Wonderful update superb
Wonderful update superb
Great execution of this part..
Dadimaa is bang on in getting Maaneet close!
Does she have any idea they fight in office?
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My suggestion for next few updates, take it if you feel its good enough otherwise no sweat -
Maybe Maan's Dadimaa can get Geet to stay at home, make Maan call Geet over call for searching important files and papers for upcoming projects he has to handle..
Maybe Geet might be angry and refuse to speak with him at first, but he may miss her in office, the banter is warranted, he might as well ask her to rejoin and convince Dadimaa that they will try not to fight anymore!
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Kudos to her character!
She plays Cupid Grandmother or God-Fairy for bringing Maan and Geet to lunch together!
And Maan's insistence on Geet eating but him skipping lunch is typical Bag guy MSK in action!
Well, where shall Geet hide her face from her lover?
Acceptance is one thing, fights are part and parcel of life, can make or break people's ties, but Maaneet are going thick as enemies and at times these fights lead to closure on various issues they encounter..
Well, Geet taking a cab with Pinky and not wanting to go with Maan is understood, courtesy his insult on her in the open, their fights are common these days, but I feel Maan is overdoing it..
Geet might not take it plainly, but she can't argue much as Dadimaa is present at home and Geet is answerable to Dadimaa..
Also, is the fighting going to prolong?
If yes, do you want the office to become refrees or spectators of these fights and banters, its a little confusing, please shed some light on this aspect.
And if Geet plans to leave Maan and his house, will Dadimaa still play cupid or will go by Geet's words, given that Dadimaa might understand a woman's pain, even if it is her own grandson's new wife?
This update was good, but better times can be shown ahead, if you feel its okay for the story!
Do update soon..
Waiting eagerly to read more of this story...
Thanks so much, for the constant PMs... have to sit and clear my inbox now if I plan on getting any more PMs!!
Hahaahaa!! 😉😆
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geet did not need any reason to fight with maan
maan have no clue how to deal with geet
Nice update. Geet is very childish sometimes matured.
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marvelous update. well written
what does Geet know about Maan?
I am sure Maan would not be pleased hearing this
Maan tries hard to avoid Geet but dadi ensures that this does not happen
feeling for Maan
Maan cares so much for her
he is upset when she is taking a cab home
update soon
Y not geet complete her sentence what secret she knows about maan
Maan still have hope some where in his heart that's y he stopped to listen whom she talking on phone
What going to happen when he got to know what dev told her about him both will have to face MSK anger
Dadi always make maan to spend time with geet
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Geet & maan’s interactions are funny 😆
Especially with geet b/c you never know what she is going to say or do
Cute how geet does not like being called a cry baby ðŸ˜
But geet brought up maan’s secret again but I was disappointed that she stopped ..... & didn’t divulge
Geet is acting so childish & maan is trying his best to avoid her but fate & dadi 😆 have other plans .
Great update
Thank you for pm & update 🤗
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Interesting Update
Geet tells Maan that she knows his secrets
strange how both of them assume everything and anything
about each other
yet they never get to a point where they can talk in clear terms
Geet was really upset that Maan called her cry baby
Nice update, I really feel sorry for Maan. I wish he could show geet her place. She is so selfish and doesn’t care about others, she needs to come down to real world soon. I wish she learns her lesson soon. I don’t want maan to suffer in all this mishap.
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