I also felt like it was an episode on the show. I could just imagine every scene and dialogue. Great job!
Please keep writing. Loved this to pieces!!
Thank you so much Jean! 🤗
I'm glad that the dialogues were well appreciated cuz I found those to be the hardest to write. Especially Hanuman Uncle's. 😵 I just hope I did some justice to it. 😆
I wrote one more piece yesterday. I wanted to get it out of the way before the episode aired since I hoped for things to go down in a different matter. If you have time, please do read it. 😳
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