|Twisted Crooks| - PreRish OS (5 OCT) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Deliciously dark... Wicked.... Perfect for Rishabh but Prerna was a surprise... A grey Prerna is such a compliment to our RB.... Such a refreshing change to the show's sniveling Pre....loved the OS.... Outstanding work👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The last line stole it for me. This one was awesome. Awesome! The only problem here is that it's too good! Now, no matter how the track resolves, it cannot get better than this 😭😭😭.

Kudos to you, though. The idea was awesome. The choice of words perfect. And they're both the perfect amount of dark. Can we have more of these two? Please..🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Holy!! What a thrilling , sexy , twisted this OS was. This twisted prerna was so good to read, very much real compared to the mahaan-self showed in the serial.😆

Their love making was hot!! ☺️ and the final nail in the coffin, HE heard it all. Damn loved the ending! 👏 

Fantastically written, do write more such dark prerna stories! 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

 an interesting take on the story & very well written.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice one! 😆 But who wants to hear other people ravishing each other? 😆 Well, I couldn't relate much coz I can't understand the hatred dynamics, like you said it can't be justified. But I read it coz I like what you write. I implore you to upload your other story now! Dying to read what happens between them. 😈

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Awesome. Such a nice story of two twisted lover

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Uff! This was deliciously wicked. 

I love the twisted Prerna who placed her family and self respect before her “love”. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

I know I might sound like a twisted crook too but godthe story was so detectable and amazing.

I love dark Prerna and Rishabh😍😘😍😘