Na koi hai na koi tha, tumhare siva! A RudhiTa Os

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Ayesha!

This was MESMERIZING! 🤩🤩🤩

I love the way you describe things so smoothly❤️ You have explained Bon's jealousy so well that I am in my dream land now.... Imagining scenarios on this.. Tbh, I never imagined Bon's jealousy coz she is not that kinda person, always thought Ani will be the jealous boy in future. But this was just ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you for writing this amazing os🤗

P. S. The title is my fav song so this is extra special🤗

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Amazingly written!

Each and every word speaks loud of what Anirudh and Bondita are feeling. Bondita's unknown feelings could be felt so deeply and Anirudh's gentleness around his lady. It's often very subtle and common for children to have a feeling a possessiveness for there close ones, but it actually turns awkward in such situations. But yet Anirudh handled the whole situation with much needed maturity. They are incomplete without each other❤️

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Originally posted by: AK_2010

Ayesha!

This was MESMERIZING! 🤩🤩🤩

I love the way you describe things so smoothly❤️ You have explained Bon's jealousy so well that I am in my dream land now.... Imagining scenarios on this.. Tbh, I never imagined Bon's jealousy coz she is not that kinda person, always thought Ani will be the jealous boy in future. But this was just ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you for writing this amazing os🤗

P. S. The title is my fav song so this is extra special🤗

Akshataaa! 🤗 Kaisi hoo???

Thank you soo much for such kind comments yar... I am so glad that you liked it. 😳 You are a sweetheart... ❤️ And your beautiful comment just made me so happy!☺️🤗

I have been thinking about Bondu's jealousy since the time jab HM girls had come... But our Bondu is not like that... 😆 But now I couldnt resist to use this backdrop with sampoorna... 😛

I just went too overboard with this one though. 😳 Yeh itna lambaa hogya ke kuch loagon ke ilawah baqion ko shayad padhna aik go mien mushkil lag rha ho...

Next time if I write something, I will try to keep it real short. 👍🏼

This song is my all time favrt. too. Abhi 2,3 days pehle AT per discuss horha tha. Wahin se mujhe idea aaya to use this line for the title... 😳

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Originally posted by: Patibabu

Amazingly written!

Each and every word speaks loud of what Anirudh and Bondita are feeling. Bondita's unknown feelings could be felt so deeply and Anirudh's gentleness around his lady. It's often very subtle and common for children to have a feeling a possessiveness for there close ones, but it actually turns awkward in such situations. But yet Anirudh handled the whole situation with much needed maturity. They are incomplete without each other❤️


Heyyyy buddy! 🤗 If I am not mistaken, you are Alif??😳 Please correct me if I am wrong and dont mind it... I havent been around the forum much... 😳

and buddddy! What a lovely comment!!! Thank you so much... ❤️ You are too kind.

I am glad you could connect with my words. 😳 Actually I love this current relationship dynamic between Ani and Bon, and I am one of those few people who are not at all keen for a leap and a grown up love story between these two. Yar woh tou sab ko pata hai ke baday ho ker tou they will be a romantic couple and all... I just like to explore various emotional aspects of their relationship now when Bondu is so little. 😊 And I have experienced and seen kids getting posessive about their loved ones too. I also believe that kids have a very good judgment of other people because they are pure at heart. So if Bondu felt something this time, it probably meant that she was sensing something wrong with Sampoorna.. 😉

Sadly, mujhse short write ups nahi likhay jatay... A looooong OS like this one is hard to read in one go...i know. But I am very glad that you took out time to read it and were kind enough to post such a beautiful and encouraging comment for it. 😳 Thank You🤗

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Hi Ayesha🤗

Awesome os ❤️❤️

It’s so amazing yaar. I don’t have words to describe how accurate you have written their emotions especially Bon’s!!! It is very true that kids get possessive for their loved ones...Ani is her entire world and her life revolve round him only.. so it is obvious for her to get possessive for him. Yes it’s not that kind of love from her side yet but love blooms from bonding and attachment only! Ani realized her true and deep feelings for him and he tackled the issue very calmly and maturely. And it’s good that Bon spilled her turmoil in front of ani otherwise it would have been disastrous for this little girl’s mind. You have written everything so well👏
I loved it 😍🤗

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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Akshataaa! 🤗 Kaisi hoo???

Thank you soo much for such kind comments yar... I am so glad that you liked it. 😳 You are a sweetheart... ❤️ And your beautiful comment just made me so happy!☺️🤗

I have been thinking about Bondu's jealousy since the time jab HM girls had come... But our Bondu is not like that... 😆 But now I couldnt resist to use this backdrop with sampoorna... 😛

I just went too overboard with this one though. 😳 Yeh itna lambaa hogya ke kuch loagon ke ilawah baqion ko shayad padhna aik go mien mushkil lag rha ho...

Next time if I write something, I will try to keep it real short. 👍🏼

This song is my all time favrt. too. Abhi 2,3 days pehle AT per discuss horha tha. Wahin se mujhe idea aaya to use this line for the title... 😳

Arrey... You deserve this appreciation darling.

And the problem is not the length... The problem is that people are busy. Bohot kam log active hai forum pe iss wakt... Don't worry, soon others will read it too

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Itni acchi keise likh leti hein aap

Itna sundar

Itna creative

Itna bohot kuch

Every story, every story that you wrote are different and amazingly best

MashAllah

Meri dil toh har baar thaam jaati hein har baar , jaab bhi aapki stories paarti hun

No one wrote about this formation and realization of love in Bondita's little heart before.

And Anirudh's too

MashAllah

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