.
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Shiva knew where she could be as she barely knew any places here. She drove his bike to the place where she could be found.
His heart was beating at the fastest, all negative thoughts came to his mind, thinking about them he increased the speed of the bike to reach the place quickly.
He parked his bike and ran to the place where he could find her. His heart skipped a beat when he saw her sitting there head down, hugging her knees. His heart broke to see her like this, he wiped his tears and proceeded towards her.
‘Ae chipkali. Yaha kya kar rahi hai?’ he asked casually. She shot her head up and he could tell by seeing her face that she didn’t stop crying all this while.
‘Tu yaha kya kar raha hai?’ she spoke, not meeting his eyes. But deep down she only knew how much she yearned for him.
He sat with her and spoke as if he didn't know anything ‘Yaha kyu aayi hai? Krish ne bataya ki tu ghar se chali ayi. Kya hua?’
Raavi just nodded her head in no ‘Kuch nahi. Thodi Rishita se kaha suni ho gayi thi.’
‘Toh haveli kyu chod aayi?’ he asked keenly observing her expressions.
‘NAhi tha mera man vaha rukne ka Shiva. Or tu bhi ja yaha se.’ she spoke, not looking at him.
‘Matlab? Tu nahi jayegi vapis vaha? Or main kyu jau yaha se?’ Shiva asked.
‘Tune suna nahi Rishita ne kya kaha?’ Raavi spoke.
‘Kya kaha bata?’ Shiva asked.
Raavi said ‘Shiva please ja mujhe nahi baat karni us baare mein.’
Shiva shouted ‘Kyu bhagane mein lagi hui hai? Nahi ja raha main. Aa gayi samajh?’
Shiva was making it difficult for Raavi to control her emotions. Raavi kept quiet for some more time, she didn’t know what to say, whether to clarify what happened with Dev or not.
Whereas Shiva gave her time to settle.
‘Main garden mein baithi thi or vaha Dev aya. Usne mujhe sorry bola or hamare beetch thodi baat hui. Uske baad usne mujhe hug kia, I swear Shiva vo hug friendly bhi nahi tha. Usne tere bhai hone ke naate mujhe hug kia or maine use.
Sach keh rahi hu main Shiva. Main Dev ko bilkul pasand nahi karti. Main characterless nahi hu Shiva’ She broke into tears.
Shiva heard that and pulled her rightly by her neck and hugged her. She cried loudly and all he did was just caressed her hair.
‘Us..Usne kaha ki main deserve karti.. Hu. har ansoo. Usne kaha main pyar deserve nahi karti. Shiva’ she broke down in his arms screaming every single thing.
Shiva’s fist clenched seeing her like this.
‘USne kaha or tune maan liya? Hai kon vo? Jiske kehne se tune khud ko itna kuch kaha or mana? Kon hai vo? Janti bhi hai vo tujhe jo uski kahi baton ko tune mana.’ Shiva too screamed.
Raavi was in his embrace hiding herself and hearing everything he said.
‘Intezar toh karti mera. Mar gaya tha kya main? Jo aa gayi vaha se?’ Shiva spoke now a bit calmly.
Raavi lifted her face and mumbled ‘Aise kyu bol raha hai tu Shiva?’
‘Or kaise bolu Raavi? Tu uske kehne par haveli chod ke aa gayi. Kon hai vo? Kya lagti hai teri jo tune itni ehmiyat di use.’ Shiva asked.
She kept on repeating the same thing ‘vo boli ki main apne hi pati ke bade bhai par dore dal rahi hu. Shiva mujhe ghin aa rahi hai khud se’ she broke the hug and distanced herself from him and dug her nails in her arms feeling disgusted.
‘Khud se? Kyu? Uske keh dene se kya vohi sach ho gaya?’ Shiva now asked calmly.He pulled her to him and placed her in between his legs in a way that her back touched her chest. He took her hands in his so that she wouldn't harm herself and caught her in his arms. The moment her back touched his chest she made herself comfortable in his embrace.
‘Raavi agar koi or bhi mujhe batata na ki us waqt tu Dev ko hug kar rahi thi toh main ake tujhse baat karta naaki Rishita ki tarah ilzam lagata. Jaise Krish tera chota bhai hai vaise hi main janta hu ki tu Dev ko bhi bhai manti hai. Mujh pe toh bharosa karti na.’ He spoke in a pleading way.
Raavi asked, shocked ‘ITna bharosa karta hai tu mujhpe?’
‘Ha karta hu. Or yeh bharosa tune hi dilaya hai Raavi. Bura laga mujhe yeh janke ki tujhe mujh par itna bhi bharosa nahi hai.’ he was genuinely hurt.
Raavi gasped taking his name ‘Shiva’
‘Chod kar aa gayi tu vo haveli. Itna asan tha kya mujhe chodna Raavi? Mujhe laga ki hum aage bad rahe hai par aaj tu mujhe chod kar aa gayi yar. Or kisi ka na sahi mere bare mein toh sochti ki Shiva apni Gauri ke bina kya karega? Kaise rahega.’ he confessed with tears in his eyes.
Raavi turned and cupped his face, she felt guilty for taking such a step ‘Sorry Shiva.’
Shiva spoke being hurt ‘Ja yar tu. ek baar bhi nahi socha tune mere baare mein. Agar tujhe kuch ho jata toh main kya karta? Socha tune? Nahi.
Ek bewakuf ladki ki vajah se hum sabko saza dene chali thi. ‘
She spoke ‘Shiva.. Maaf karde mujhe. Us waqt Rishita ne jo bhi kaha sab sach lag raha tha, lag raha tha ki koi nahi hai mera. Akeli hu is duniya mein. Mujhe.. ‘ the sentence could never get completed as he placed his lips on hers.
He was so angry with her for doing that, that he kissed her and poured all his anger in that kiss. The kiss was not at all soft, it was rough like him. He pulled her by her hair more into him and deepened the kiss.
Raavi was taken aback by that move of his, she always imagined her first kiss to be soft and romantic but she didn’t know she will be getting married to this man who does everything with passion. Her thoughts went wild with what all things he will do to her all her life and she blushed.
Soon she was out of her fantasyland when she felt him bite her lip, she yelped with pain and he took the opportunity and entered her mouth and explored it fully. She let him dominate her because she could feel the emotions he was pouring in that kiss and they were very much justified.
HE broke the kiss when felt breathless, he joined their foreheads and spoke ‘Agar aaj ke baad kaha na ki koi nahi hai tera toh aise hi kha jaunga main tujhe. Yaad rakhiyo.’
She blushed hearing that and took him in her arms, he buried his head in her crook and smelled her fragrance and pleaded this time ‘Please mat jaio kabhi mujhe chod ke Raavi. Main nahi jee paunga’
She teased him ‘Or tu gaya chod ke toh?’
‘Koi chance hi nahi hai. Tujh jaisi chipkali mujh jaise bhalu ke liye bani hai main tujhe kabhi kahi nahi jaane dunga. Tu chahegi toh bhi nahi’ Shiva spoke still in her arms.
Raavi broke the hug and asked ‘Vaada kar kabhi nahi chodega. Baki sabki tarah tu kabhi nahi chodke jayega.’
Shiva could hear the insecurity in her voice and he spoke ‘Depend karta hai. Agar tu mujh jaise bhalu ko bardasht hi na kar pai toh? MEra gussa or mera pyar dono kar legi handle?’
Raavi knew what he meant thinking about which brought a blush on her face and she nodded her head in a yes.
‘Maine tujhe kabhi blush karte nahi dekha.’ Shiva spoke amused.
‘Kabhi tune aisa kuch kia bhi toh nahi ki main blush karu.’ she spoke bluntly
Shiva spoke, pulling her by her waist ‘Acha ji?’ She just nodded.
He cupped her face with one hand and looked in her eyes intently and spoke with utmost honesty ‘Yeh Shiva tujhe vaada karta hai ki tujhe kabhi nahi chodega, tere ache bure har waqt mein tere sath rahunga. Or tu bhi ab se yeh nahi kahegi ki sab tujhe chodke jate hai. MEra tere sath rukne ka irada aakhri sans tak hai. Ab toh vo Shiv hi alag kar sakta hai hume’ he joked in the last line.
Raavi hit him on his chest and said ‘Mat bol na aise.’
Shiva hugged her.
Their moment was broken from Shiva’s phone ringing, he fetched the phone from his pocket and saw Krish’s name flashing.
‘Hello Shiva. Bhabhi mili?’ Shiva heard a worried Krish from the other side.
Shiva smiled and spoke ‘Ha mil gayi. Mere sath hai.’
‘Thank God. Ghar leke aa inko. Aaj inhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta’ He said with anger.
Raavi smiled hearing that and spoke ‘Sorry mere bhai’
They could hear his voice crack up ‘Koi sorry nahi, ghar ao aap.’ and he disconnected the call.
Shiva spoke ’or tu kehti hai koi tujhse pyar nahi karta.’
Raavi smiled and hugged him again. ‘Thank you Shiva itni pyari family meri jholi mein bharne ke liye.’
He hugged her and said ‘Pyari hai ya nahi yeh toh tujhe ghar jake pata lagega.’ She chuckled at hearing him and hugged him even more tightly.
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So, how was it guys?
I hope you guys liked it.
I will meet you soon with the last update of this story. Till then take care🤗.
The update was so beautiful ❤️ Their relationship is just perfect ❤️
Krish and Raavi's bond is so adorable! I love it and am so excited to read more of that 🤗
Rishita is actually mad, can't believe she said all that to Raavi 😡 Good that Dhara slapped her! She deserved it.
Excited for more
aww so beautiful..whenever i read write ups, only one thing comes in my mind..does pure love really exist?
mwri shaadi hogaya ,bacchaey bhi hey..but before marriage, i always wished koi ladka mujsaey pagaloan ki tarah pyar karaen,possessive ho..ekin kabhi hua nahi...damn beautiful college life and spinster days.....
and haan shivi lovers...i am regularly reading wattpad..and read beautiful love stories...
This story is one of my fav
.i am not finding anything about shivi there...
do give a try guys...
Great progress in the story ..Raavi and Krish bond was beautiful too
Shiva being so angry on behalf of Raavi was a treat
Shiva Raavi convo was the best part - so clear, only trust no space for doubt
Awesome chapter. It was emotional at middle and i really loved raavi krish bond❤️
Amazing story👏
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