IshRa ss: Tum yun mile ho jabse mujhe part 10 at Page 18 on 21/11

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Hello guys i am back with new story "Tum yun mile ho jabse mujhe" i want to thanks cooldilkaur aka dilpreet as the credit of this concept goes to her so here is prologue please do read it and share your reviews ⬇


prologue 

Ishita was sleeping in her room peacefully when her mihika comes there she looks at ishita

Mihika : akka get up

I: mihiku just two minutes please

Mi : akka jaldi karo aap late ho rahi ho aaj aapke college ka first day hai

(akka get ready you are getting late for college today is your first day)

She said while ishita got up listing this

I: oh shit main to bhool hi gayi thi mihiku main first day hi late ho jaaugi ab kya hoga

( oh shit i forget about it mihika i will get late on first day only now what will happen?)

Mi : akka relax aap please jaldi se jaake ready ho jao

( akka please relax go and get ready)

She said while ishita got up and went to get ready

After sometime

Ishita was getting ready when amma sister comes there

I: amma dekho main kaisi lag rahi hoon?

( amma see how i am looking?)

Amma: ishu tum jitni bhi kossish karlo tum achi nahi lag sakti jab tak tumhara weight kam nahi hota  maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai dieting kiya karo par tum meri baat to sunti nahi ho tumhara weight badta jaa rha hai agar aisa hi chalta raha naa to koi tumse shadi nahi karega sirf padhai mai ache hone se kuch nahi hota tumhe apni looks pe bhi dhyan dena chaiye zara mihika ko dekho wo apni looks ka kitna khyal rakhti hai pata nahi tumhe kab samjh aayegi ye baat

( ishu how much ever you try you can't look good until you lose some weight i told you so many times to do dieting but you don't listen to me and if this continues then no one will marry you only being good in studies is not enough you should also look good just look at mihika she is so good looking she took care of herself but don't know when will you understand this)

She said while ishita feels bad listing this

Mi: amma aap ne phir se start kar diya

(amma you started it again)

Amma: mihika tum chap karo tum nahi jaanti shadi karte samay ye sab bhot important hota hai ek ladki ke liye uski look bhot zaroori hoti hai isko aise dekh ke koun passand karega isko agar iski shadi nahi hogi to teri bhi nahi hogi main ye sab iske ache ke liye hi bol rahi hoon par tumhe aur tumhare appa ko meri baat ka bura lagta hai to jo karna hai karo

( mihika just shut up you don't know all this matters a lot to get married for a girl her looks matters the most and no one will like her in this way i am saying this for her good but you and your appa always feel bad whatever i say so do whatever you want to do)

She said and leaves from there ishita looked herself in mirror

I: mihika amma is right kitni moti hoon main kitni gandi dikhti hoon college mai bhi sab mera mazak udayege jaise hamesha udate the  pata nahi main kaise manage karugi main kabhi apne sapne pure kar bhi paaugi ya nahi?

( mihika amma is right i am not good looking everyone in college will make fun of me like everyone does how will i manage everything? How will i fulfill my dreams?)

She thought while her eyes get moist

Mi: akka don't worry please ye sab maat socho you are the best akka and you know that

She said and hugs her while she smiles

Other side

Raman got ready to go the college her mother comes there

R: mom kaisa lag raha hoon main?

( mom how i am looking?)

T: mera puttar hamesha ki tarah bhot hi sohna lag rha hai

( my son is looking handsome as always)

R: wo to lagna hi hai raman bhalla naam hai mera college ki sab ladkiya dewani hai meri

( i have to look handsome my name is raman bhalla all girls in the college are mad about me)

He said proudly

T: haa puttar tu hai hi itna acha tu dekhna tere liye main lakho mai se ek ladki doodhugi

( yes beacuse you are really good and i  will get the best girl for you)

R: maa jo ladki meri life mai aayegi naa wo bhot special hogi aisi ladki jisko sab dekhte reh jaye bhot hi khoobsurat bilkul mere takar ki

( mom that girl will be very special who will come in my life she will be very beautiful just the way i like)

He was saying when mr bhalla comes there

Mr bhalla: tum bas sapne hi dekhte rehna jiss tarah tumhari harakte hai koi ladki tumhe passand nahi karegi

( just keep dreaming the way you are behaving no girl will like you)

T: bhalla ji

Mr bhalla: toshi ji mujh par maat chailye apne puttar ko samjhao fail ho gya hai ye iss saal bhi first year mai hi rahega aapka ladla wo bhi iske unn doston ki wajeh se

( toshi ji don't shout at me made your son understand this he got fail this time and now he will be in first year again and this happening beacuse of his friends)

T: bhalla ji rehne do naa bacha hai agli baar mehnat karega aur paas ho jayega

( bhalla ji calm down he will get pass next year by working hard)

R: aur papa please mere doston ke bare mai kuch maat kahiye wo meri jaan hai agar mujhe koi samjhta hai to wo mere dost hai aur don't worry apni mba complete karne ke baad mai aapka office join karuga aur aapko dikhauga ki main kya hoon

( yes papa please don't say all this for my friends they are my life only they understand me and after completing my mba i will join your office then i will show you what i can do)

He said with attitude looking at his father

Mr bhalla: dekha toshi ji apne puttar ko

( just look at your so toshi ji)

R: maa main jaa rha hoon college mere dost mera intzaar kar rahe honge

( mom i am going to college my friends must be waiting for me)

He said and leaves from there

Mr bhalla: toshi ji dekha usko mujhe bhot fikar ho rahi hai iski apne doston ki wajeh se ye apni zindagi naa barbad karle kaash kuch aisa ho jisse raman sudhar jaye

( toshi ji just look at him i am really worried for him he will destroy his life beacuse of his friends i wish something happen and he will change)

T: aap chinta maat karo bhalla ji sab thik hoga

( don't worry everything will be fine)

She said while mr bhalla nodded

P.s: so please do share your reviews about it i will wait for your response.

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Edited by Priyanka7080 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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updated new story please have a look.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Here Raman is over confident and Ishita lacks confident

Hope Raman not hurt Ishita in beginning

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome prologue di❣️

Loved it

Mihika supports ishu❤️❤️

Lets see what happens next 

Ty 4 d pm too

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing  concept  dear 

Eagerly waiting 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You did a brilliant job with the prologue. The story is set so let's see how the interactions between IshRa begin. Update soon. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome prologue 

Update soon 

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Thanks for the PM 









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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice prologue 

Please start sooonnn 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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A very interesting prologue please update next part soon to know more about the story