An Akshan OS - Engagement Ring💏💍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi guys it's another rendom os...yeh os ka current track see koi Lena Dena nahi hai....apne apne Dil aur dimag ko shan't karne k liye plz read this OS and give your honest feedback....so guys enjoy and happy reading

Akshat:-Guddan... guddan....Jao aur jaldi Jakar ready ho Jao....10baje Tak ka time hai tumhare pass go and get ready fast... Your time starts now.. its 9:45! I won't tolerate your lateness.. Is that clear ? Okay! go....

Guddan:-(confused) are par hum ja kaha rahe he uncle?? Aur aap aise kaise achanak se Hume bol rahe he?? Aur taiyar ho k kaun jata he raat k 10baje??hum pahele he Bata rahe he uncle Hume kaha lekar ja rahe he aap....

Akshat:- mene kaha jakar taiyar ho Jao guddan q betuke sawal puchna Kar wqt barbad kar rahi ho??Jao abhi k abhi...GO! RIGHT NOW! He said firmly....

Without uttering any more words guddan rushed to her room and wore a beautiful pink crop top with white full skirt.....and she come to Hall hurriedly....

Guddan:- (mind talk)are hum to aa Gaye par yeh uncle aaj achanak hum par maherbaan kaise ho Gaye?? Aur lekar ja kaha rahe he...abhi abhi to thoda sidhe muh baat karne lage he...aur aaj achanakse order Kar Diya...khadus k khadus he rahenge...jab dekho tab kuch na kuch ajibo garib harkate chalti he rehti he unk dimag me....hum Bata rahe guddan Jara sambhal k rahena...mithi churi ban k kahi tumhara is gharse patta he na kaat de....ha yahi ho sakta he guddan sambhal k rehna...aur phn me recharge he na Tere dekh le ..kabhi b jarurat pad sakti he...

As she got into the car and Akshat started to drive towards an unknown destination for her.. On the way, the surrounding looked unfamiliar to her.There were dense forests and there was barely any vehicle on the road.. She felt waves of nervousness washing over her as the car went on and on.. 

She gathered the courage and asked him...

Guddan:- Kya ab aap Hume batayege ki hum kaha ja rahe he??kahi Hume maarne ka irada to nahi hai na uncle???

Seeing him calm and not responding to her Guddan soon decided to shut her mouth as Akshat was anyway neither reacte nor reply to her questions.....All kinds of things were happening in her mind. She was thinking that the reason behind Akshat's calmness was maybe due to the plan of killing her; maybe he was thinking about the way her life should end.. Typical Guddan....

Some 30 minutes later, they reached a huge of house which looked like a palace. It was so beautiful outside.. so well-decorated..there was a big pool which was in front of the huge mountain yes.. it was his farmhouse Guddan read as she and Akshat entered though the main gate.... Jindal's Villa...

Guddan:- (shocked).Hey bhagawan...kahi hum sapna to nahi dekh rahe he na Uncle....aap khud Hume yaha lekar aye hai?? Aaj Tak aap kisiko b yaha nahi laye...pr hume lekar aye?? Lekin q?? Hum to soch rahe the k aap Hume maarne wale the ya fir shayad Hume gharse nikal denge...par aap to Hume yaha lekar aye....Hume lakshmibahu ne be kaha tha ki yeh jagah pure Indore ki sabse khubSurat jagah he.... 

Akshat:- tum koi sapna nahi dekh rahi ho guddan...yeh Sab such hai...you're not dreaming guddan...ek khas wajah he tumhe yaha lane ki Jo tum kuch he der main jaan jaogi...yeh lady he na inke sath jao she'll guide you....hum thodi der main milte hai....

Guddan did what she was told and followed the woman.. She soon found herself in a room.. a room which looked like a couple's. Her confusion grew. She couldn't figure out what was happening.. The only way for her questions to be answered was by talking to her uncle....

The woman then gave her a long red evening dress.....She was instructed to wear it and she did so....The woman then guided her towards a staircase which apparently led to a balcony. She gracefully climbed up the stairs and soon found herself in a spacious place which was decorated with red petals of roses.. red and white balloons were flying about everywhere. The place looked so romantic,and the view..so splendid..There was a table for 2 in the middle..She was like floating on the clouds.. She was feeling happy.. She didn't even know why..On the table there was a Note which was addressed to her.....

She opened it and started to read:-

Guddan...
Yeh Sab Jo tum dekh rahi ho na apne aas-pass wo Sab sirf aur sirf tumhare liye he....ha I've made all the arrangement for this.. I know tum confuse ho rahi hogi k yeh Sab mene q kiya??aur yeh janane k liye tumhe aur thodasa intzaar karna padega..... Till then make yourself comfortable...and don't worry main tumhe maarne Wala nahi huπŸ˜‰
From:- your uncle Akshat

Guddan then sat down.. She started to think that maybe uncle was in love with her.. maybe he was going to confess his love for her to her.. but then the thought of the khadus akshat Jindal and his undieing love for his late wife...Some minutes later, Akshat made his apparition.. He was wearing a red shirt and a pair of black jeans... seeing him in colour full clothes guddan was so shocked...

Guddan:-are baapre guddan uncle ko dekh Kya handsome lag rahe he ..aur yeh laal rang to inper kitna suit karta hai...nazar na lage humare hoty uncle ko....she was murmuring to herself...

as Akshat slowly walked towards her....guddan felt shy. She didn't know what to do....where to escape....and how..In the end, she could only sit there, staring at the table..Her cheeks were burning at the realisation of Akshat's constant stare at her...Reaching near her, Akshat took her delicate hand in his and asked her....

Akshat:- Will you dance with me mrs.guddan akshat Jindal??

After about 5 seconds, guddan reacted to his request. She got up and holding on to akshat's hand, and Akshat holding her waist.. they both danced.. engulfed.. in their own world.. as the music played on and on..the dance was magical and akshat was making guddan more nurvous with his touches and romantic dancing poses...the butterflies were already doing bhangra in guddan's stomach..she becomes to shy...After the dance, they sat down to have something.....after finishing the food....

Akshat knelt down on his knees in front of Guddan....holding a diamond ring in his hand and said...

Akshat:-So Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal will you accept me your husband for the rest of your life?? Main janta hu guddan ki tum soch rahi hogi k yeh achanak tumhare uncle pati ko Kya ho Gaya he...but tumne tumhare is khadus uncle pati ko badal Diya he...mujhe hasna sikhaya he tumne...mujhe jina sikhaya hai tumne...tumhari fikar karte karte na Jane kabse tumse pyar Kar betha...aur aaj Tak main yahi samjhta tha k antra ki jagah kisiko nahi dunga par aaj ehsas ho Raha he k antra ki jagah to tumne kabhi chahi nahi tumne to apni khudki ek alag jagah banai he mere Dil me..to Kya tum mujhe aur humare is rishte ko ek mauka dogi guddan???

Guddan who also was secretly in love with Akshat, did not agree immediately. She was in State of shock how her uncle achanak maherbaan ho Gaye uspar...she was so numb to respond... She stood there like a statue, with her mouth wide open in shock. She was speechless to see Akshat's sudden change.

After some minutes, she said Yes...hesitantly......
But.. something was bothering her.. if uncle really loved her.. then why was he always rude to her..? why.. ? she thought...she wanted an answer to her question..

Guddan:-ummm....Uncle Kya aap such main humse pyar karte hai??par q?? Kaise???

Akshat:-yeh sawal tum apne aapse pucho guddan?? K main q tumse pyar karta hu?

Guddan:- nahi Hume nahi pata aap he bataiye?? Aur yeh b bataiye k agar pyar karte he to humesha khaduspana q dikhate he?? Aise jatata he koi pyar??humesha gussa karte rehte he...na Hume kuch bolne dete he na humari sunte he...aur attitude to aapka humesha naak PR he rehta he khadus kahi k???She was going on and on...

Seeing her continuesly chattering akshat grab her by waist and just kissed her on her lips...with sudden kiss she became still and akshat taking a chance bite her lower lips..she winched in pain and moan talking the opportunity akshat kiss her whole heartedly he was realishing her flavour after sometime guddan to started responding back...guddan hold his head to give him more access.akshat deepen the kiss...after sometime both parted due to lack of oxigen....realising wat just happened guddan become to Shy and run to window...she was painting heavily...her backlace back was facing akshat....akshat come to her and back hug her resting his head on her shoulder holding her waist he said to her huskily....

Akshat:guddan....ab kabhi firse badbad Kari na to aise he chup karaunga main tumhe samjhi....suno guddan tum Meri Zindagi ki roshni ho...Meri black and white Zindagi me aya hua rango ka tufan ho tum...jhalli ho par Meri ho....aur kehte na jisse hum pyar karte he haq b usi PE jatate he aur gussa b usi par karte hai??to yahi he Mera pyar karne ka tarika Kya tumhe manjoor he???

Nodding her head in positive guddan hugged him tightly....after sometime Aj hold her chin and make her look to him ...to lighten the mood he said...

Akshat:-waise guddan jab tum gussa hoti ho to badi he cute lagti ho...tumhari yeh chotisi naak laal ho jati he to kitni pyari lagti ho tum...he said with a teasing smile.  

Guddan:- haawww Kya uncle aap b....jaiye Hum nahi karte aapse pyar she said pouted

Akshat:-but I love you, my love! Akshat said, laughing heartily.

Guddan:Angry Bye! Hum jaa rahe hai... an angry guddan said....

But when she was about to leave, Akshat grabbed her hand and pulled her in his direction. Their faces were now facing each other. Akshat gave her quick kiss on the cheek and and started crassing her back sensually....a shiver run down to her spine...seeing the perfect effect akshat told her...

Akshat: Ab tum ja sakti ho Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal....LOL 

That kiss was magical..and the proximity was killing her....It turned her anger into softness.. She wanted to stay but her ego wasn't letting her do so..but at last she finally gave up...

She hugged Akshat tightly and finally confessed 

Guddan:- I love You too Uncle HeartBlushing "

Akshat:- Ah! finally!.. Aww.. I love you more, beautiful! Heart but abhi b uncle?? Call me Akshat he replied her huskily kissing her earlobe... 

Guddan:- unc.... Akshat she moaned his name....

Akshat just again kiss her with whole passion and Due to this guddan become too shy she hide her self in his chest....They finally confessed.. after sometime she come out of hug...and Akshat put the ring around her finger. Guddan became emotional. She was on cloud nine, so was Akshat. And everything ended well...they were a single soul dwelling in two bodies.....

Ok guys so this little os to make my mind calm after seeing bhayankar promo of akshat removing ring from guddan's hand it's so heart wrenching....and yes is situation ka current story se ki Lena Dena nahi hai....

Ps:- ignore the typos guys....

Lots of love and positivity.....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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