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Posted: 3 years ago
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guys..

This is janu..

So, here I want to start a new story on our show...this may be of 2-3 parts..but if my mood is good...I can cont..

I am not able to find apt name..so, please suggest the name.

Plot is the current track...Ruditha away from haveli..entry of ninja (I will call her as Kranthi)...here she is positive in my story...whether or not in the show..

Scene starts from where it ended day before yesterday.

         PART 1

Police asking Ani about the kranthikari..by showing the photo..

Ani: pov: iski jankari dekar mujhe paise miljayenge..aur school ka fee hojayega...then thinks of that girls words..desh ki azzadi keliye ladraha hu..nahi nahi Ani..esa karnese paise tho miljayenge par e desh keliye ladne valoke saath anyaay hoga..

And said..no to police..

Kranthi: shocked and impressed..ye tho bahut acche insaan he..apni biwi ko padaraha he..me uski help lesaktha hu..par abh nahi..thoda aur uspar nazar rakni hogi..

And here kaka , bihari waiting for Ani...finally..he came..

Ani: kaka..app yaha..

KSj: are gadhe..jab sab jaga aandolan chalraha hai..thuu bahu ko akela chodke chali gayi??

Ani: kaka..isiliye tho me thala lagakar gaya tha..

KSj: par ab mujhe aaneme ek kshan der hojathi tho..tumhe pathaya hai kya hojatha bahu ke saath??

Ani: kya hua kaka..bonditha..tum tikona..?

Bondi: ha pati babu..me Tiku..aaap pehle tala kholiyena KSj andar aayenge..

Ani..: ha..ha..

Sometime they talked and KSj asked them to be more careful and left..

Ani: mujhe maaf karna bonditha...meri vajase..tum ko..

Bondi: nahi pathi babu...hamara sapna pura karne keliye...me har mushkil ka saamna karsaktha hu..

Ani: I am proud of u bonditha...

And they prepared food and ate together and left to sleep...

Next day: 

He was getting ready..

She was just trying to look at him and checking her heart beat..

Bondi: mere dil thezise sadak nahi rahi ya tham nahi gayi...

Ani saw her and came to her..

Ani: kya hua bonditha..bathau..kalse kuch ajeeb si barthav karrahi thi...kya hua barthav..

Bondi: nahi...nahi..pati..

Ani: bonditha...nahi sach batha..kya hua..kuch tho hua he...

Bondi: vo..vo..didi ne bola...agar mujhe prem hua..tho meri gaal laal hogi aur dil ki dadkan thez hogi..ya tham jaengi..par pati babu..mera gaal laal tho hua he..par dil ka kya kare...kuch ho nahi raha he...

Ani was shocked, embarrassed..: e ..e ..kya bakwas kerahi ho bonditha...esa kuch nahi hotha...esab bekar ki baathe..vunlogo ko suno math..aur padai pe dhyaan do...

Bondi: par pati babu...prem..

Ani: shouted: Bonditha mene kaha na...esab bekar ki baathe..tum apni padai par dhyaan do..pariksha aarahi hena...and left to work...without giving chance for bondi to ask further questions...

Bondi: felt very bad..esa kyu karahi he pati babu..sab didiya yahi bola tha...par koi nahi..agar pati babu ne bola bakwas he..tho bakwas hi hoga...chalo bonditha...padai shuru karthe..

Here while walking: Ani was thinking about the words bonditha said...

Suddenly somebody dragged him behind a tree..

Ani: koun he tum...mujhe kyu keecha..?

Kranthi: me hu..

Ani: tum?? Yaha pe..?

Kranthi: shh..tum mere baareme kyu nahi bathaya un angrezowale ki saamne..?

Ani: wo tum desh ki aazadi keliye lad rahi thi..tho isliye nahi bathaya...

Kranthi: mene suna tum ko paiso ki zaroorat he..tumhari patni keliye..

Ani: ha..par tumhe kese patha..?

Kranthi: vo me kranthikari hu aur Jasoos bhi hu..mujhe sab patha he..vo agar tum mere madat karoge tho me tumhe paise dunga...

Ani: was hesitant...but asked kese madath..??

That's all for today..


Note: I am not a hindi girl...so pls forgive grammer mistakes... And typo errors..

Here Ani won't fall for her..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice start buddy go ahead waiting for it 🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajiraji14

Nice start buddy go ahead waiting for it 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Thank you...for your support..will update by tomorrow..

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