MishBir One Shot: It's Positive - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Mii5

I could imagine Mishbir in this.... You write well. Thank you for this beautiful OS. Hoping to read more from you..

Thank you. That's a complement. I guess, you will get to read more soon. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Haha! That was so cute! Mishbir stepping into the next journey of marital bliss! Aah! I could literally imagine Shaheer and Rhea's face while reading this. Although Rhea is such a cutie looking like a kid herself, I could totally see her behave this way when the pregnancy angle comes in the plot. You have written it so well! Would love to read more!

Thank you! Well, yes, Rhea herself looks like a kid but I believe she can nail it. Hopefully, I will write more. 😂

Thanks again. :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShenzK

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Wow...2nd OS... Congratulations....

It's such a nice feeling to even visualize the scene. Show mei toh abhi confession bhi nahi hua.😆

Keep writing such happy OS. 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is beautiful. Amazing stuff right here. 

. It's moments like these that make a pc pleasurable to read....  And it's so tough to write the tenderness, the anticipation Nd the sheer joy in this scenario, but you did just that. 

Awesome! 

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jayati321

Wow...2nd OS... Congratulations....

It's such a nice feeling to even visualize the scene. Show mei toh abhi confession bhi nahi hua.😆

Keep writing such happy OS. 👍🏼

Thank you! Isn't that the reason why we have Fan-fictions? To fullfil our greed for plots we might not get in the show. At least not in the near future. 

I will. By the way, what if the stories don't always happen to be happy ones? 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: mridhu

This is beautiful. Amazing stuff right here. 

. It's moments like these that make a pc pleasurable to read....  And it's so tough to write the tenderness, the anticipation Nd the sheer joy in this scenario, but you did just that. 

Awesome! 

Thank you! It's a huge complement coming from you. :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dotslover22

Lovely❤️❤️❤️

Thank you! 

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome !!  Their emotions are so intricately and thoughtfully penned .. thank you 🙏 

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wowwww...so sweet !

Don't know when this moment will come in the serial

But we got to have a glimpse of it through you ..thanks💕