Finally, unresd in page 1...!!!😆
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Finally, unresd in page 1...!!!😆
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Originally posted by: Rudhitafan
Rimuuuuuu🤗❤️
Krishuuuuu🤗❤️
First of all beautiful pic of rudhita at the beginning...Thank you so much for this🤗
Thank you so much Krish😳
Koeli might be missing in the current scenario in the show but apart from I'm quite surprised here ani look restless exactly the way he is right now in the last 2 episodes because of not seeing bon...
Can I please request the makers to show ani exactly the same way🙏....this should be the exact way he should react. ...I completely agree with your line that he is educated as well as open minded but this is not just the first time for bon but also for ani.....he might know why all this happens but being a member of 5 or 6 males alone in the RC mansion and also being away from his mother even from his childhood, we can't ignore the fact that he has almost zero practical knowledge about these women problems.....it's said a boy who has a sister or mother with him easily understands it since they have witnessed their difficulties. ..but that's not at all the case with ani....I'm quite sure he will be very upset after seeing her pain ....apart from that kaka keeping her away from all others in a secluded room will be another shock for him💔....he has to handle himself too...
Exactly! Having theoretical knowledge is good but not enough to handle such situations.. and Ani might be open about all this but this is something which is specific to girls and Ani has never been around any other woman in the house to have any prior experience in dealing with this situation. It's his first time too 😳 (But show me toh kuchh aur hi chal rha hai Krish 😭)
So in a way it's a double task for ani.....
I'm super impressed with the way he hold himself and took good care of her and fed her just like how a mother takes care of her child
Ani hai hi super Ani
And about the way ani explained about the periods to bon. ...omgggg👏....can i say this can't be explained in more simple and understanding words to a child like this....👏....I hope we get such a glimpse of ani in the show too in this track but rimuuuu all I can say is you are an excellent elder sister who can make an younger sister understand about this 👏👏full marks👍🏼
Aww thank you so much Krish it means a lot 😳 I really spend days and night thinking what would be the best way to explain this to a kid without maker her scared or run away 🤣
Our bon is bon🤣...I'm not at all surprised at the way she bombarded him with a pile of questions🤣....and ani searching for the most decent words to make her understand it is sooo cute😆
Bon ko ek baat pata chalti nahi ki she starts asking 100 questions pehle hi... No wonder she will be curious to know everything when Ani tells her 😆
Thank God he shut her mouth at the right time.....he explained enough for her age..
.and she will understand it deeper in the coming years👍🏼
Yes, these teenagers are like they want to know everything 🤣 but Ani knows too much information could be harmful 👍🏼
I hope in the show we get proper scenes where ani understands about her mood swings too in the growing stages and also since they have finally started this track I hope some track arises later where ani educates her more now regarding the need to know good touch and bad touch in a deeper sense especially after a girl starts menstruating ....it's also quite necessary I believe👍🏼
You are right Krish... I was reminded of the good touch bad touch episode and I really want to see Ani explaining her these things again... but aaj kal show se kuchh ummed nai hai 👍🏼
Rimu.....Thank you so much for this beautiful OS dear🤗❤️.....you guys are all talented.....I hope writers take atleast some ideas from you guys🤔
Awww thank you so much Krish 🤗
I'm so sorry for not replying to many of your stories....I was so busy and still busy but I will now try to visit the forum often😳
I haven't forgotten about oath of love....will read the later chapters and will post my replies too one by one. ....so sorry😒...
Arre tumko yaad hai I was thinking about you few days back... OOL khatam ho gaya But don't worry you take your time... may bhi busy hu aaj kal
Expecting more from you...😎
Sure Krish 😳🤗
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Finally unres..😆Sorry for the late dear..!😳
Finally 🥳 No need for sorry shaheen I troubled you enough to Unres 🤣
Rimi... a warm huge hug to you behen for this wonderful masterpiece🤗...
Thank you 🤗🤗❤️
I spellbound and astonished the way you portrayed each and everything so delicately and with utmost dignity... It's really one of the finest Os...a huge applause to you👏👏👏👏👏...
OMG! Thank you ☺️
The way you scripted Bondita's innocence and her quest to learn the things from her pati babu will full faith is something which is so adorable..❤️. How I wish Koeli should be there with her instead of Sampoo in show too... But they merged this important with some stupid illogical Sampoo revenge track👎🏼😵..
Yes I am very disappointed with the way they are executing this track 🤔 It should have been entirely focused on mensuration and not sampoo ka badla 🤢
Kaka is kaka... He wanna follow his cultural beliefs too but he can't even stop his beta to break all his Orthodox traditions too...😆
Kahi na Kahi Kaka wants him to 😳
But you actually, potrayed everything here which those eras has witnessed.. That's great thing.. The dark room, separate plates and bedsheets etc.,. simply we can feel everything with the way you describe here... And this prove you're a great writer..👏👎🏼
Awww thank you 🤗 I have seen many documentaries on this and there was a time when I had to stay with one of my friend for 2 months, you won't believe but even in this era her family followed all this. Her family was away for 2 months and the two us were the only ones living there but still her mentality was such that she was stubborn to follow these rules. She followed all this and told me to follow as well but I bluntly disagreed. Kya karti maan gayi end me 😛 varna mai usko akela chhod ke bhaag jaati 🤣
Now, coming to Ani... You've penned his emotions very well.. Splendid job behen..👏🥳 The little awkwardness, the shear determination to make his little wife understand things in a subtle way, the way he sensed her pain and the way he emote her immense support was absolutely fabulous....❤️
Thank you 😳 I hope show me bhi Ani aisa ho jaaye 😭
Khash show mein bhi Ani itna sane air mature hota🤔.. But nahi usko world ka best ullu insaan ka award lena hai🤓... He is working hard to crown the title anyhow...👎🏼😕.
Yes shaheen 😒 So disappointed with his behavior 😭
Your Os made us to expect a lot from show... But nahi milne wala hai kuch sane yeh bhi pata hai😒... Khash makers yeh track bina Sampoo drama ke execute karte😔...
Haa 😭 I always knew this track could make it or break it for BB.... it seems the latter has happened 😭
Now, let's wait and see how Ani handles the situation in show... Karega bhi ya nahi.. Aur agar karega toh kya bewakoofi karega??? Yehi climax hone wala hai iss track ka..
Yup! They will wrap it all up just like that
But you've poured down all our expectations in one beautiful frame of art... Thanks for writing this wonderful Os.... Do write something like this often... Would love to read such works..❤️❤️🤗
Thanks a lot for this encouragement 🤗 I'll surely write more 🤗
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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..
Omg Koyal that was so overwhelming to read 🤗❤️ I am so honoured ❤️🤗
I dont have words to thank you enough for reviewing this OS so beautifully 😳 thank you so much 🤗❤️
RES stands for Reserved.. 😆 people reserve their comments so that they can read later and edit their post 😆
Tum matt karna aisa please 🤣
Pleasure's all mine😎
Oh toh res kya yeh matlab hain.Tabhi forum ke members itna chidh jaate hain koi res kare toh🤣😆
Bharosa hain na mujhpar,main res nahi karungi 😆❤️
Shotti😳
Haan Haan yaad hai mujhe 🤣
Amazing os behen 😳
You did an awesome job sis👏
You really didn't dissapoint anyone 😃
If it could be the same in the show then I would be the happiest ...... But I read your os that's also making me happy ❤️
Originally posted by: Scarlett_15
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RimiPhir late hogayi mainChalo koi nahi
Rimi dear you have done a fabulous work by touching such a sensitive topic when there are people around who still considers it a tabooIt was actually a very
I would say, this was a masterpiece and I would like to give a big applause for this stupendous exemplary piece of work
The way Ani rushed to take Bon back to his room from her solitude shows how responsible, caring and loving husband he isHe is truly a gem of a person He could have easily lived as a sybarite but choose to spend his life as a social reformer and JKG..Hat's off to this guy
You explained the entire concept of menstruation in an amiable way..It was a facile disposition I would say that made this OS look so realistic
I loved the concept of tracing back to a time where there were only two humans on earth and you made sure it doesn't become exorbitant
Bon's questions were indeed difficult to answer but Ani tried his best to impart as much knowledge as he can keeping in mind her tender age
His chillam chilli was again the highlight of the OS..This bloke just can't survive without his rants..Who doesn't know about it?
The last part had me asking too many questions but there wouldn't have been a better ending than this one..This isn't her age to learn things that can leave deep marks on her brain..
In a nutshell, it was a prudent OS with dialogues hitting right at the feels and at right places Keep up the good work Rimi
Isse ek cheez yaad aayi mujhe..Pehli baar bol rahi hoon hasna mat..
Ani is kaloi k'agathoi
Unres kar diya 😳
Originally posted by: Scarlett_15
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RimiPhir late hogayi mainChalo koi nahi
Aaiyee... Aapka.... Intezaar tha.....
Matlab koi sharam hi nahi hai ... khud hi 'Chalo koi nahi' Bol liya 🤣
Rimi dear you have done a fabulous work by touching such a sensitive topic when there are people around who still considers it a tabooIt was actually a very
Thank you.☺️.. ye very ke aage fill in the blank hai kya?🤪
I would say, this was a masterpiece and I would like to give a big applause for this stupendous exemplary piece of work
Thank you soooooo muchhhh 🤗🤗☺️❤️
The way Ani rushed to take Bon back to his room from her solitude shows how responsible, caring and loving husband he isHe is truly a gem of a person He could have easily lived as a sybarite but choose to spend his life as a social reformer and JKG..Hat's off to this guy
Aww kitne pyaar se apne bhai ki tareef ki 😳 ye tu hi hai na? ya Ani ne tera phone chura ke comment kiya?😳
You explained the entire concept of menstruation in an amiable way..It was a facile disposition I would say that made this OS look so realistic
Thank you .... you know how scared I was to use my words wisely 😳
I loved the concept of tracing back to a time where there were only two humans on earth and you made sure it doesn't become exorbitant
Thankieee 😳☺️ ( IDK why I am sharmaaing so much 🤪)
Bon's questions were indeed difficult to answer but Ani tried his best to impart as much knowledge as he can keeping in mind her tender age
Yes, Bon's age is the most difficult thing to handle for the time being 😔
His chillam chilli was again the highlight of the OS..This bloke just can't survive without his rants..Who doesn't know about it?
He gets mood swings all the time... thoda sa gussa aaya nahi ki chilaana zaroori hai 🤣
The last part had me asking too many questions but there wouldn't have been a better ending than this one..This isn't her age to learn things that can leave deep marks on her brain..
You are right.. these things can be so disturbing for kids 😕
In a nutshell, it was a prudent OS with dialogues hitting right at the feels and at right places Keep up the good work Rimi
Thank you fifa.. I am so GLAD you read it finally!!!! 🥳
Isse ek cheez yaad aayi mujhe..Pehli baar bol rahi hoon hasna mat..
Ani is kaloi k'agathoi
Haaye itna pyar kaise aa rha hai tujhe uspe... you are pakka Anirudh from her phone 🤣
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