Ariya FF: Dil Meri Na Sune....(ACP ARJUN)/Part4/ pg15/27july

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  I know frs lots of pending work...but wanna to write new n fresh...

So ....hv a look...n tell me do you want more....

Should i continue....????   


Dil meri naa sune.....

.......dil ki main na suno...

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HERE THE CHARACTER SKETCH...... ********************* 

ACP Arjun rawte (age=35)--

The super cop , inteligent ETF officer , Short temper having a painful past

His love, his life ,his beautiful wife was killed by .....    sikander, 

His only goal to catch sikander ..

but the twist is one other hidden mistory ( thats a still suspense wait 4 that) 

ACP Sameer rathor (age=35) ------ 

 ETF chief , Friend's of Arjun  ,but not now...

Same as show...

Shree and Chhotu ------------

Same as show.....

Shree ka laptop love aur Chhoto ka 11:30 vali....

 

RIYA(25)---

 Riya no surname but why ..??

opp again mistory, but now she is not the part of ETF but dont wary without her how our ETF team is complete soon she wil join ETF AS a Research specialist...

Ayesha(age=29)- Enquanter  specialist....Supper stylist and .... intelligent....


INDEX LINK-----

Chapter 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5165626?pn=5

Chapter 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5165626?pn=9

Chapter 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5165626?pn=12


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Posted: 3 years ago
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TEASER PART ONE


A man trying to sleep..but sleep are far away from his eyes. The haunting memory of his past was not leaving him along...

Roshaniiiiiii..!!!!!!

He opened his eyes, breathing heavily..his face covered with swept ...

He recognised the place, he was in his room...

He composed himself and take a cold bath because he have to meet the commissioner sir ,don't know why commissioner Sir called him today

In few hour later- Commissioner office

Jo aap chahte Hain Sir, vah Nahin hoga main is aadami ke sath Kam Nahin kar sakta, I am sorry sir 

Raghu(Commissioner): Relax Sameer rathore, main samajh sakta hun tumhare past Mein, kuchh issue rahe hain , per main team banana chahta hun, Ek  aisi team Jo jo City  Mein hone wale crime ko rok sake. mere upar  bahut pressure hai . City Mein crime badhate ja rahe hain aur Mujhe en crime ko rokana hai,

High command ka order hai mujhe ETF Ki Ek nai team banani hai...

Sameer- Main samajh sakta hun sir ,Per hum use aadami ki jagah Kisi Aur ko bhi le sakte hain....

Raghu-Sorry Sameer mere pass koi aur chara Nahin kyunki Jo dimag Arjun suryakant rawte ke pass hai ,

koi saboot na hone ke bad bhi vah kitni aasani se her case solve kar deta hai..

Ehsi kabiliyat Kisi ke pass Nahin, main Tumhare insult karna Nahin Chahta per yah sach hai aaj tak Arjun jaisa koi dusra inspector Nahin hua hai ,Tumhen apne past ko side mein rakhna hoga Main Chahta Hun ki Tum Arjun ke sath Ek nai team bnao..

Sameer-To fir aap Arjun ki gusse ko bhi acche se jante honge Sir ,Aap jante Hai Arjun kitna short-tempered hai ,aur uski vajah se uski team marte marte bachi thi..

Raghu- I know Sameer, isiliye main atf ka chief Tumhen banaya Puri team Tumhare undar hogi ,Arjun use team ka second cheif commandent hoga..

There conversation break.. when they hear a knock on the door

May I come in sir....

Ohh come my boy, Tumhara hai wait tha ..

A man wearing white shirt and black jeens enter in the cabin...

Arjun Surayakant rawte....

Arjun Ense milo.. Sameer...

Sameer ye Arjun....

Aaj se tum Sameer ke sath kaam karoge...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome teaser 

So much mystery 

Why commissioner introduced them to each other 

Don’t they know each other? I mean they were friends once... 

anyway it was great starting 

Continue soon 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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wow new ariya story 

hume koi problem nhi h di aap ek ya aur bhi ariya story likho hume ariya story se matlab hai jitani bhi mile kam 

per jaldi jaldi update dijiyega iska

aur pls perfact wedding ka update dijiyena phir se aapne likh liya ho to 

waiting for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Very interesting concept 

Plz continue 

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Nice cs. Awesome prolouge. Continue soon. Eagerly waiting

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interesting concept

loved it

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Nice teaser and cs eagerly waiting for update

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Awesome CS and prologue 

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Interesting concept 

Continue please