I am confused , whom did Raman see Shagun ya Ishita...
I am confused , whom did Raman see Shagun ya Ishita...
Intriguing update...
Seems like Shagun pretended to be happy to marry Raman so she could have some wealth to start a life with Param...
Raman was happy thinking he would be settled in life but everything was shattered after Shagun’s betrayal ...
Raman didn’t get a chance to analyse his feelings for Shagun well as the marriage was fixed in a hurry..
Why I feel that Raman heard Ishita’s voice and fell in love with it but mistook Shagun as the owner of the voice...
So did Raman get married to Ishita who is Shagun’s sister.???.
Please update soon...
Thank you...
Very very interesting
Just curious to where is ishita
It's awesome
Please update next part soon
Thank you so much for the new story
Congratulations on your new story
the title is Excellent
and I'm sure you have planned a Mind Blowing story
Prologue is Intriguing
Yes love is somewhat unpredictable one can never truly know or be guaranteed that
they will get their love reciprocated in the same way
I'm totally looking forward to reading this story
Nice😃
There are two 'she' in this chapter. But it is very easy to differentiate, which 'she' refers to Shagun, and which 'she' refers to Ishita. That was really interesting 👏. His side of kahani has only Shagun in major part, Ishita is very little, almost invisible, but yet he was attracted to her, first, and he doesn't know that. Looks like he married Ishita, and doesn't give a damn to her😒.
I'm in😎
With 'Dil ki Chahat', the very fisrt line of the story itself has triggered some memories in me
"I wish I could be a better me, for you..."
And as the story progressed, it only turned out to be more relatable and thus I react very strongly to the turns in the story, more than applauding your writing. I am sorry for that. You have managed to indulge life in 'Dil ki Chahat', that it managed to touch my heart, and I react as if it's happening for real. All credit to you though👏. I could see 'other' people in Raman and Ishita, and that always managed to bring tears.
With this story, I read the title as 'Humari aduri kahani', was too occupied to even notice 'meri' aduri kahani. I would have not dared to read even if it's 'humari aduri kahani'. You're an awesome writer, how can I ignore your works? This sounds pretty interesting and I will enjoy it happily like I have enjoyed 'Humk pyaar hua'😄
Awesome story
Amazing update
Raman heard a girl singing he was lost in her beautiful voice nani caught him he was caught many time nani called iyers and fixed raman and shaguns marraige raman was happy as he was going to settle down in life shagun was greedy poor raman shagun eloped with her boyfriend on the day of marraige in starting with ur description on girl i thought she is ishita but when story started proceeding i realized she is not ishita as she will never do that
Pls update soon
Mind blowing start
What a twist at end
Cant wait to read next part
Plzzz update soooon
A beautiful start to a beautiful story
Wow what an Intriguing Start
Raman though a gangster seems to love the people of his village
it also seem to be that he led a lonely life always drinking before sleep takes over
until one evening he heard the most beautiful voice and finding the face too to be
beautiful , Raman fell for the lady and his Naani too encouraged the alliance
at this point I was thinking about Ishita but thankfully its Shagun
so she seems to love material objects much
she choose everything heavy and beautiful for her supposed wedding
and Raman was happy that he could shower her with these gifts to make
her happy to bring happiness in her eyes
only to be deceived by her as she elopes with her lover Param on the day of the wedding
and does she return six months later calling Raman as Saheb , did something happen to her
now I'm waiting to see what will happen , what will Raman do now
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