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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 3

Sara knows how to handle young people with problems. Its her specialty after all. She was able to bond with Jen.


Yes she does. But she isn't able to with Samir. Perhaps because Ryan already has a stronger equation with him? Between the two of them though they can solve all young people's problems! Ha ha! But what about their own problems? πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 3

Samir needs help. Lets see these two team up and help him.


Aha! You will see that doesn't go exactly according to plan! But will they still find a way to be together to help Samir? Let's see! 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 4

Sara can't help herself drooling over the eye candy. If Ian is so micromanaging and self obsessed, its time to find someone else.


I was waiting for someone to bring up the fact that Ryan is complete 'eye candy'! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜³ 

Yes! Thank you! He is! 😳No woman can be completely oblivious to the fact that he's exceedingly handsome. Sara is no different! β˜ΊοΈ


About Ian, right now Sara is still feeling a bit negative about him. But that can change... πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 4

Whats between Ryan and his father? Guess they are not close.


There are some unresolved tensions between them. It happens within families, and Robert can be a hard, exacting man. Both his parents are over-achievers, that's another thing that makes Ryan feel inadequate.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 4

Her mother is paying more attention to a son who she didn't see for many years.  The resentment can be understood. She is feeling left out.


It's not just what's happening in the present. It's what happened all these years. Asha was pining for Ashu and now when she has him, her world is again centered around him. That is what is causing the resentment. Asha needs to show Sara that she's as important to her as Ashu is.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 5

Both Ryan and Sara have reason to think their selected activity would be good for Samir. And both are right in a way. They should just ask Samir what he wants.


Yes, they should. But obviously, since Samir is not in a good place right now, and they are supposed to be intervention specialists (meaning they decide what's best for him!), they're not going to ask him! πŸ˜›Also, its needed to bring in the conflict in my story! πŸ˜†

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 5

Ryan's father wanted him to do medicine. He has to understand his son likes journalism and let him go follow that.


This comes from a place of his dad being an over-achiever I think. He just cannot see how Ryan could turn down a career in med (after having gotten good enough marks for it!) to pursue something like journalism (that he obviously does not think is as cerebral or noteworthy as medicine). It's up to Ryan to prove him wrong, no? πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 6

So two people in the family think Ian is not the right person for her. Sara is feeling it too but she is evading it.


Yes Shekhar and Nidhi both feel that! Sara is evading it.. one, because of her lack of confidence in herself. She recognizes all the problems she's having with Ian but is unwilling to do anything about it because she's too scared and too uncertain about her own feelings. And Two, she's in turmoil about so many things right now - her work, Ryan, Ashu, Samir... she's not in the right frame of mind to make a rational decision, so she's putting it off. Maybe Ian can do something to redeem himself in the meantime? πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 7

Sara doesn't know what Ashu went through all these years.


Yes, she doesn't. But Ashu hasn't been exactly forgiving himself. It took him 30 years to forgive his mom. Sara can take at least that much time to forgive Ashu, don't you think? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 8

The hot friend is here. If Ryan goes after her, what will Sara feel?


Yes, ha ha! The hot friend and the hot leading man meet! ☺️ Will sparks fly? Will Sara be jealous? Wait and watch this space! πŸ˜‰