Behir FF - Nagina

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Character Sketch

Mahir - He is Madhvi's son and Abeer's brother

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Bela - She is an orphan with supernatural powers. She is originally a snake that can take any form.

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Meher - She is the family friend of the Malhotras. She is in love with Abeer but gets confused between the twins.

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Abeer - He is Madhvi's son, Mahir's brother, & Abeer's girlfriend

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Madhvi - Mom of Mahir & Abeer. She is a widow.

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Kuber - He is an evil tantrik

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Part 1

Part 2

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Wow

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Surprised to see Mehbeer.thank u very much 4 adding them.mehbeer n behir together in one ff is a treat.madhavi suits this sweet mother role more than sumitra.kuber is the best to play the villain

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Congrats on the FF! excellent cs

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Lovely CS dear

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Nice CS

Continue soon please 

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Part 1

Madhavi gets the phone call from Mahir. 

Madhavi: How are you?

Mahir: Mom, I am super fine. I have passed my exam with a first-class.

Madhavi: That's great.

Mahir: I am coming back to India.

Madhavi: That's great. I was missing you a lot.  My dream was to give you a quality education, which has got fulfilled.

Mahir: Bye mom.

Madhavi: Bye.


Madhavi then calls the decorators to decorate the house. Suddenly, she sees her two sons. She recollects the day when Abeer was taken away after she had delivered twins. It was tantrik named Kuber, who had taken him.

Meher's father named Shyam comes to see Madhavi.

Shyam: Why are tears falling from your eyes? Your son is coming.

Madhavi: It is tears of joy. But I miss my other son. I was being told that my other child died.

Shyam: You will get him back. But right now, you need to be content with what you have.

Madhavi: I cannot forget those days when Mahir began to have bad dreams after having got bitten by the snake. It was tantrik who gave him life. From then on, he began to scream in the middle of the night. We took him to many doctors. But it was of no use. Then one doctor suggested us to send him far away so he gets well. My husband decided to send him away. By God's grace, he recovered & completed his studies. Where is Meher?

Meher enters. She said, "I had decorated this place with roses. I think Abeer will come."

Madhavi: Yes, he is coming. He will be very happy to see the decorations made by a pretty girl like you.

Mahir comes. Madhavi is very happy. 

Madhavi: It's been a long time.

Mahir: Yes, but it was you who sent me abroad.

Meher & Shyam come there.

Madhavi: This is Shyam, your dad's close friend & business partner. After your dad died, he took care of the business & I joined as a partner. She is Meher.

Meher: Tomorrow is the annual day of our college. There is a singing competition.


She goes & prepares for the competition.

The next day, Meher meets Abeer.

Abeer: Best of luck.

Meher: I wish you the same.

Now, it is Abeer's turn. He sings the song:

Tum logon ki, iss duniya mein

Har kadam pe, insaan galat

Main sahi samaj ke jo bhi kahoon

Tum kehte ho galat, main galat hoon phir kaun sahi (phir kaun sahi)

Marzi se jeene ki bhi main

Kya tum sabko arzi doon

Matlab ki tum sabka mujhpe

Mujhse bhi zyada haq hai

Saadda haq, aithe rakh

Saadda haq, aithe rakh - 8 times

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Na na na...

Saadda haq, aithe rakh - 4 times

Hey inn gadaaron mein ya udhaaron mein

Tum mere jeenay ki aadat ka kyun gott rahe dum

Besaleeqa main, uss gali ka main

Na jis mein haya, na jis mein sharam

Mann bole ke ras mein jeenay ka harjaana duniya dushman

Sab begaana inhe aag lagaana

Mann bole mann bole, mann se jeena ya marr jaana

Saadda haq, aithe rakh - 8 times

Na na na...

O eco-friendly, nature ke rakshak, main bhi hoon nature

Rivaazon se, samaajhon se kyon

Tu kaate mujhe, kyun baante mujhse iss tarah

Kyun sach ka sabak sikhaaye, jab sach sunn bhi na paaye

Sach koi bole toh tu niyam kanoon bataaye

Tera darr, tera pyaar, teri waah, tu hi rakh (rakh saali)

Saadda Haq, aithe rakh - 4 times

Aithe aithe rakh

Saadda Haq, aithe rakh - 8 times


(Rockstar Movie)

Everyone gives a loud clap. Meher goes to the stage. She sings the song

kitne bhi tu kar le sitam

hans hans ke sahenge hum

ho kitne bhi tu kar le sitam

hans hans ke sahenge hum

ye pyar na hoga kam, sanam teri kasam

sanam teri kasam, sanam teri kasam

kitne bhi tu kar le sitam

hans hans ke sahenge hum

ye pyar na hoga kam, sanam teri kasam

ho sanam teri kasam, sanam teri kasam

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Meher imagines Abeer

mana ke khata meri hai, par itni saza na de tu

le paiya padu tere sajna, ab to gale lagale tu

ho mana ke khata meri hai, par itni saza na de tu

le paiya padu tere sajna, ab to gale lagale tu

tere dam se hai mera dam, sanam teri kasam

aaha sanam teri kasam, o sanam teri kasam

aise hi ruth ke mujhse, ab aur kaha jayega

aaho me asar hoga to, tu laut ke phir aayega

aise hi ruth ke mujhse, ab aur kaha jayega

aaho me asar hoga to, tu laut ke phir aayega

arey tu hai to kya hai gam, sanam teri kasam

aaha sanam teri kasam, ha ha sanam teri kasam

kitne bhi tu kar le sitam

hans hans ke sahenge hum

ho kitne bhi tu kar le sitam

hans hans ke sahenge hum

ye pyar na hoga kam, sanam teri kasam

sanam teri kasam, sanam teri kasam


Sanam Teri Kasam movie

After the competition, Abeer gets the best male singer award. Meher gets the female singer award. Both of them go home with the trophy. 

Abeer goes to Kuber. He shows him the trophy.

Kuber: Well done. But I want you to learn magical powers. I want you to become the most powerful person.

Abeer: When you are with me I am the most powerful person.

The next day

Meher meets Mahir & Madhavi. She said, "My classmate looks like Mahir. I think he is your lost son & brother."

Madhavi: I want to see him once. Please bring him here.

Meher: Sure

Madhavi: Go with Meher.

Mahir & Meher go together to the college to meet Abeer.

Edited by vatika_r - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congrats on the Behir FF

nice cs

update soon

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surprising that mahir is living abroad n is coming back.it's a phone call scene.but you have put the pic of madhavi n abeer together.please change it.shocking that mahir was bitten by a snake n after that he is always seeing bad dreams.I wonder why.shocking that mahir's twin abeer was stolen by the evil tantrik kuber.surprising that mahir's dad's friend's daughter is meher.in one scene you wrote meher saying to madhavi -  i think abeer is coming.it has to be mahir instead of abeer I guess.loved the singing competition of mehbeer.meher imagining to be with abeer was romantic.happy that mahir won.good that meher told madhavi n mahir about mahir's look alike abeer who could be madhavi's lost son.waiting for madhavi mahir abeer union.eagerly waiting for bela's entry.nice pics

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Nice start dear

Loved it