AkshAn OS: Fikra

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Jindal House

After Antara's death anniversary pooja Guddan & the three daughter in law cleaned up all things. After clearing all things the daughter in law retires for the day. Few things were left which was done by Guddan but it was difficult for her as her hands were burned due to holding hot aarti.

G(in mind):Aree bapre haat jalne ki wajah se kitna late horaha hai..

It was already mid night when Guddan completed her work then she realized she haven't ate anything since morning. She looked at her hands.

G(in mind): Aree hum toh khaana khanai bhool gaye par iss hate se khane se phir haat dukhega.. kisiko bole khilane ko.. nehi sab thake hai.. koi baat nehi ekdin khane se hum mar nehi jayege.. sojate hai waise bhi kal subha subha mandir jana hai jaldi utna hai..

Putting food inside fridge she went to room. She entered the room slowly & saw Akshat was already sleeping on his side. She closed the door softly & sat sleep on her side of bed without changing in her night clothes.

G(in mind): Jindal Saab gehri neend mein hai awaz karenge toh phir gussa karengen.. arey bapre Dadi jo ointment diya tha woh lanahi bhool gaye.. khair hum aisehi sojate kal subha dekhlenge..

With that she laid on her side of bed. It was difficult for her to sleep due to her burned hands, uncomfortable clothes & without eating anything but somehow she felt asleep. It was around 2 A. M., when Akshat woke up to drink water & saw Guddan sleeping uncomfortably.

AJ(in mind): Guddan aise kyun sorahi hai woh bhi subha wale kapde pehen ke? Pagal ladki.

Akshat saw the water bottle empty so he got up & went to kitchen. As he opened the fridge for water he saw leftover food.

AJ(in mind): Yeh khaana kaise bacha hai.. kisne khana nehi khaya.

Akshat confused drank water & was leaving the kitchen when he saw a ointment on kitchen table. He picked up & saw it was a ointment for burns. He then remembered that how Guddan's hand got burned during pooja.

AJ(in mind):Iska matlab haat jalne ki wajah se na Guddan ne na subha se khana khaya aur nahi fresh huyi upar se ointment lagani bhi bhool gayi.. itna laa parwa kon hosakta hai.. meri bhi galati mein bhi kaise bhool gaya.. mere liya usne sab kiya aur.. kal subha uthke sabse pehle Guddan ko khaana khilayunga warna phir kal bhooki rahegi..

He took the ointment went to room & sat on his side & looked at Guddan. Few hair strands were falling on her face which was disturbing her sleep. He removed the hair strands & tucked behind her ear. He looked at her hands. He took her hands cautiously & started applying ointment making sure not to disturb her sleep.

AJ(in mind): Bewakoof ladki pehle haat jalati aur phir bina khaye sojati hai.. haar samay madat mangti phirti hai aur aaj dekho jab madat chahiye thi khaana khane ke liye chup chap ake sogayi.

He kept her hands on pillow carefully & covered her with blanket & laid on bed starting at her. He fell asleep staring at her.

Next Day

Guddan was the to wake up first. She saw that ointment was applied on her hands. She looked at Akshat & smiled.

G(in mind): Sayad Jindal Saab ne lagaya hoga. Sone dete hai thake hai.. aur hum mandir hoke ate hain.

Guddan got up & freshen up quickly & left for mandir. After sometime Akshat woke up & found room empty. He woke up & quickly freshen up & went downstairs. He searched for Guddan but she was nowhere. He saw his mother leaving, he stopped her.

AJ: Maa aap kahan jarahi hai aur baki sab kahan hai?

Da:Lalla main toh satsang mei jarahi hun aur baki gharwale laxmi bahu ke mayke gaye hai woh aaj uski behen Shweta ki shaadi hai na [Aur koi bahana nehi mila mujhe🤭🤭]

AJ:Aur Guddan kahan hai?

Da(smiling): Woh toh mandir gayi hai aajaygi thodi der mein.. tu nasta karle mein aati hun

Saying this Dadi left.

AJ:Kya zaroorat thi mandir jane ki

Temple

Guddan was praying in Krishna temple. The Pandit came near her with her pooja thal & gave it to her.

Pandit: Yeh lo beti Yeh pooja je phool piche nadi mein baha do tumhari har icha puri hogi.

Guddan nodded her head & went to towards the river behind the temple. As she was going she was feeling giddy & she holded her head.

G(in mind): Itna ajeeb kyu lagraha hai.

She managed to went near the river & started throwing the flowers. After throwing she turned around to leave but again she started feeling giddy & she fainted. She was about to fall in river but someone holded her by her hand & pulled her towards him/her. The person holded her by her waist. It was none other than Akshat. [Apko kya laga aur kon hosakta hai🤭🤭] Akshat patted on her face.

AJ: Guddan.. guddan

But Guddan was not responding. He picked her up in his arms & went to his car & left for home. While going he already called doctor. After reaching home, Akshat again picked Guddan in his arms & went to their room & laid her down on bed. The doctor also arrived within few minutes & checked Guddan.

Doc: Kal se sayad inhone khana nehi khaya hai isiliye blood pressure low hone ki wajah se behos hogayi hai darne ki koi baat nehi hai. Khaana khayegi aur main kuch dawayi likh deta hun woh de dijiyega thik hojayengi.

AJ: Thank you doctor.

The doctor left & Akshat sat beside Guddan & caressed her head lovingly.

AJ(in mind): Dusroki fikra karne ka waqt hai par apni nehi pata nehi yeh ladki kis mitti ki bani hai.

Akshat left the room to bring food for Guddan. After sometime Guddan woke up & sat with the support of headboard.

G:Hum ahan kaise agaye

AJ:Main leke aaya

Guddan looked towards Akshat who entered with a tray of food. He sat beside her & placed the tray on his lap.

AJ: Tum behos hogayi thi isliye. Waise tum behos kaise huyi?

Guddan looked at Akshat shocked & gulped down.

G(in mind):Agar kharus ko bataya ki kal se khana nehi khaya hai isiliye behos huyi thi toh gussa karenge

AJ: Kya hua batao

G: Woh woh Jindal Saab.. woh dhoop bohat tez thi na isilye..

She half-smiled. Akshat already knew she was lying but still he was taking her class.

AJ:Par Guddan aaj toh dhoop nikli hi nehi hai toh phir?

Guddan was shocked. Akshat was controlling his laughter.

AJ:Khair chodo khaana kha lo.

He took one morsel & brought towards her mouth.

G:Aap chodiye hum khalenge

AJ: Agar khaana hota kal raat ko hi nehi kha leti?

Guddan became embarrassed as her sin was caught & looked anywhere but him.

AJ:Yeh aakhen churane se tumhari chori chup nehi jayegi.

Guddan looked at him. She became red due to embarrassment.

AJ: Sabki fikra karne ke saath saath apni fikra karna bhi seekho.. jab haat se nehi kha sakti thi toh mujhe ya maa ko boldete koi khiladeta..

G: Hum jante hai par ab sab thake huye the toh..

AJ:Toh kya? Guddan kal sabse zyada kaam tumne kiya hai, thak humlg nehi tum zyada thi upar se khaana bhi nehi khaya aisa karogi toh kaise chalega tabiyat bigar jayegi..

G(holding ears): Acha gussa maat kijiye.. Sorry.. pls maaf kardijiye..

AJ(smiling): Thik hai par ek shart par abse saab ke saath saath apni fikra karna bhi seekho.. thik hai?

G(smiling):Thik hai.. abb pls hume khila dijiye bohat bhook lagi hai..

Akshat smiling started feeding her.

AJ(in mind): Mujhe pata hai ki tumhe itna samjhane ke baad bhi tum apni fikra nehi karogi par mein wada karta hun ki aaj se abhi tumhara dhaayan aur tumhari har pal fikra karunga.

His 'fikra' for her was only love in disguise which he doesn't realized till now.

The End

Sorry for grammatical mistakes. Hope you guys like it.

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