DrikShit - ShiVya Short Stories Corner pg1 15/7/19

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Hello all😊! This is Aaliya and I love writing stories. I thought to write short stories rather than long FFs which would make me confuse about the future track as I am a weak and boring writer!🤢

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Page 1(Drikshit): More Than Liking

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NOTE:DRIKSHIT SS.

MORE THAN LIKING

"Di.....di....kahan mar gayi Yeh di!! Di.."shouts out divya in search of Drishti in the whole mansion. 

"Haan....haan...bol kya hua? Tabse chila rahi hai"appears drishti.

"Di ...apko pata bhi hai ki rakshit ka accident hogaya hai?"

"Kya!!!???......"panicked drishti 

"Yes di..chalo stop panicking and I think hame jaldi city hospital jana chahiye"

"Sahi kaha tune divi...chal chalte hai drishti  rushes towards the main door. She finds divya still standing there and not moving. She goes near her and pinches her and asks what for she was waiting and not moving. To her amusement, divya turns into Pishachini

P:Hahahahah!!! Chidiya...pash gayi nah Sachini ke jaal me!! 

D: tum tum....yahan....batao mujhe kahan hai rakshit sir..aur baki sab gharwale.

P:saare gharwalon ko yahi trick istamal karke bhag diya...

D: kya chahti ho tum?huh! 

P: hey saitan!! Kya karun me in bewakoof behno ka!!

D: feels stupid.

P: arey pagal aurat mujhe kaalvijay ratn chahiye!! KAAL VIJAY RATAN!!

D: bhul jao!!kyunki woh to tumhe milne se raha...mera bas Chale toh me prem ratan dhan payo movie tak tumhe dekhne nah du..

Lavanya comes and stands behind drishti and stabs her with a knife. Drishti moans in pain. She falls on the ground.

Pishachini and Lavanya give a high figh to each other. They leave the place. Rakshit enters the house with all other family members and gets astonished to find drishti on the ground with a knife stabbed on her stomach. 

He gets restless. He picks her up and rushes to hospital. 

In hospital, 

The doctors advise for operation. Rakshit falls on his knees and begs them to save drishti. He starts shedding tears. 

After 1-2 hours doctors come out of the operation theater.

R:doctor....how is my drishti? Is she fine?? Can I meet her?pls boliye

D: yes doctor,meri di kaisi hai...(shekhar consoles a crying divya.)

Do:don't worry woh thik hai bas inner bleeding zyada hui hai. Fortunately unka blood group ka blood ha mare blood bank tha. Ap sab unse  mil sakte hai.(the doctor goes away.)

D: rakshit I think tumhe pehle mil lena chahiye.

Rakshit enters the cabin. His eyes can't stop shedding tears as he sees drishti sleeping on the hospital bed....yes it was...HOSPITAL and she was INJURED!!!!

R: drishti... (he caresses her hairs.)

Drishti turns to him and smiles.

D: rak...shit...Sir  (she says with pain.)

R: tumhe kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi hai. Tumhe pata hai me kitna dar gaya tha...

D: acha...bol..liye nah..

R: kya???

D: jo main..sun..nah chahti..hun..ki Ap...mujhe pasand karte hai...aur us Lavanya...ko nahi.

R: (thinks)ab toh mujhe tum pasand hi nahi drishti..mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya. I LOVE YOU!!!YES...I LOVE YOU!

D: keeps smiling looking at him.

R: tum Nahi samjhogi What I Feel For You...kyunki..It's more than liking.

He goes away saying this. He was just about step out when he hears..

D: pyaar??!!!

Rakshit smiles and gets out. Drishti smiles and feels special.

Edited by Draconian - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Next update on ShiVya😊..

ShiVya story on the way😎

Thanks all in advance😃 hope I don't bore you all to that limit that you won't read 🤣

Ignore my silly typo mistakes....as I know you will find a numerous ones!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice start

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Draconian

Next update on ShiVya😊..

ShiVya story on the way😎

Thanks all in advance😃 hope I don't bore you all to that limit that you won't read 🤣

Ignore my silly typo mistakes....as I know you will find a numerous ones!

Waiting for Shivya. Jealous Shikhar is a treat to watch, I liked his consoling scene during dinner time. How intimate it was.. 

Coming to DhrikShit scene, it was good. Pyaar ka izhaar ho gaya.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Waiting for shivya story.. Please show jealous shikhar somehow..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome updt❤️

Loved it❤️

Lava hit Dri wid knife😡But Rakshit confessed Dri☺️