Awesome Buddy👍🏼
This is beautiful work❤️
Love the way you poyraid Bondita's barrel of thoughts❤️
Want to say more but will talking in next part
Till then
RES😅😅
Awesome Buddy👍🏼
This is beautiful work❤️
Love the way you poyraid Bondita's barrel of thoughts❤️
Want to say more but will talking in next part
Till then
RES😅😅
Wow amazing 🤩 loved it!!!
Seriously I'm new to this forum aur yaha kitne talented writer hai👏🥳
Thankyou ❣️
My Dear Partner 🤗
This is so beautiful and you have written everything si perfectly 👍🏼 I just loved it❤️👏
You have written Bondita's inner feeling so beautifully that I have imagined it in front of my eyes while reading and I loved Anirudh's guilt for not spending much time with Bondita is❤️
I really want to see same to same scenes in the show as well lots of love my dear 🤗
I will be waiting for you to continue it very soon ❤️ keep it up dear 👍🏼 It's really amazing work 👏
So beautifully written. Pl update soon👍🏼
Minnu...🤗🤗
I Unres my post on first page 😳
Thank you!! Everyone🤗
Thanks for all the likes and most wonderful comments.❤️
I am overjoyed to see you all loving and enjoying the story.
Feel free to let me know if you have any inputs for me.
Minnu🤗
Res for now 😊
Minnu🤗🤗❤️
First of all thanks for finally posting this wonderful story !! How come you thought of skipping it?🙄
Anyways I am glad you posted it🤗
It’s a beautiful piece of work yaar. From Bon’s childish possessiveness to her want to do something which could make her patibabu feels proud of her!! Your description of Bon’s emotions is very apt 👏 you described Bon very beautifully.. it’s a tendency for kids to attach someone very quickly and here too Bon did that .. for attached with krantikari didi .. but later the praises she heard from her patibabu for didi didn’t go well with her. Poor soul.. what must have she gone through thinking her patibabu can’t be proud of her!! Your description showed every emotions Bon must have felt !! 👏
Ani unintentionally hurt Bon’s feelings .. he didn’t know but he did and the funny thing is he didn’t know he hurt Bon he asked Bon to set her life goal .. not to follow others .. that was a best advice he gave Bon!!
Bon baby is smart and lovable.. she couldn’t see other girl getting tortured like she did ! How smartly she made the girl understand about education!! You have put a base of Bon’s future women empowerment activities here minnu.. 👏 you showed this Bon is not only smart but intelligent too .. she smartly started teaching that girl under pretense of taking cooking classes from her😆 that’s a good excuse you used here minnu 👍🏼
Bon’s feelings of not liking krantikari didi or patibabu staying late outside or spending more time with this didi- everything shows her teenage possessiveness for her patibabu .. and made her determined to do something !! And when ani heard her sharing her future plans and for shock of his life that her little wifey not only thought about being a social worker who will work for women empowerment but she has already started acting on it by teaching that girl!! Ani was proud and did was shocked and impressed .. and finally Bon breathe in relief that her patibabu is proud of her and all her worries went out of the window !! Such a beautiful soul you have described here minnu❤️
Love this story.. ❤️❤️
is there any chance of getting a next part or it is only two shots ?
Waiting to read more stories from you minnu 🤗🤗
Nima🤗
Thanks for all your love and support. I am overwhelmed.❤️
Really glad to know that you enjoyed the story.
Bon is such a kind and brave soul. It was really fun to write her.
I don't know how many chapters it will have as of now, Nimu. Maybe 10-12.😆
I am going with the flow as of now. But will try to complete it as soon as possible.😃
Originally posted by: Midnight_Sun1
Minnu 🤗🤗
I will say just one thing - this is beautifully written. Loved it❤️
And, Nim, thank you for telling about Minnu's SS. 🤗
Thank you!! Sweety🤗
Glad you loved it❤️. Hopefully, I will keep you entertained😃
Thanks from me too Nima🤗
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