Tumhe pyaar kab tak na

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Location: Etf office

A normal day  except the absence of 2nd in command of Etf ( now that's strange πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€” Sys absent and day is normalπŸ€ͺ)



A case is being discussed . Everyone are their presenting their views. The case started when a famous doctor's remains was found. His body was  heavily decomposed with hardly any signs of identification .


With the help of forensics, his body was identified but the case still remained mysterious as : 

Why would anyone kill a famous ,selfless serving doctor ?



Rathore (mind): Aaj hi is Rawte ko ek week  ki leave pr jaana tha, pta nhi itna kya zaruri kaam hai. Upr se bta kr bhi nhi gya ,seede Comm. Sir se leave li . Ab kya chl rha hai iske dimaag meinπŸ€”πŸ€”.


Ayesha : Sir ye case to solve hone ka naam hi nhi le rha. 

Rathore : hmm ..

Chotu aur shree tum dono us hospital ke baare mein saari information nikalo. Hm vaha ek baar ja kr aate hain. Chlo ayesha and liza tum post martum report jldi prepare kro.


Liza: yes sir .


Sakshi: Sameer main bhi chalu.

(Mind) vaise bhi ab ek week tk Arjun bhi nhi aaya ga pta nhi itna kya zaruri kaam aa gya. Hayee ab usko dekhe bina kaisa jeeungi.  Meri to koi fikr hi nhi hai use. Kitna pyaar krti hu main usse ,pr vi hai ki notice hi nhi krta. Pr mujhe bhi pta ha pyaar to vo mujhse bhi bahut krta hai pr keh nhi skta ,sharma jaata hai😊😊😊😊😊😊.    ( ab in mautarma ko kaun smjaye  " kutta paal lo, billi paal lo .pr madam ji veham na paalo )

 Sakshi : Sameer se bhi nhi pooch skti ,faltu mein daant dega.


Rathore: chalo jldi.

 ( Its been long i have seen Arjun ,so i will not be able to give all case details. We will just focus on 😍😍😍😍😍 bcz its like 

Tainu rkhya ae focus te , saari duniya banale taar ke )



 Everyone went to hospital to arrest the doctor's brother who killed him for his property. He was arrested .

Everyone took a sigh of relief.

Sakshi : chlo ab  break to milega. Main to thk gyi . ( Pov; Upr se arjun ko  bhi nhi dekha kitne din ho gye)


Ayesha :Pr paperwork ab bhi peecha nhi chodega, vo to hme hi krna pdega na.


Shree: vo to hai mujhe to lgta hai jis din main mrunga us din bhi rathore sir kahenge ,shree paperwork khtm kro phir mr jaana.πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί


Chotu: Are jo bhi hai  jldi chalo mujhe bhook bhi lg rhi hai. Kuch khaya hi nhi subah se.  Case ke chkr mein bs subah se 2 plate chole bature, 4-5 bread pakora,5 -10 samose, 2 vada pav, 3 pav bhaji, 3 cup chai aur 6-7 gulab jamun hi khayee hai. Pta hai kitni bhook lg rhi hai .Vrat vali feeling aa rhi hai aaj to.😭😭😭



Rest: πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜­πŸ˜²πŸ˜²


Rathore: Ab tum logo ko gr nhi jaana. Poora din pta nhi kya baate chlti rehti hai tumhari. Saans bhi le liya kro. Chlo ab.


Sakshi : Are sameer tum bhi na kya daante rehte ho kbhi break bhi liya kro, Arjun nhi hai to tum uski bhi kmi kyun poori krna chahte ho. Vaise vo gya kaha hai, tumhe to pta hoga na?


Rathore: Mujhe nhi pta ,tumhi kyin nhi puch leti apne Arjun se . Mera dimaag mt khraab kro. Itni hi yd aa rhi hai to , aaj hi paperwork complete kr ke submit kr dena. Vaise bhi vo kya, kb ,kaise krta hai  kisi ko smj nhi aata.

Uske baare mein sochkr mujhe  aur sir drd nhi krvana. Chlna hai to chlo, vrna baithe rho apne Arjun ki yd mein.


Sakshi: Main to bs pooch rhi thi. Itna kyun chila rhe ho.

( Pr ek baat to sahi kahi ; Mera arjun. Hayee kaha ho tum )


( Ye madam   ji phir bhi na smji , koi na aage smja denge😎😡😎πŸ₯³πŸ₯³)



Choree: Sakshi katne de kuch din shanti se, kyu sys ki yd dila rhi hai.



Shree to chotu : yrr iske andr itni himmat kaha se aati hai, upr se ise koi kuch kehta bhi nhi hai.Main ek software ke liya paise maang lu to zindgi br ki saari gltian yd dila kr report bna dete  hai.


Chotu: Mera to khane pr hmesha nazre lgaye khade rehte hai. Itni hi bhook lgti hai to khud ka kha le. Hmm😑😑😑😑


( Kbhi kbhi inhe dekhr mujhe muhale vali auntiyon ki yd aa jaati hai, vo bhi aise hi khusur ,phusur krti rehti hai🀣)


Ayesha: chodiya na Sir , raat bahut ho rhi hai jaate wakt kisi restaurent mein ruki ke kuch kha bhi lenge , bahut  bhook bhi lg rhi hai.

Rathore( softly): Theek hai chlo ab. jldi kro.


( Bg: pehla nasha β€οΈ)


Choree : dekh kitni jldi baat maan gye .Hmari to koi sunta hi nhi hai. Hamne kaha hota to abhi Andaman mein fishing krva rhe hote.

Chl yrr km se km inhi ke bahane khane ko to milega.


Sb restaurent pahuchte hai.


Chotu apni Bahubali thaliπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹ order krta hai.jise dekh kr baakiyon ka aada pet br jaata hai.😁

Sb khana khane lgte hai .


Sakshi jaise hi fried rice muh mein rkhti hai uski aakhein shocked ho jaati hai aur vo khaasne lgti hai😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰


Ayesha: Theere kha Sakshi itni bhi kya jldi hai, le pani pee ab.


Rathore: Aaram se Sakshi.


Sakshi kuch bolna chahti hai pr uske mu se awaaz bahar nhi aati. Sb use dekhkr confuse hote hai.


Chotu : dekh Sakshi ye dumcharades khelna ka time nhi hai. Bdi bhukh lgi hai, abhi to maine kuch khaya bhi nhi hai. Lgta hai ek aur thali mangvani pdegi phir shyd thoda pet bhare.



Shree: ek aur. ...... Sh.. shyd

Ayesha: tho.. thoda pet 


Rathore rolls his eyes on the regular drama.

and says Chup krkr khao sb vrna abhi paperwork complete krna pdega.


Sakshi still shocked 😱😱😱😱πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ίsays pr Sameer 

Rathore : kya hai Sakshi , khana khao tum.

Sakshi: Pr tum ek baar suno to, accha udr dekho


Rathore : πŸ€”kaha

Sakshi : are udr.

Rathore follows her hand and stills.

Ayesha shakes him but he is stilled ; ab ine kya hogaya .

She too stills after following their eyes direction.


Chotu: Are yr ab sb khelna lge .  Maine nhi baat karni kisi se akele akele khelne lge. Thoda ruk jate abhi to maine bs pehli hi thali khtm ki hai. Abhi aur khana hai. Baad mein khel lete.


Shree shakes his head in disbelieve and tries to call others but no one responds.

Shree:Yrr ab ye Rathore sir inke saath khelna bhi lge. Abhi hme lecture de rhe the . Hmari koi nhi sunta. Apni koi value hi nhi hai bulane pr bhi koi nhi sunta.

Atyachar hai ye, discrimination hai, main awaaz udaunga Inquilab zindabad.


But still no response.

Choree raises their head from food and pauses  their talks and follows their direction of interest and they too freezes in horror.


( Yrr ab ye dono bhi khelne lge πŸ˜’ ab main kya karuπŸ˜’chlobmian bhi break leke khel ke aati hu . Pr ye khel kya rhe hai.   kahi ye ice water to nhi khel rhe πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£)


 


Sochiya aisa kya dekha puri team ne







  





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Nice start

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wow mast update h 

ab dekhna h team aisa kya dekh rhi h 

waise ye ariya story h na

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Originally posted by: DikshaAriya

wow mast update h 

ab dekhna h team aisa kya dekh rhi h 

waise ye ariya story h na


Maybe 

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Nice  one

May br team  saw arjun with girl 

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Originally posted by: Antiqueimpulse


Maybe 

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full on suspence ha 

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Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice  one

May br team  saw arjun with girl 

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Ya shyd usse bhi uprπŸ₯³πŸ₯³

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Intersting start. Par mujhe story se zyaada aapke comments acche lge.

Im quite sure Arjun hoga jisse dekhke unko shock lga.

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Originally posted by: Asya99

Intersting start. Par mujhe story se zyaada aapke comments acche lge.

Im quite sure Arjun hoga jisse dekhke unko shock lga.

Continue soon


Thank youπŸ€—

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Nice start. Maybe it's ariya. Update please