Ek Rishta..... Fan Fiction! - Page 2

ok guys here is the first part of my story...

U see a girl running down the collage campus she is wearing all a white churidaar... with white bangles and metal jumke she pushes someones room door open and stops at the door...
she is out of breath now...
And looks up at her Prithvi...

P: Kripa... and you can finally see her beautiful face with soft tears running down her cheeks...

P: Hi... prithvi dosent notice her tears...

K: Prithvi... kya yhe sach hai ki tum U.S.A. jaraha hoo...

P: Haan kripa mujhe Harvard main admission mil gyi hai..

K: Oh... 😕

P: Lakin dont worry... we will stay in touch... call and e-mail...

K: Oh ok...
Kripa is really sad...

K: Do u need help packing...

P: No i am fine....

K: Tumahari flight kab ki hai...

P: Aaj sham ki...

K: Oh ok...

P: Will u come with.....

Kripa smiles and yes ofcourse...

P: Ok then see u in the evening...

K: Prithvi i have to talk to u...

Prithvi stops packing and looks up... Kaho....

K: Prithvi we have been dating each other for the past 2 years now....

prithvi has a confused look on her face...

Kripa cont. en 2 saalo main i have known u alot better... and becasue we love each other...

Prithvi cuts in... wow wow wow... LOVE... i never said u loved u...

Kripa is really confused..
P: We are just going out... like good friends... i dont have time to love someone... my goals are too high to have space for a relationsip... i cant commit to anything rite now....

Kripa: Lakin prithvi...

Prithvi: Dekho kripa its only been 2 years...

Kripa: Only two years... prithvi 2 saal bauth hota hai...

P: Nahie kripa...

K: Tho tum kya chata hai...

P: Ok hum poora 4 months ka liya ek doosra ko bilkul contact nahie kara ga.. and then if we still feel for each other we will see...

K: Tumne kitni assani sa kadiya prithvi...

P: Dekho kripa u know that my carrer is very important for me...

K: Ya rite... and she just runs away... prithvi dosent even try stoping her...

a few minutes later prithvi's celll rings
P: Hello
K: Prithvi main shaam ko tumahara saath air port nahie aa sakthi...
P: Thats ok... kripa is surprised to hear this...
K: Ok then bye.. see u in 4 months..
P: Bye...
kripa puts the phone down and cries...

a few minutes later kripa's mom Naina comes in...
N: Kripa beta...
K: Yee mom...
N: Beta are u all rite...
K: Yes mom...
N: Beta mujhe ajj bauth important meeting par jaana hai i will be late tum khanna ka ka soo jana...
K: Ok mom...
Naina kisses kripa's forehead... bye bata...
K: Sadly.. Bye mom...

Ok thats the first part... u may not like this part but it will get better! 😉

gr8 but plz make it a little longer next time!!

 

good u broke kripa - prithvi now angad can come

plz cont

do it as fast as possible

waiting for it

lots of love

esha

aww poor Kripa.  Prithvi is quite mean yaar.  too practical

Nice!! Its really good...but pritvi..oh i cant belive his character..its soo not like him 😕 buts a change is cool too!
plz con. soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

btw i liked how u gave kripa's intro! i can imange her..she would look beautiful!!!!!! 😛 😛 Edited by jassi4armaan - 18 years ago

Continue or I will come to ur house tonight !! and I will eat all the food in your house !!😆

thanks

that was very very good

 

thanx...it wa sjust too good...

~sweta~

Originally posted by: JinK

Continue or I will come to ur house tonight !! and I will eat all the food in your house !!😆

u know i love that idea! that was i wont pig out tomm... now i am not cont untill tomm...

J/K i will cont really soon! I PROMIS!

😆For a moment I was like... Aren't you going for July 4 tomorrow? Then I got all confused... there are so many fanfics and so many writers😉