Rudhita OS : You Bleed So We Exist

Aisa kon likhta hai bhai??!!

Kya kachra kar di tum..? Mai yaha sabko bolti phirti hu ki tu BB ke best writers mei se hai aur tu aise disappoint ki mujhe??

Just kidding...

Firstly, I would like to start with a big Thank you for sticking to the true character of Chillam Chilli ARC who is definitely going to show up in this track... And secondly, I want to say F**K YOU for raising my expectations from the show 😳

I am warning you... if they disappoint me, I am gonna PM you until you get pissed off 😈

Upar wale lines ke liye chotu sa

On a serious note, you wrote it so well! I am blown away

The way you have woven the entire concept of explaining such a life changing event in the form of a story is soooooo amazing! 🥳

I know girls who went through their first period without any guidance and I cannot imagine how traumatic it was for some of them. And when I read this OS the first thing that came to my mind was Bon is so lucky to have Ani around her!! Not just in your OS but also in the show.

Salute to you for writing this entire thing so gracefully and decently... 🤗

The words you have used and the boundaries you made to ensure that Ani does say things that aren't needed or that can make Bon uncomfortable is worthy of immense appreciation 👏. Pehle bhi kisi ko real mei explain kiya hai kya yeh sab? 😃

The way Ani handles Bon's questions and yet puts a rest to her curiosities without crossing any limits is commendable...

Bass... Ab aur nahi suj raha mujhe... Aur jitni rishwad tune mujhe di utne mei itni hi jhooti taarif niklegi mujhse 🤣

(Just kidding... Again)

With Love,

Akshu ❤️

Finally unres..😆Sorry for the late dear..!😳

Rimi... a warm huge hug to you behen for this wonderful masterpiece🤗...

I spellbound and astonished the way you portrayed each and everything so delicately and with utmost dignity... It's really one of the finest Os...a huge applause to you👏👏👏👏👏...

The way you scripted Bondita's innocence and her quest to learn the things from her pati babu will full faith is something which is so adorable..❤️. How I wish Koeli should be there with her instead of Sampoo in show too... But they merged this important with some stupid illogical Sampoo revenge track👎🏼😵..

Kaka is kaka... He wanna follow his cultural beliefs too but he can't even stop his beta to break all his Orthodox traditions too...😆

But you actually, potrayed everything here which those eras has witnessed.. That's great thing.. The dark room, separate plates and bedsheets etc.,. simply we can feel everything with the way you describe here... And this prove you're a great writer..👏👎🏼

Now, coming to Ani... You've penned his emotions very well.. Splendid job behen..👏🥳 The little awkwardness, the shear determination to make his little wife understand things in a subtle way, the way he sensed her pain and the way he emote her immense support was absolutely fabulous....❤️

Khash show mein bhi Ani itna sane air mature hota🤔.. But nahi usko world ka best ullu insaan ka award lena hai🤓... He is working hard to crown the title anyhow...👎🏼😕.

Your Os made us to expect a lot from show... But nahi milne wala hai kuch sane yeh bhi pata hai😒... Khash makers yeh track bina Sampoo drama ke execute karte😔...

Now, let's wait and see how Ani handles the situation in show... Karega bhi ya nahi.. Aur agar karega toh kya bewakoofi karega??? Yehi climax hone wala hai iss track ka..

But you've poured down all our expectations in one beautiful frame of art... Thanks for writing this wonderful Os.... Do write something like this often... Would love to read such works..❤️❤️🤗

Rimi🤗❤️

I don’t know how to express my love for you ❤️🤗🤗

Why were you nervous? We readers should be nervous after reading this awesome piece work thinking how to review it !!

I am speechless dear.. not able to find words which can describe what I am feeling after reading this wonderfully penned down piece of work👏👏👏

Truly speaking.. this is the same ARC I want to see in the most awaited menstrual track of our show!! Dam*.. .You have raised my expectations for the upcoming track!! If it would turned out a disasterous track then it’s your fault for writing this amazing os and raising our expectation bar 😆🤪

Ani and his restlessness of thinking about Bon!! He seemed very nervous about this whole thing !! He wanted to fight for Bon’s rights but he himself is new to all these things and was trying to find a way to help Bon .. this is why ARC is a different personality.. he gets whatever he wants .. even if he has to do all the chillam chillayi 😆 ..He is so adamant for Bon not staying in that room alone!! He knew she needed lots care and love not abandon treatment! Even he himself was new to the whole situation he tried his best to help Bon. I loved how you portrayed their emotions Rimi ❤️ one side ani wanted to help her and on the other side Bon’s mind was filled up with all false beliefs.. how nicely he took care of Bon- tried to make her as comfortable as he could!! And then he started taking off all the curtains of false beliefs being told to Bon .. he knew Bon loved stories and he explained her the most important lesson for girls in a story form .. how you have explained Bon’s curious, innocent questions and ani’s calm, compose manner to answer them!! Finally he could able to explained her the most crucial and important topic of life!! Yes, it was still not over for him but he knew Bon would come to him with some more questions when time comes!😊 but the best thing was he could made her see things practically that periods is not a “shraap” but a “vardaan” for girls as well as for the whole nature 👏 soo nicely explained Rimi👏

Not a single word or a sentence you used was uncomfortable 👍🏼 instead the selection of your words made this story more interesting.. !!

Good job girl🤗🤗

I am very proud of you for selecting this topic🤗

You and Ayesha are brave enough to touch this very sensitive topic and write it down in a story form ❤️

Hope makers show us something like this

Awesome job Rimi ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗

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U r an amazing writer partner❤️

The way u depicted ani & bons emotions was so perfect👏

Coz everyone knows ani is incomplete without chillam chilli🤪

Ani's apprehension as well as his urge to help bon at d same time was so relatable👍🏼

And d way u framed entire explanation for menstruation cycle was amazing😳

The best part was ani giving bon d space and time to understand these things herself!!

P.S I hope tune munnu ko mana liya hai🤪

She should really read this one😆👍🏼

Unres😳

Tum sab RES kar lo and mujhe yaha lag raha hai mere exam ki answer sheet check ho rahi hai 😡😭

Me is crying 😭

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RimiPhir late hogayi mainChalo koi nahi

Rimi dear you have done a fabulous work by touching such a sensitive topic when there are people around who still considers it a tabooIt was actually a very

I would say, this was a masterpiece and I would like to give a big applause for this stupendous exemplary piece of work

The way Ani rushed to take Bon back to his room from her solitude shows how responsible, caring and loving husband he isHe is truly a gem of a person He could have easily lived as a sybarite but choose to spend his life as a social reformer and JKG..Hat's off to this guy

You explained the entire concept of menstruation in an amiable way..It was a facile disposition I would say that made this OS look so realistic

I loved the concept of tracing back to a time where there were only two humans on earth and you made sure it doesn't become exorbitant

Bon's questions were indeed difficult to answer but Ani tried his best to impart as much knowledge as he can keeping in mind her tender age

His chillam chilli was again the highlight of the OS..This bloke just can't survive without his rants..Who doesn't know about it?

The last part had me asking too many questions but there wouldn't have been a better ending than this one..This isn't her age to learn things that can leave deep marks on her brain..

In a nutshell, it was a prudent OS with dialogues hitting right at the feels and at right places Keep up the good work Rimi

Isse ek cheez yaad aayi mujhe..Pehli baar bol rahi hoon hasna mat..

Ani is kaloi k'agathoi

u have penned it beautifully even i got to know many things ...

Originally posted by: Toto123

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Why have you given me sarcastic like on the post? 🥱 I hate you 😊👍🏼