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You can address me as snan
When will you update Rimi😒
Dekh I never asked someone to update like this because I know it will take time to think and then execute but I think I can't wait more because meko janna hai aage ka desperately😆😆 sorry being despo😆 but kya kre dil hai ke manta nahi🤣
Agar jaldi nahi diya toh i will imagine you as in sampoo's current hairstyle🤣
Actually I am writing a new fanfiction on bb so can you guys please check it out and give your feedback 🙏 You can read it in Wattpad Search for Rudhita The mistake . I could have shared the link but I am a newbie so I am not allowed to share hyperlink
Sorry for late unres😳
It was a amzing chapter partner 🤗❤️
U potrayed bons emotions so welll👏
She still loves him😭Mujhe pata tha nibbi bon is still alive inside her🤪
Im very intrigued by that past ani mini scene😈
Ye kya kar raha tha aise
And bon saw it😭Bechara bon bacha😒
No wonder she hates him🤓
Bons emotions were on a rollercoaster🤪
Aisa...precap kyu deti ho😵
Thank you 🤗
Yes Nibbi Bon abhi andar se usko knock kar rahi hai 🤣
Ani abhi bhi bechara aur tab bhi becharo vaali harkat kar raha tha 🤪 bechara 🤣
Yes Ani ko pair pakad ke maafi maangni pdegi 🤪
Kyu precap me aisa kya? It is typical ITV stuff 🤪
Rimi🤗
NIma 🤗 one of my fav readers 😳
First of all I loved the title of this chapter..”stuck in reverse “ it’s so apt for this chapter. They both are stuck in their past na. And until they don’t talk it out, they won’t be able to move on. The whole chapter is based on the flashbacks!! You gave us little sneak peak of their past.
Nima you know when I write any chapter I always put a thought behind every title, every scene and theme... and you are the only one who never fail to miss even a single point you read so minutely ... Love u for that! 🤗
Ani’s shocking confession to mini.. he loved someone deeply .. but why I am feeling it’s not what it seems .. something is amiss.. isn’t it? Is it what I think it is? 😆You will find out soonish 😳
Maybe that’s why he ran off.. without any explanation or clarification. If that’s a case then very bad move in ani’s parts he was a matured one in their relationship, then how could he do that? To a small girl?
Ani is so fickle minded at times, his sanity gets overpowered by his righteousness!
He had nightmare of this incident means that’s the incident which changed their life .. and now he wants to clear things with Bon. You need to do that mister. But don’t you think you are 10 years late? Anyways better late than never!
Yes that night was his worst night due to so many reasons 😊 he made so many mistakes all on the same day 🤣
And finally .. tada.. he found Bon’s letter written to him.. she has been writing him all these years but never sent him means all these years she craved to be with him, his support and may be for just being with him! Poor girl, she was all alone when she needed someone, her patibabu but she didn’t have him by her side. Still she fought her battle alone and won with flying Colors. Those letters shows how much she missed him all these years .. even though she says she hates him but in her heart she still have soft corner for him. Otherwise she would have burned those letters long ago.
Exactly! He left her when she needed him the most, but her love for him has not faded away completely. Somewhere she still wants to believe that he is still her old Patibabu.
Bon caught him reading her letters and got angry.. and the confronts starts .. instead of giving her an answer ani asked answers from her.. good that Bon gave him back. But how long could she hide her inner, wrapped, forbidden emotions inside and ....she broke down, in her patibabu’s embrace.. she hugged him.. she let go of her shield of being indifference and the small girl Bon surfaced !! She complained and requested him not to leave her alone .. she tried to get all out ...all her hidden emotions! Ani also realized his mistake. But the milk is spilled .. Bon is already broken 😞 she felt the warmth she craved for all these years .. but is it enough? Is it easy to forget the past? No. This scene Rimi.. what to say.. it has my heart .. really intense ❤️ good job dear 🤗
Thank you so much for putting this scene in your words. It was amazing to read ! 🤗 I am happy I could do it properly because writing emotional parts are always a challenge.
Bon remembered the past again and realized her battle is not finish yet.. it’s still on/be it with ani or be it with her heart she rightly told him .. he had so many chances to come out clean boy he choose not to. If he wasn’t at fault then what was the need for this pretense? If he wasn’t at fault or he never cheated her then he needs to come out clean .. and that too soon!!
Yes Ani is afraid of his own feelings but Bon is the only one who can get him out of it!
Very very beautiful chapter Rimi🤗❤️🤗
I loved this chappy very much yaar
Waiting for the next chapter .. I am sure it will be more interesting and sorry for unresv little late.. 😒
Thank you nima 🤗 No need for sorry... I trouble you to unres because I wait for your reviews eagerly🤗
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Originally posted by: rikara94
When will you update Rimi😒
Dekh I never asked someone to update like this because I know it will take time to think and then execute but I think I can't wait more because meko janna hai aage ka desperately😆😆 sorry being despo😆 but kya kre dil hai ke manta nahi🤣
Agar jaldi nahi diya toh i will imagine you as in sampoo's current hairstyle🤣
Jyoti itni badi dhamki 😲
dekh mere paas time ki kitni kami hai mai tere OS pe res karke rakhi hu 😭 mera fav song hai kabse padhna hai...
aur yaha tu mujhe update dene pe majboor kar di 😭🤣🤣
Dimaag me likh liya poora chapter 😈 will post soon 🤗
Rimi🤗
First of all, kan pakad ke mafi... Itni der se story padhne... Itne din tek inactive rehne😭
But.... I read it in one go...
The title itself pulled the right strings of my heart... I knew it... Ek aur master piece hi hogi Rimi ki...
N i am not wrong at all...😳
What a start .. what powerful dialogues... What a terrific personality Bon has... 👏
I loved the tone authority you have portrayed in Bon's character and her lines...
Each chapter increased the curiosity of "what went wrong between Rudi" by two times
It's a lovely story Rimi... With a different concept...👏
Loved it...❤️
Please update soon dear.... It's hard wait🤪
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