actually I felt bad for daksh as drishti is not even playing with him.but his anger is too much.sad that rakshit fought with daksh .though daksh didn't push drishti purposefully he should have showed concern towards her as she got hurt.rakshit consoling drishti was nice.vidya saying that drishti will love divya n divya will protect drishti was nice.
loved divya saving drishti from the boys instead of rakshit.rakshit consoling drishti was nice.daksh is still trying to impress drishti.oh.I support divya.drishti should not be a weak cry baby.she should fight back
Daksh needs to learn the right way to impress girls. So far he is following the wrong ones.
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Part 1
Fabulous Start
Part 4:
Drishti, Daksh and Dishi were in college.
Exams date is come inform Shikhar.
Oh great said Divya.
Great what great in it asked Drishti worried.
Oh ho Di don’t worry said Divya.
I am also worried said Daksh.
Hahaha this Daksh is worried whose fail all the time and became 25 years old still in college said one of boy and all boys start laughing.
Daksh hold his fist tight in anger.
Shup up guys said Shikhar to them.
Come on little boy always behind Divya said boys.
How dare u shout Divya.
Oh ho Divya got angry said them
Drishti hold Divya hand tightly.
Oh ho little Drishti baby got scared know she will start cry aww tease them.
Daksh got angry and hold one boy and punch him.
How dare u to talk about Drishti like this shout Daksh. He hit him badly.
They hit daksh and daksh start fighting with them.
Shikhar try to stop them they hit him.
He fall down Divya rush to him.
They badly start fighting.
Drishti try to stop them they push Drishti she about to fall but someone hold her.
She saw Rakshit and hide behind him.
Rakshit beat them and complain principle.
Rakshit hold daksh and make him stand.
Principle call everyone in office.
Drishti holding Divya hand.
What kind of behavior going on in college asked Principle?
All were silent.
Drishti u tell what happened asked principle as he knew Drishti always say truth.
Drishti told everything.
How dare u tease anyone like this shout principle to boys?
Daksh and boys will be rusticate from college whole month said principle.
Rakshit take Drishti dishi and daksh home.
He was damn angry on Daksh Behavior.
They reach home.
Why the hell Daksh u fight with them shout Rakshit.
And Shikhar you what was needed to fight asked Rakshit angrily.
But Bhaiya they talking about but to Divya and Drishti di said Shikhar.
Rakshit went angrily as he know Drishti affects from this.
Divya make Shikhar sit and bring first aid box.
Leave about Rakshit Bhaiya he will be ok said Divya consoling Shikhar.
She put cream on Shikhar wound.
Aaah its hurting said Shikhar like a baby.
Divya start laughing on him.
Bad girl Divya complain Shikhar.
Sorry sorry said Divya and continue to put bandage.
Daksh going to his home Drishti found his hand is bleeding.
Daksh call Drishti.
He turn around and look at her.
Drishti took first aid box and make him sit.
She put bandage on him.
Daksh look at her with so much love.
Know u feeling better asked Drishti.
Yes thank u said Daksh.
Drishti went to Rakshit.
Who standing angrily on balcony.
He feel someone put hand on his shoulder.
He found Drishti standing.
Leave na Rakshit I am fine said Drishti looking on his eyes.
Rakshit hug her tight.
If I don’t come on time I don’t know what madness they do said Rakshit.
U come right know leave and throw your anger said Drishti.
Ok for u I will throw my anger said Rakshit.
Drishti smile to him.
Divya bring Shikhar forcefully he was scared because of Rakshit anger.
Rakshit look at them.
Divya and Shikhar hold their ears and asked Sorry cutely.
Rakshit got smile and he hug Shikhar.
Divya hug Drishti.
All four hug each other.
Part 5:
Drikshit getting close to each other.
Daksh getting mad about Drishti.
Dishi nok jhok going on.
One day:
Drishti has some work about project.
She went to library.
Library were empty as she come to other campus.
She start reading related to her projects.
She didn’t realize time its get late.
College gets over.
Dishi went another college for some competition.
They told they will come directly home.
Rakshit told he will pick Drishti.
But he stuck with some work.
He calls Drishti.
Drishti I will get late can u wait for me asked Rakshit.
Its ok Rakshit I will go with my friend said Drishti.
Are you sure asked Rakshit.
Yes pakka said Drishti.
Ok when u reach home do msg me said Rakshit.
Okay said Drishti.
She cut the call and phone get off.
Shit battery low said Drishti.
She tries to open library door but it’s get locked.
She feel worried and shout for help.
but no one listen to her.
Whole college gets empty.
All lights went off.
Drishti get tears and start scaring.
Vidya and Divya waiting for Drishti.
Shikhar come to them.
Why u guys are tense asked Shikhar.
Shikhar Di didn’t reach yet said Divya worriedly.
I will asked Bhaiya said Shikhar.
Rakshit calls Divya that time.
He asked about Drishti.
She told Drishti didn’t reach.
Rakshit gets worried and went to search her.
Hope di its fine said Divya getting worried about her.
Shikhar hug her to console.
Vidya getting worried for Drishti so much.
Rakshit asked Drishti friends about her.
They told they didn’t saw Drishti middle of college after she went library inform one friend.
Rakshit rush college to find her.
He search Drishti in college.
Drishti crying badly holding her knees.
Drishti shout Rakshit.
Drishti hear Rakshit voice.
Rakshit shout Drishti.
Rakshit hear her voice and rush to it.
He asked watchman to open door.
He open door and Rakshit went inside found Drishti on floor.
Rakshit call Drishti in cry voice.
She run and hug her tight.
She start crying badly hugging him.
He caress her back and head.
Its ok Drishti relax I come right relax said Rakshit.
He take Drishti in car and give her water to drink.
He caress her head and he call Shikhar to inform Drishti find it.
He make Drishti sit properly and drive the car.
She hug him tight in car.
She was too scared.
They reach home.
He brings Drishti inside.
Drishti rush and hug Vidya.
She cuddling her tight.
My daughter is brave right relax said Vidya.
A while later.
Vidya make Drishti sleep.
Rakshit worried for her.
Daksh beating the boys who teased drishti was nice.Though possessive n dangerous I feel he really cares 4 drishti.Rakshit coming as a saviour was nice.dishi first aid scene was cute.daksh drishti first aid scene was romantic.drikshit hug was sweet.the last scene was nice
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