PreRish SS ~Na Tum Jano Na Hum ~(Writer's Note,Page-13) - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Jodha_Rani

 Haye. . Apne #prerish 

Future mein unki koi acchi close up scenes de do plz

hhaha ok , i will try my best .. anyway will update today hopefully ..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome!

Precap is so thrilling. Please update the next part.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Pehle likhne toh de..

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Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Awesome!

Precap is so thrilling. Please update the next part.

yah hopefully , i will update tonight 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm sorry guys..could not update today due to the electricity problem in my society... Hopefully all will b ok tomorrow n I could update Insha'Allah ...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome update 

Cont. super soon please 

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Posted: 4 years ago
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very interesting story line..Prerna is getting shocks over shocks with Bajaj's revelations and from the precap it seems like Rishabh is all set to give Prerna more shocking surprises...well written updates.. continue soon..

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Awesome update 

Cont. super soon please 

Thank you dear Already updated part 3

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very interesting story line..Prerna is getting shocks over shocks with Bajaj's revelations and from the precap it seems like Rishabh is all set to give Prerna more shocking surprises...well written updates.. continue soon..

Than you so much dear.. just now have updated .. check it..

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Part- 3




Prena felt restless –“Boliye MR bajaj . aise chup mat rahiye for God sake. “

Bajaj kept silence n looked Intensely towards prerna - “Last year Sneha’s Heart surgeon suggested me to complete the heart transplantation process within 1 year. In between she would be more sicker day by day.  as Sneha’s blood group is O negative. we need a heart Donar of O- holder only . unfortunately it is very much rare. but somehow we managed a donar through my office stuff. 

Prerna gave a little sigh of relief and continued- " kaun hai woh?"

Bajaj replied - "My Malabar factory manager Mr Rajesh Agarwal’s father . his father was suffering in Brain Cancer , n doc ke according uske pass 3 months se jeyada time nei tha. Jab donar searching news office mai aye, Rajesh’s family samne ake mujhe uske father ke bare mai inform kia. At first I completely denied,kyuki mere beti ke jindegi bachane ke liye kisi aur ki maut ka din mai nehi count kar sakta. But when i saw his family was running on Huge financial crisis , could not provide proper treatment to Mr agarwal , then i decided to bear all the fiancial expenses of diagnosis. In between i had a verbal agreement with Rajesh's family about this matter. "

Mr bajaj stopped for a moment ,  took a sip of drink n started-  "uske badd mai unke akheri lamho ko painless bananke liye  har ek facilities diye hai. Trust me prerna I never ever wished to hear his death news despite my daughter was in danger , u know i have tried my best to arrange everything to make his last breath happier. And his treatment details i monitored personally.I assured the best diagnosis for improving his health condition . "

Prerna – "iyea apne bohot accha kia MR bajaj .  bhaise apke pass ek dil bhi hai aj mujhe pehli bar pata chali" .(in taunting tone)

Bajaj smirked sadly- " mere pass bhi dil hai tum logoki  tarahi , i am not heartless completely .basss mai iska sunta kam hu "

Prerna (slightly smiled mockingly )- "accha woh toh dikhi raha hai . pher ?"

Bajaj repeated - "on beside i searched new donor in every where like a mad. But unfortunately i could not manage a single one  . mai apni puri takat , sab kuch laga diya phir bhi i cant  bring a new life for my daughter. After exact 3 months later Mr Agarwal could not survive any more as per doc's prediction . as he was on his last stage. he died on last night, now as per contract his family  bounded to give the dead body to my Team after the demise .But his family has back off on last moment n now r refusing to be co operative. n For the first time i trusted someone in entire my life where i refused to do legal agreement .cos my moral was not permitted me to do that time... more than trust i actually dint think to be cheated like this where a little life was involved."


Prerna got surprise and asked in angry tone – "what ? How could they decline the contract like this? ?ek choti bacchi kay jindegi ki sawal hai.  Ok i could un derstand woh log unke apne ko khoya hai . it is not easy to be normal , but phirbhi morality nam ki koi chis toh hai . Then why are u still now here ? Why r u  not taking any action against them ?"

 Bajaj  sadly said  - "prerna mai ek ghatiya insaan hu , but itna bhi nehi . they just lost their father,now how could I put pressure on them in this situation . But it is also the true, sneha ke pass ab jeyada time bhi nehi bache. She is getting so weak and sick day by day. aur apne akho ke samne mai is tarah apne beti ko aisi  halat pe nei dekh sakti aur. Woh mar rahi hai prerna . mai apni sare doulat lutake  bhi kuch nei kar pa raha hu.ab tumhi bolo mere jaise bad nasib bap aur kaha hai. "

Bajaj was literally crying n bent down infront of prerna on floor. . Seeing his helpless situation prerna could not control herself . ran towards him and hugged tightly . and somehow she felt him so much now , that person whom she once hated most,  today she was introduced herself with a New sensitive person. who has strong moral ethics and value more than anyone .Somehow from her hidden mind she felt so much proud for him, but she could not watch his devastating situation right now.

Prerna (in emotional voice and gripped bajaj’s hand)- "Mr bajaj , ap pls shant ho jaiye pehle. kuch nei hogi sneha ko .hamare beti jaldi hi thik ho jayegi. ap pher unlogoko dubara req kia or mana ne kay koshish ki ?"

 Bajaj sat on same position and in teary tone -" ha prerna bohot koshish kia. mai unlogoko apne sare doulat , business bhi dene ke liye tair tha, lekin woh log nei man raha hai . n u know what prerna abhi mujhe clearly ahesas hua hai that is clearly my karma . aj India ki sabse bara business man kitna majbur hai jo apne beti ko bacha nei pa raha….kyuki aj mere papo ki saja meri beti ko mil raha hai …..........." Mr bajaj screamed n started crying very badly . 


Prerna wiped his tear - "Mr bajaj , be patient. sneha ko kuch nei hogi , maine bola na ,. hum dono milke un logoko samjhayenge aur nei toh sneha ke liye nayi donar dhundenge jaldi . Sare dunia ek kar lenge . ap pehle shant ho jaye. Sneha bilkul thik ho jayegi , I promise "

Bajaj (devastating tone) – " sab kuch kaise hoga ? u know what prerna aj mai itna chota , itna lachar mehesus kar rahah hu , keya faida hua itne doulat kamake . mai apne beti koi thik nei kar paa raha hu. Prerna tum mujhe maf kardo . aj mujhe ehesas ho raha hai , mai kis tarah tumhara khusiya china .bhagwan mujhe ab usi kai natija dikha raha hai ."

Prerna replied -"Mr bajaj , ab iyea sab fujul kabat bandh kariye pls. purani  bat sochne ki waqt ab hai nehi hai  hamare pass. Aur iyea apke akele ke ladai nei hai , ab iyea meri bhi ladai hai . aur iyea kasauti ab hum sath milke par karenge , sneha ke liye.Hamare beti ke liye . aur mujhe apne mata rani pe pura bharasa hai , woh sneha ko jarur thik kar denge . koi na koi rasta hume mil jayenge"

Bajaj said - "nehi prerna , tum hamare liye bohot kuch kia inhi 4 maino mai , tum mujhe papa hone ka sahi maino mai ehesas dia, aur mere beti ka sath mere rista pakka kia ,iss makan ko ghar banaya . sneha ko apne ma ka peyar dia .. mai ab aur koi ehesan tumse nei le sakte. no need to finish your full life  with a failure person anymore. "

 Bajaj  Finally stood up and wiped his tears.Went back to his desk and put up the pen and keep signing something on a paper.And later returned  back to prerna with that. 

Bajaj finally took a deep breath and Started-  "prerna, Tum apne purane peyar bhari jindegi mai dubara bapas laut jao , apne khudke  jindegi jilo aur anurag ke sath khush raho .mai anurag aur mohini ji se bat kia suva, mafi manga hai unse ."

Prerna (in biggest shocked tone )- "laut jayo? Matlab? ap kehena keya chahte ho?Aur anurag , kaki ma se ap keya bat kia ? ap phirse meri jindegi ka faisla karoge ?"

 Bajaj (in frustrated tone) – "prerna , isbar mai jo bhi decision liya , woh bilkul sahi hai . aur iyea mere jindegi ka sabse best deal hai jo mai aj khatam karne ja raha hu . n first time kisi aur ke khusi ke liye .Take This , mai already sign kar dia. ab tum bhi sign karke mujhe bhej dena. i will submit that on court "


Bajaj  gave a legal document to prerna .prerna took it and started to read. N she could not believe  after watching this n screamed in surprised tone- " Divorcee letter ? MR bajaj apne mujhe divorce deneka faisla kar lia woh bhi mujhe bina bataye ? how could you ?"

Bajaj turned behind from prerna . A slight tear flowed from bajaj’s eye . but he controlled himself n said in a strong voice – " prerna mai jo kuch bhi kar raha hu wohi sabke liye accha hai . mai ekbar tumhare jindegi barbad kia aur aj uske karma mujhe mil bhi geya , abhi jeyada der nei hui. ab is barbadi ko mai sudharna chahta hu. koi toh accha kam karlu is jindegi mai , aur do peyar karne walon ko Milane se jeyada accha kam aur kuch bhi nehi ho sakte iss dunia pe.. iyeahi mere papo ka praischit hai . prerna be happy always ,aur agar ho sake toh mujhe maf kardena aur iss 6 month ka dardnak jindegi ko bhul jana, mere karmo ke fal bhagwan mujhe de diya . ab sab kuch kho jane se pehle mujhe sab samitna hoga . I have called Mr basu already . He will reach in half an hour and will pick you with him . get ready to enter in your happy life again .jo tumhara thi , woh aj tumko bapas mil jayegi."

After watching bajaj’s straightforward steps, prerna lost her thoughts for sometimes , sat down on floor . She collected some sense she said in an angry tone- "Is this your final decision?"

 Bajaj still now hide his face from prerna n said- " ha prerna , iyea mere akheri faisla hai.der mat karo . MR basu ata hi hoga .I couldn't stay here right now. Mujhe Mr Rajesh ke house fires jana parega convince karneke liye. ek last time try karna chahta hu , kaise bhi karke. So I could not meet you during leaving. Aur ek last req thi tumse. pls jane se pehle sneha ko mat batana . mai kaise bhi karke badd mai usko samjha denge . I don’t want to put you in emotional trouble again . Khush raho prerna.Aur koi musibbat tumhare jindegi mai bapas nei ayega . All the very best to you n Mr Basu . Good bye."


Saying this MR bajaj started walking to the door and prerna turned behind. Both cried silently . while walking , Mr Bajaj turned again towards prerna for a once in last time, later return back again . same prerna  watched him and turned behind again . Both doing this turn in several times but could not make eye lock . Both wanted to see each other for last time but turning times dint match . later both wiped their final tears n left . 


In the mean time some one belled and It was Anurag on the door. Prerna opened the door . n suddenly grabbed  by Anu's Gesture forcefully . Prerna felt uneasy and tried to broke . But anu hugged her tightly n said - "Prerna I am so happy. Finally we will be together again. cant believe hamare jindegi kay kasauti khatam hone wale hai.  ab chale?"

 

Prerna looked back to Anu and moved her head-  "ha chalo . just give me sometimes pls , Mai apne kuch jaruri saman leke ati hu ."

Prerna left n went to her bedroom . 

 

 Precap – 

 Scene 1- Sneha is  on Hospital

 Seene 2-  bajaj is searching prerna here and there.

 


Edited by opsora2090 - 4 years ago