👏 amazing i hope show mai bhinaisa hi follow kare. Waise bhi they are stalking the forum toh yeh beautiful os ko bhi copy kar hi le.
On a serious note, you have explained such a sensitive question with so much ease and simplicity.
I feel baby bon samajh gayi hogi.
And i loved it from start to bottom but that line is my fav, patni ka darja isn't only to stay in the same room 👍🏼👏
Great os akshu.
Keep writing time nikal ke🤗
First of all a tight hug Akshu 🤗
You wrote it very beautifully and delicately ❤️
The way Ani made her Bon understand in his own way, smoothly that what is 'patni ka darja' really mean....is surreal❤️
And must say you are really good at dialogues👍🏼 kaise kar lete ho itne bhari bharkam dialogue delivery...I found dialogue likhna difficult task yar..isiliye main jitna kam ho sake utna kam use krti hoon😆
I just love the moment and dialogue when he said uss time hum aise hi, isi trah baithkar baat krenge😳
And he is right she already has that 'darja'
Jate jate once again...very well written akshu...
Write something more🤪
Originally posted by: ..RiMi..
It was very well written Akshu 👏 very simple and subtle 👍🏼
First of all, your dialogues for Ani and Bon are so natural that I could imagine them talking with expressions 😎
I loved how ARC walked into the mansion with his trump card 8 haandi roshogullas 🤣 awwww he is such a cutiepie ☺️ Biwi ko manaane ke liye intezaam karke aaya 😆
So Bon wants to know what I patni ka darja 🤣🤪 Sampoorna and Kaka bhi na 🤪
But wow.. Anirudh didn't have an answer before and now he is back with ekdum crisp and subtle explanation 👏
I am so happy that he told her she is already being the best wife ever he explained beautifully that husband and wife's relationship is beyond just starting a family. That is just a part. And that when Bon grows up and understands that then they will first discuss about it
Haaye this guy has my whole heart ❤☺️
I totally loved it Akshu 🤗
I just made an attempt and I am relieved to read that it turned out natural 😃
Ani ka brahmastra hai 8 handi roshogulla 😆 but its high time he needs to get a little creative now 😆
Last night clearly showed his dilemma about these expectations that Kaka has from him and I expected this very reaction from him. For once, Ani can be allowed to be confused and not know the answers to this question. Not taking my version of Ani back to zimmedari square though Lets just say he accepts their relationship and will be ready when the time comes 😊
you have no idea what this means to me... This was the most scariest part for me to write and I was worried about how it turned out 😆
And I love you for this amazing comment 🤗
Amazingly written .... The topic you chose was very delicate and the way you executed...👏👍🏼🤗
Keep writing more....
It's just awesome...
Thank you so much Rudy 🤗
I am very happy to read this! This was my first write up on something like this so you can imagine how much this means to me ❤️
Originally posted by: Neh_anidita
Akshu baby it was beautifully written, You expressed the emotions so well and aptly.
Every bit of it was written like the way Ani use to do it. 👏🏻 Well Done 👏🏻 I love it ❤️
Nehu Darling 🤗
Thank you soo much! Ek baat batau... Jab koi bolta hai na ki my words match with the characterization of the ML, mujhe bohot khushi hoti hai bcz I personally feel that I can relate with the ML more than the FL 😆
Originally posted by: Doc.love
This is beautiful, Akshata... 🤗❤️ Buht delicacy ke sath kitne acchay se sab samjhaya tumne. 👍🏼❤️ I loved it! Please dont be nervous. Be happy and accept my heartfelt praise for such an amazing write up. 🤗 Thank you for writing it!
Ayesha! Thank you so much yaar🤗
Actually pehli baar I am writing on something so sensitive and I was hoping to do well but after reading all these comments I feel relaxed that it was received well 😃
Thank you for such kind words ❤️ It has motivated me now 😊
Thank you so much Rudy 🤗
I am very happy to read this! This was my first write up on something like this so you can imagine how much this means to me ❤️
It was first time but you handled the topic and executed it very beautifully....👏👍🏼
Keep writing more..🤗
Akshu🤗
It was so good!!
U have written it in such a realistic way...can totally imagine with current ani & bon😳
I was so happy to read the last part where ani says that she already has that place in his life..❤️
Its high time bon tells ani to think of a new way to manofy her🤪
Toto 🤗
I think the word realistic is the most precious compliment I can ever get! Nothing makes me as happy as reading that you guys could relate with the story ❤️
Mujhe nahi lagta Ani will drop his Brahmastra 🤪 Bon should just kick him out next time he brings EBR 🤣
👏 amazing i hope show mai bhinaisa hi follow kare. Waise bhi they are stalking the forum toh yeh beautiful os ko bhi copy kar hi le.
On a serious note, you have explained such a sensitive question with so much ease and simplicity.
I feel baby bon samajh gayi hogi.
And i loved it from start to bottom but that line is my fav, patni ka darja isn't only to stay in the same room 👍🏼👏
Great os akshu.
Keep writing time nikal ke🤗
Munnu you made me senti 🤗
Bon ki maa sehmat toh Bon bhi sehmat 🥳
TBH, I am so relieved to read your comment and Rimi's comment ❤️ You two are my trusted critics 🤗 Mujhe pata hai kabhi jhut nahi bologe mujhe and tumhare posts ne meri tension dur kar di 😃
Thank you Munnu for making some time and reading this Nachiz ka OS 😳
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