Akshan ff:part 1 updated

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It’s a super natural story 

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Akshan was in their room aj sleeping when he felt guddan is no where he search for her 

Aj:where is this girl yeh jalli girl ko Melba kithna mushkil hai poori duniya mei ise mei mila 

Aj search everywhere and back to his room he saw guddan there 

Aj:what hell kha thi tum bachpana ki bhi ek hard hai guddan mera sar khane mei tume maza kyun atha hai he fly guddan was look at him continuously 

Aj:what aide boot ki tharah kyun dek rahi hu hameesha kuch ulta bolthi thi ab kya 

Guddan:kyun ki aisa hu hu mei

Aj felt different in guddan behavior 

Aj:mathlab he try hold her hand but her eyes become red her all body change in to a naagin aj lost his balance he fell on bed 

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice teaser

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 1

Guddu:jindal sab kya hua apko ap kaise girgaya 

Aj look at her vo pehle jaisa hu hai kya mei sapna dekha par abhi tho 

Guddu:kya hua jindal saab 

Aj:kuch nahi sojauo 

After sometimes guddu smiles looking at her her eyes become read 

Oneday guddu in her room change in to her naagin get up saru saw this she screamed and faint everyone gathered in saru’s room saru got scared to see guddu she tell Durga Lakshmi but they did not believe her 

Saru was doing every possible things to make everyone believe guddan is not human a naagin but no one believe her aj have 4 brothers onday aj’s 1 brother died they don’t know how this happend dadi call a pandit he tell dadi that her family was caused by a naagin pandit sys naagin will be back for her revenge if they want protection do poor as soon they start pooka in jb saru was trying hard to tell guddan’s reality pandit saw guddan and unhe shak hotha hai vo guddan ki bal keechtha hai guddan ko patha nahi chaltha vo uske saath pooka kartha hai guddan feel restless and her body paining she is rolling from bed she in half naagin room aj was coming to room........

Will aj saw her??????

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice update

Love it

Continue soon