Ruditha TS - The Letter Part 2 Updated page 3 (30/12)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Do comment on if you'll would like to read the full story ❤️


Bonditha missed Anirudh.


It was in this month of separation when she realized how much he was a part of her life which was probably why she's forgotten how to live without him.


She missed the way he'd just take one look at her and know exactly how she was feeling


She missed how she used to curl onto him and talk about a bad day


She missed how he'd lose his mind when she was in the slightest discomfort or hurt


She even missed how he'd get jealous and possessive about her if he felt guys were trying to get too friendly with her.


"Hey..." Arjun's voice snapped her back to reality.


Who was Arjun you might ask,


Well he was the self appointed Romeo and the self acclaimed heartbreaker of the college.


"Oh god help me get rid of this pest before I beat him up" Bonditha whispered a small prayer she never understood how he'd keep pestering her no matter how many times she stressed on the fact she was married.


"what do you want?" She asked disinterest clear in her tone, Bonditha looked around trying to spot someone she knew so she could slide away from this situation.


Her eyes widened as she spotted a familiar figure standing a few meters away.


Bonditha blinked her eyes a few times to confirm that what she saw wasn't a fragment of her imagination.


"Arjun, do you see that gentleman" Bonditha asked pointing at the familiar figure.


"umm... yes?" He answered confused.


Eyes met.


He was real.


He was here.


First she walked in a daze,


her steps got faster


and before she knew she was running towards him in full speed and pulled him into a bone crushing hug.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please Continue

interesting concept

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Please continue.. a nice one👍🏼⭐️

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It seems intriguing...plz continue with the plot.

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Please continue. I would love to read it.

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PART 01


1 Month.


That's how long Bonditha had left to college to say Anirudh missed her would be an understatement in all honesty he was close to losing his mind.


Anirudh closed his eyes shut hoping to catch a glimpse of her recalling the moments they spent together, a smile adorned his lips as he remembered how her nose flared and eyes widened in anger when he used to jest with her.


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"Patu babu..." Bonditha came running to the room excited and literally jumped on to him engulfing him in a bone crushing hug.


"Are you trying to kill your husband Bondi" he asked laughing.


"Shush... Guess what?"


"Hawwww.... Are you shushing your husband?"


"Yeah and what is barrister Anirudh going to do about it" she challenged.


"She calls her husband by his name. Oh the days I have come to witness" he continued to tease her.


"Has anyone told you how dramatic you are?" she chuckled hitting her forehead with his.


"Soon tell me the good news before I fracture a bone or two carrying your heavy self"


"Did you just call me fat?" Bonditha looked annoyed untangling herself from Anirudh


"No I didn't" he dragged the joke.


"Well you did, why don't you go find some stick figure and get married to her ah?" she asked


"Since you've given me permission I'll go find myself a match then" he said looking serious suppressing a laugh.


"OK whatever I have work to do. Bye" she said walking out of the room annoyed.


Anirudh thought by the evening she'll be back to herself but what he didn't expect was for her to still be mad at her for a small joke he played.


To resolve this problem he executed what he beloved was the best idea.


"Tring Tring..." Anirudh mimicked the sound offering one end of their special phone to Bonditha.


"Hello can I speak to my princess?" Anirudh tried to get a reaction.


"I'm sorry I think you've tried the wrong number"


"Is my Bonditha angry with me?"


"hmm" she muttered.


"Doesn't she even want to look at her pati babu"


Bonditha remained silent.


"Do you know something I sometimes think I'm the luckiest husband in the world"


"Yeah and why is that?"


"Because I have the most hard working, determined, intelligent and beautiful wife in the world"


"Then why does he want another woman in his life"


"You know he was joking right?"


"I don't care even if he was. Why did he think I'll ever want to share him with anyone?"


"Mishti.." He whispered leaving the phone aside he sat next to her and in one swift motion pulled her on to his lap.


"Sounds like someone is jealous" he tried to get a reaction.


"Look who's talking" Bonditha sassed.


"What are you talking about?"


"Pati babu I think eveyone in the village knows your not so subtle 'Stay 2m away from my wife' look"


"Yeha whatever. I just remembered what was it that you wanted to tell me before"


"Oh yeah I got my university offer letter" She smiled while Anirudh dropped a light kiss on het forehead.


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"Choti Malik we've come home" the driver announced.


Anirudh walked into the house to hear the best message he's heard in a while.


"You've got a letter from Bonditha" his father let him know.


"Thank you" Anirudh smiled brightly for the first time since a month and ran to his room in a jiffy to read her letter.




To my most favourite husband,


How are you doing pati babu? Do you miss me because I've been missing you Alot.


I miss telling you how my day went.


I miss your hugs and kisses.


I miss knowing you're around.


Please come to see me.




Anirudh traced the tear smudged ink on the paper a heavy feeling in his heart taking over.


He continued to read the letter


Sir, I am Mayura I found this unsent letter on Bonditha's desk and thought it was important to send it to you. She misses you dearly.


The letter ended in an abrupt note.


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Bonditha missed Anirudh.


It was in this month of separation when she realized how much he was a part of her life which was probably why she's forgotten how to live without him.


She missed the way he'd just take one look at her and know exactly how she was feeling


She missed how she used to curl onto him and talk about a bad day


She missed how he'd lose his mind when she was in the slightest discomfort or hurt


She even missed how he'd get jealous and possessive about her if he felt guys were trying to get too friendly with her.


"Hey..." Arjun's voice snapped her back to reality.


Who was Arjun you might ask,


Well he was the self appointed Romeo and the self acclaimed heartbreaker of the college.


"Oh god help me get rid of this pest before I beat him up" Bonditha whispered a small prayer she never understood how he'd keep pestering her no matter how many times she stressed on the fact she was married.


"what do you want?" She asked disinterest clear in her tone, Bonditha looked around trying to spot someone she knew so she could slide away from this situation.


Her eyes widened as she spotted a familiar figure standing a few meters away.


Bonditha blinked her eyes a few times to confirm that what she saw wasn't a fragment of her imagination.


"Arjun, do you see that gentleman" Bonditha asked pointing at the familiar figure.


"umm... yes?" He answered confused.


Eyes met.


He was real.


He was here.


First she walked in a daze,


her steps got faster


and before she knew she was running towards him in full speed and pulled him into a bone crushing hug.


"You came..." Bonditha panted.


"I heard that my favorite wife was missing me" Anirudh joked.


"More than you could ever imagine" Bonditha snuggled on to him more closer taking in his scent.


Anirudh just smiled dropping a kiss on to her head.


Bonditha suddenly broke the hug pushing Anirudh away.


"I'm angry with you" Bonditha pouted annoyed.


"And what would the reason be?" Anirudh questioned intervening his fingers with hers.


"Because you lied to me, you told me I won't miss you, you told me that I'd enjoy my time alone" She complained.


"Meri Jaann... look at me, it is important that you learn to live without me. I'm not always going to be around..."


"Why? Do you remember on my 18th birthday you promised you'll always be with me and you broke that promise"


"Natanuki" he laughed.


"Give me a second I will get my bag and let's go home" Bonditha suggested.


"Sure thing jaan" he smiled.


Bonditha picked up her bag in a flash and while running back to Anirudh she overheard a conversation


"Do you see that guy over there?" a senior asked her friend.


"Do you think he's single?" they discussed.

"How dare they" Bonditha whisper yelled in annoyance.


"Let's go talk to him" they walked towards Anirudh leaving a fuming Bonditha behind.

Edited by Immaturebookie - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Are you a magician? Coz you be doing some serious magic here!! What a wonderful piece this is!! I was hit with such longing for this to be their reality 10 years down the line! ☺️And you have written it so masterfully!

I always have this thing where I want the older version of them to still have the charm of their child hood selves! Like I want Anirudh to carry the essence of Bon's childhood while still fashioning into their mature mad in love selves!!

And you have also written them with such perfect amount of give and take! She calls him Pati babu then follows it up with calling him by name! She calls him dramatic, then proceeds to herself be the same! He tries to make amends with the coconut telephone of her childhood, yet now their conversation has a different depth! That convo itself is so.. He calls her princess but she isn't interested in child's play anymore. When he switches tracks, she ends up admitting not wanting to share him with anyone even in jest! The part where he says Mishti n pulls her onto his lap! Sigh. He tries to corner her by calling her out on her jealousy but she immediately turns the tables by calling him out!! The part where she says he has that stay 2M away from my wife look is something I imagine our show ARC will soon develop to perfection!! 😆

Him reading her letter n feeling heavy hearted! She probably not sending the letter so as to not dishearten him!

And the way she misses him is literally the exact way I want for him to be loving her as she grows up!

I even liked the Arjun part where she wants to get rid of him before the urge to hit him becomes too much. 🤣Also the part where she asks Arjun if he can see Anirudh, had such Geet from Jab we met vibes, what do I say!! 😆

N finally they meet. Again, she says I am angry with you, he links their fingers together. Also, on a side note him saying Meri Jaan literally took away my jaan!!!! 😆

All in all, this beautiful balance of give and take. Of them being so in love with each other yet maintaining their individualities!!!!!It's so true to their revolutionary nature! So, Thank you for this. It reads like an intricately woven sneak into their very much on the horizon future.

P. S apologies for rambling so long, I just had to mention my appreciation!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: WarriorB

Are you a magician? Coz you be doing some serious magic here!! What a wonderful piece this is!! I was hit with such longing for this to be their reality 10 years down the line! ☺️And you have written it so masterfully!

I always have this thing where I want the older version of them to still have the charm of their child hood selves! Like I want Anirudh to carry the essence of Bon's childhood while still fashioning into their mature mad in love selves!!

And you have also written them with such perfect amount of give and take! She calls him Pati babu then follows it up with calling him by name! She calls him dramatic, then proceeds to herself be the same! He tries to make amends with the coconut telephone of her childhood, yet now their conversation has a different depth! That convo itself is so.. He calls her princess but she isn't interested in child's play anymore. When he switches tracks, she ends up admitting not wanting to share him with anyone even in jest! The part where he says Mishti n pulls her onto his lap! Sigh. He tries to corner her by calling her out on her jealousy but she immediately turns the tables by calling him out!! The part where she says he has that stay 2M away from my wife look is something I imagine our show ARC will soon develop to perfection!! 😆

Him reading her letter n feeling heavy hearted! She probably not sending the letter so as to not dishearten him!

And the way she misses him is literally the exact way I want for him to be loving her as she grows up!

I even liked the Arjun part where she wants to get rid of him before the urge to hit him becomes too much. 🤣Also the part where she asks Arjun if he can see Anirudh, had such Geet from Jab we met vibes, what do I say!! 😆

N finally they meet. Again, she says I am angry with you, he links their fingers together. Also, on a side note him saying Meri Jaan literally took away my jaan!!!! 😆

All in all, this beautiful balance of give and take. Of them being so in love with each other yet maintaining their individualities!!!!!It's so true to their revolutionary nature! So, Thank you for this. It reads like an intricately woven sneak into their very much on the horizon future.

P. S apologies for rambling so long, I just had to mention my appreciation!!


Heyo :) honestly thank you so much for taking time to write such a sweet note I'm glad you enjoyed it and omg Jab we met is one of my favourite movies. Stay tuned for the next update ;)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing!!

Its unique to read when Ani already loves Bon and doesnt need any shaking to accept his own wifey 😆

I liked Ani's impulse and readiness to just pop up at Bon's college..

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Originally posted by: AK_2010

Amazing!!

Its unique to read when Ani already loves Bon and doesnt need any shaking to accept his own wifey 😆

I liked Ani's impulse and readiness to just pop up at Bon's college..


Thank you love I'm glad you enjoyed reading it =)

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