kranti aur bndita an os ch 3updated

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next morning at their huse.fresh,charming and beautiful.bndita had already left mat at 4 30 as she is used to while ani was stil in sleep.bndita was devoid of ny jwellery,she first worshipped her dugga ma idol,gifted by sumati ma,then some rounds to offer prayer to tulsi ma..it was 5 30 by now..then she went to the river to wash anirudh's dresses and her plain sarees..

by the time she had to return,a young lovely man like anirudh was horrified not finding her on other side of curtain...

but he saw outside,she was returning gossiping with some village young women alike her..

''bndita tum itni subh..''

''kpde dhone the fir tulsipuja thi,fir dugga ma ki arti,jnte nhi kka ne hmse kha hei krne ko...''

''wo....''ani felt sad as she without any fault had to suffer this!

''ab chlie jldi se mughe tyrr hona hei...''she said trying to change the topic.he wiped off his tears nd bndita took her alta palate and wored on her fingers..now she had to use a bit of alta and sindoor mix as bindi for her face..but there was no mirror.anrudh was preparing some files to get a work when he noticed her.they had no mirror in house.he decided to help her out

''bndita yhn sunna...''

''ji aiee..''she rushed near him

''agr sindoor aur bindi bna aine ke ph skti ho tum,..''

''shotti kese..''

''ek kam kyu na kre meri ankhe dekho unmein apni chvi dikhti hein,ydd hein vigyn ke roshni wale warg mein,wahi tum yhn dekho aur lga lo,iss tedha nhi hoga sindoor aur bindi,hmm''he smiled at her

she took the palate and dipped her little fingers and eye lockd in his.''schme pati babu,saf saf mera chera dikh rha hei..''

''abb bndita jldi se lga lo ..khi ankhe dhpp na hojye meri..''

she quickly managed to round off the bindi.but while gazing at him,she found something wiered,was it wired happiness unknown,,,what was it..she let it go

''hogya pati babu..waise app kha ja rhen..''

''kaam tlshne ek ache rojgar ki lie,ye mere kuch certificates hen purne ,sayd inka koi fyda ho ..''he murmured to himself and went on ...

bndita had nothng to do but stay as a typical village wife,in house cook for her pati dev and yes all household chores..she was dusting windows,as in rc mansion she did it daily..

''are ooo kya naam hei tumhra ''asked a 16 year woman

she turned to window bars''bndita..''

''are sambhal ke zamindar ki ptni hein,yhn rh rhe hen pr firve,,...''said her saas who was washing clothes

''kaam hogyasb..''

''nhi nhi..wo khana chule pei hei..bs daal choka dena hei aur kpde dhona,fir ghadoo,fir saam ke khne ko schongi pati babu ke ane tk..waise app kya krogi..''

''ye bhi koi khne ki badd bs apne pati ke kmre se niklti hi nhi tbb na kuch kre...''taunted a women to which radha blushed

''kyu aise kyu..''

''are tum bhi n,prem jo krti hein pati se...''

''pati se prem...ye prem kya hota..''

''are tumhe prem nhi pta...bhot acha hota...''said radha rembering her still buterfly days in her in laws house

''toh mughe bhi chie agr acha hei toh!''

''uff tum bhi na...wo toh milta nhi bs hojata hei..''she said folding her curls

''ughe app bataona kese pta chale ki prem hua ho mughe..''

''sharm chre pei dikhte hei gaal pei jb kreev ho wo...''

she touched her cheeks,they were fair but not crimson red

''nhi..koi aur treeka..''

''unke ankho mein dekho toh dil kuch khetha firse mn krta hei dekhne ka..''

''hn hn ..''she said jumping

''are are toh pyrr hogya hein zamindar babu se tumhe..''

she was now lost in a aura.she kept aside the duster and smiled,''bndita tumhe pyrr hua pati babu se jese sb ptni ko hotha.dekha achi ptni ho tum pr gaal kyu lal nhi hei abhi puri trh se prem nhi hua reee budhu bndita...''

it was night time anirudh had retunred happily today more of a reason

''pati abb aa gye..''she took the bag from his hand and gave him a glass of water

yes indeed he was tired not of working 7 hours but ...

''kya hua pati babu khoye khoye se hei,sbbb thik rha na..''

are hn hn bndita,mughe naukri mile angrezi sarkar ke under...ek barrister ke roop mein unke family cases ke lie..aur ye phele kmie hei ajj meri..''

her hapiness knew no boundness the 30 paise which was a token of advance cheque to ani was money to him bt to her it was sucess.it was pride,her pati babu is employed.his is working,no one will taunt his rkshk babu that was great for him

''aree bndita ese nach kyu rhi ho..''

''app nhi jnte pati babu ajj ye saath ane sirf kuch paise nhi ye prmn hai apki prishrm ka koi nh tana dega mere barrister babu ko abb!''

''hn bndita ye toh surwaat hei age bhot si kamybi hmre intzaar krr rhe hen agle hfte hi vidyly mein dkhila krwa donga''

''shotti pati babu''

''hn meri bndita..''

''clie khana lgg gya hei sotto aur rotiyn hi bnpie..''

''koi baat nhi..chalo..''

they had only 1 banana leaf which they used to eat..meals..

they fed each other roti and sotto which turned into the most tasty food but for their touch..

ani fed bndita caressing her so did she.this made bndita more secured or happy in a other way..

but after a couple of minutes while eating ani was lost in some thoughts..

''app vaar vaar kha kho jate hen..''

''wo bndta ajj...''

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''mr anirudh you obliged here as our family barrister and to british gov..''

''yes sir..''

''mr clinton show him study..''

he was working peacefully..on his table ,examining the case .....

after 3 hours he heared some noise outside...

''mr clinton what is it..''he asked

'''they r trying to find some culprit u go for u r work..''

''hmm..''

mr clinton left for a break..ani was tired ...he was seeing the beautiful gardens for a while and he was about to go to his lobby,when some pushed him back to...

''ye kon,.ye..''she shut his mouth.

she locked the door..

''tum kon ho...''

''sssssssshhhhhhh...''she said threatning him

''is the culprit,that bloody krantikari there...''

''krantikari..he indeed smiled and was relieved..

''no mr jackson noone 's here..''

the girl couldn't get what he was speaking only a half broken english..

''ok mr anirudh soory to diturb you..''

''it's ok..''

after they went ,ani peeped and checked if there was anyone and closed it...''dekho agr kuch glt ..''

he went near her and removed her mask...''ye ...''he was lost in her,such coned and beautiful had any girl had..

''tum yhn kyu ayi thi nhi ayenge wo..''

''shi insaan lgte ho khi in angrezo ke saath chkrr to nhi tumhara..''

''mughpe bharosha koro..''

''bharosha httt apne kranti bhaiyon ne mjhdar mein phek diya tum toh firve annjnn ho..''she said adjusting her kada...

''nhi waisa nhi hei,....''

''mein khud chata hun ki desh ko azaadi mile paisoo ki krn se kaam pei hun yhnn kuch smyy..tum ek aurrt hokr iss mhn balidaan mein samil yehi mere lie jthesth hei!''

she smiled at him,''dhynvaad..apka prchie jnaab..''

''anirudh roy choudhry...tumhra..''

''abhi ki lie tumhre sukr guzar hun..kranti andolon ki smti mein hun....''

''pr prchie..thik hei tumhe mein kranti ke nam se ydd rkhunga..agr kbh kbhi bhi avsykta ho toh chli ana...sadev ttprr rhunga mdt ki lie....''

''nhi abhi koi mdt nhi chie..mughe bss devipur jana hei apne kaam ki purtihetho..''

''devipur mein devipur mein hi rhta hun tum as skti ho...''

''nhi mehmn bnke moj kilie nhi rkha hei mughe..wahn kam ko anzaam dena hei...''

''thike hei ...devipur..charhya se baye..jo pakki sdk hein whn se baya ghr..''

''ydd rkhungi shayt ki lie dhynvaad..''

and she jumped across the window and left her sword to him,''hmree inqualib ki nishani hei ..bhagt singh ki unke azad sapne ki...smbhal ke rkhna...''

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''toh kya wo hmse milne ayengi pati babu..''

''nhi pata ..pr wo kmmal ki thi kranti min yogdaan jo hei,bina jivn ji prwaah kiye,...''

''hn pati babu mughe unse milna hein kbhi aur dher sari batte krni hein..''

''hn hn milwaonga abb so jao..ratt hogyi hei,..''

and they slept peacefully

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prde ki k duri hein.

isdesh mein angrez mazbori hen..

chthi hei wo kranti se milna

kya firse milenge ye do krantikari..

kesa hoga kranti andolon mein inka rishta?

precap:kranti and bndita meets..

guys hpe u like it and no boring

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it was next day when kranti left their house as on a mission.barrister anirudh and his dhramptni bndita now live alone in the house.but soon they faced a series of challenges as riots took place in bengal and who ain't knew the area of muzafarnagr was harsh ,known to be place of kranti and best told dangas!...so the courts colleges were to be shut down..anirudh a 22 year old man faced fincinal problems ,court and cases were not his profeesion but his daily bread,since no earning for 1 months therer saving ended..and ani needed resources to fill bndu school fees .

bndita on other hand experinced some sudden changes in her,blushing while reading poetry

bndita on other hand experinced some sudden changes in her,blushing while reading poetry..gigling for the hero in novels or some unwanted happines whenver pati babu patt her head.though she was confused,fearful and happy for all this she knew she wasn't a ordinary girl.had she been an ordinary malkin,she wouldn't have faced such situations....

there was shortage of rations many times,she as promished to in laws,as ever virtious she's ,she gave her part to her pti andsadly ani couldn't notice it.bndita and anirudh against all odds never get to each other know about the money problems they faced..

it was night time anirudh was tired,becoz nearly after 1 months 15 days courts resumed..

it was night time anirudh was tired,becoz nearly after 1 months 15 days courts resumed

''pati babu app a gye ...kesa tha din sb thik rha,,..''

''hn hn bikol thik tha bndita..''he said smiling

''ann waise tumne khna kha liya ki nhi ajj der hogyi mughe...''he said wearing off his shoes and tie

''mmm hn hn kha liya app bethie ..mein lati hun...''

somtimes it was supcious ,the bndita knew who needs more nutrion the working man,whereas ani knew a young mind studying needs good food..that day too she skipped food due to shortage of rice,only she had the leftover chappati and chai

ani sat on mat ..bndita served him benjon bhaja rice dal and a little pickle to go with..it was enough for him,he wonderd sometimes how she manage the house against such odds..

''bndita tumhra suti haar khan hei''

[suti haar was a thread alike necklace worn by middle class women during night time]

''wo wo mil nhi rha wo khi dhundugi kl pkka..''

''tum laparva mt bno hr chiz shi se rkho,.aur ye kl se vidyly bhi khul jyenge...''

''hmmm..''

he finished his meal and washed his hands.while she was pouring water ...he was stopped by her beautiful eyes that caught barrister babu..

''pati babu hua jal nasth''she said pointing towards the vessel

''hn hn tum ajj study mein aogi kya ..''

''hn bikol ..mtlb chlie copy lekr ati hun..''she said biting her excitment in her heart..

''toh gnit mein is vivahjn ko grouping athva...''

there was a knock and it was again kranti but she was safe this time,as britishers did night petrolling ,she has to stay 1 night here..so bndita mnged her studies but she was just staring anirudh andafter a while caught them chuckling and ani removed some of her trances.bndita clenched her fist in fury,''pati babu app mughe ye sawal ka jabab dijye,..'''

''are deta hun ye skl laal ku hei..''he said laughing

''khi kisne ajj vidyly mein chidai toh nhi

''khi kisne ajj vidyly mein chidai toh nhi..''said kranti gigling and ani laughed with her..

''kisne nhi kha aur app yhn rhe pati babu apne study mein bndita ke prsn ka hl ho na ho apko kya frq pdta hei

''kisne nhi kha aur app yhn rhe pati babu apne study mein bndita ke prsn ka hl ho na ho apko kya frq pdta hei..kranti did ke sath rhie y lijye mere kitabe[she bumped books in ani's hands] ghr mein bndita bhuke pet soye kuch bhi ho prvaah hein apni ptni kya apko...kbhi mr jaungi dekhna fir bhot bnke sataongi tb ydd ayegi nnhi bndita..''saying this she went towards her room cring paning only cryong..

''maff krdo kranti sydd kuch halato mein ulghi hei bndita..''

''nhi anirudh mere khyl se police nikl chuka hoga mughe kna chie..''

''thik hei..''

''apni ptni ka khyl rkhna hira hei wo...bhot pyrr krti hei tumhse ....''saying this she vanished in air..

after she went ,the only words ringed in his ears,''bhot pyrr krti hei tumse..''yes indeed he felt something difff,was her little patni jealous of them?no no or yes..but ..he was awstruck,never in his wildest dreams he could imagine bndita to be jealous..but yes she was a wife,who had affection developed for her pati..babu it was a human attitude he knew even he had but this was new...

he went near her room and knocked it..

he went near her room and knocked it

but she didn't opened it..

''bndita drawaza kholo..''

''kyu kholgi bndita,jyei firse baat kijye kranti di se,..apko pata hei bhuke hen ndita bs ek roti chai mein khao ke peth bndh ke bathi hun apko prwaah hei kya...dusto...!'she said sobbing and she dripped her head in pillow and cried

ani didn't told anything ..bndita thought cle gye pati babu re tere pr kyu ajj toh unki hena glti fir agr..there was a knock!!!

''kya hua..''

''kholo bhot grm hei hath jl jynge mere..''said ani

''toh niche kyu nhi rkh dete..''


''kholo bhi aah bndita!ahh uhhhh''

she hurriedly opened it and found ani with luchhi and daal stnding there

''yeh hath dugga ma..app rasoi mein sarvanash!..''saying ths she ran to kitchen which was messed ..

''aur haath ye chot...kyu aisa krte hen dvie lgne dijye..''

''bikol nhi jb tk khaogi nhi davai nhi lagaonga..''

''kha lungi abb toh''he nodded a yes

she applied haldi on her cuts and he dipped luchis and made her eat...

''bhot khyl rkhte ho mera tum bndita,kitne pyri ho itni chothi si ho pr shi mnie mein dugga ma ki di sbse kimte chiz ho,vada hei mra tum uss mukam tk le jaonga..jiske hqdaar ho tum bndita anirudh roy choudhry...''he said smiling

while bndita blushed seeing him''bndita waise tum kranti se itna nara ku thi..hmm''he said teasingly

''wo wo mein bs bhuki thi na tohbhuk mein.''

''oh bhuke pr apna santolan toh kbhi nhi khoya,khi psnd toh nhi tumhe uska mughse baat krna yn fir..''

''aise ku pati babu aisha kuch nhi hein..wo toh deshbhkt hen ..pr app toh zyda smy kranti ko dete jese bhul gye hon ki ek ptni bhi rhte hi apki..''she said pouting her cheeks

''kitni bholi ho tum hn esa mn mein kuch nhi chupathi..''

'''bndita mughe kranti psnd hei..''

''kya mughe bhi..''she said gulping her sadness

''prr..''he made her seat in jhula and sat by her side ''merinnhi bndita se hei kya koi aha bhala,tum jese santna koi de skta hei,koi itne muskil smy pei muskn bhr sktha hei mere hothe pei,krantikari desh bhkt bhot hen pr meri toh ek hi bndita hena kyu...''

bndita was very happpy...''hn eklothi hun apki aur app mere pati babu..''she clapped

while teaching she stole glances from pati babu ,''kitne sundrr hen mere bristera babu svse alg hen tere pati babu..''she muttered to her self!


''ab ao gnit ka prsn smadhn kre..''

''chlie...''

after a session of grouping and division while teaching ani noticed bndita had slept on her kurta chest ,unable to awake her ,he slept there on sofa with her,''app khie nhi jyenge na pati baabu

after a session of grouping and division while teaching ani noticed bndita had slept on her kurta chest ,unable to awake her ,he slept there on sofa with her,''app khie nhi jyenge na pati baabu..''she muttered while sleeping

''khi nhi meri bndita khie nhi..''he said kissing her foreline of sindoor!

the next day ...bndita was ready fors chool ,ani decided to drop her ...but all of a sudden stones were showered on them ,bndita's feet twisted and theere was a cry of,''ahhhh harghhh pati babu app..''

''bndita ...ahh bndita..''

even the hardest of soul will have tears seeing their worst conditions!

precap:

smaj ki in retiyan hen

kya sehr kyn gaon

hr jgh hen ye sadiyon ki ghaon..

kya iss ghkm se nipat pyenge anirudh babau aur bndita?

yn in prtaho ke vaavahr mein doob jeyga ye rishta?

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